Sample Essays

Emma and Me! Course package
by EH
Ranked 7.84

The time was drawing closer to us. The new girl named Emma was coming to our classroom and everyone was jiggling in their seats. It was really hard to concentrate in our math lesson. I was grinning broadly because I c...

The helping change Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 7.38

Blake just sat there, letting his boredom guide his thoughts through whatever was available, other than the teacher rambling about something he already knew before he was born. He wondered why he was even going to sch...

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by JEN
Ranked 7.11

I was trudging down the rainy and cold streets when in the corner of my eye, I spotted a women in a dilapidated dress, but when I looked closer it looked like she was homeless. I also noticed that everyone was ignorin...

Goal Assist Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.5

I was so thrilled when I heard that I got into the interschool basketball team. My happiness brought me to the old green sport shed so I decided to check on who got into the netball team while I was there. As I looked...

When I helped someone Writing Club
by Anu
Ranked 6.43

It was a great day and the sun was out, shining more than ever. I was just strolling about, through the gardens of lush green lawn and tall majestic trees.lt was a sight. But sudden wailing broke the calm stillness an...

A Helping Hand Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.62

Though my brother has cerebral palsy, which is a disease that makes him unable to walk, he refuses to pull the white flag. He believes that all he needs is someone to help him reach his dream of walking. I decided tha...

helping an old man Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.53

John ran as fast as he could when the first drops of rain began splattering down on him. The drizzle quickly became a downpour. The rain was falling steadily and as John looked around desperately for shelter. spotting...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.0

As I walked down the path, with buildings either side of it, different notes, high and low filled my ears. The strums of the guitar were different every time, but in the end it all joined together to make a perfect li...

Sample essay for QUESTION 18 - When I helped someone by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 5.83

"Star Light star bright first star I see tonight I wish I may I wish I might..." May paused her chanting, she wasn't sure if she should say her wish out loud. She told herself it was nonsense that she was hesitating ...

When I Helped Someone Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 5.67

The year 6 boys were at it again. They would not stop! They kept coming and coming and coming. No matter what I did, no matter who I told they would always my poor friend, Patrick. These boys teased him mercilessl...

When I helped someone Writing Club Course package
by DRSEUSS1
Ranked 5.57

As she watched the city crumbling, the people fleeing, the hooded figures winning, she lost a little bit more hope. Hope for the city to stand up proud again, hope for the people to come back again, hope for the hoode...

Sample essay for QUESTION 18 - When I helped someone by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 5.5

The grainy beach sand seemingly shimmered in the soft moon glow.The girl shuffled along the bank digging her heels into the unconsolidated sand pausing momentarily to let out a sigh or mutter something along the lines...

When I Helped Someone Writing Club Free
by Shreya Rao
Ranked 5.33

Helping people is a sign to them to show you care. I am sure everyone has helped someone else at least once, as it is a common thing. Further on in this essay I will state various times when I have helped someone. ...

The Poor Family Writing Club
by JRRTolkien2
Ranked 5.33

Freya was standing in the field with her parents, ploughing desperately for the crops to grow. It hadn't rained for weeks, and the crops weren't growing. The family hadn't eaten for two days already, after they spent ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 18 - When I helped someone by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 5.0

Waves crashed brutally against my boat.A jagged lightening bolt split the sky. An icy cascade of rain left my body numb and weary.I madly looked for any sign of land but it was worthless nothing but endless sea crosse...

When I helped someone Writing Club Course package
by Sana
Ranked 4.83

Hey there! Right now you're reading the diary of Olivia Robinson, aka, ME! My story starts at school, 15th May. My friend, Andrea, asked me to help her with her maths. I, being me, said no thank you. then Andrea mu...

When I helped someone Course package
by Alice
Ranked 5.35

RRRRRRIIIIINNNNNNGGGGGGG!! The cool girls hurried to their seats but none of the students can pay attention to the teacher because they want to meet the new student straight away. Finally, I walked in and introduced m...

Cookies With Me Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 4.67

Once upon a time there lived the COOKIE MONSTER. The cookie monster loooooved cookies. He ate them every day for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. One day the cookie monster wanted to cook the cookies himself, but he didn...

The boy at the mall Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite2
Ranked 4.67

Once I was walking through the a particular shop I like in the mall while my mum and brother were doing back to school shopping. I thought I heard a boy sobbing and I was right, I found a boy; around five years old cr...

when I helped someone Writing Club
by JRRTolkien3
Ranked 4.67

We were in our classroom but suddenly a girl came in,she stammered a lot to the teacher and she kept tripping over because of her shoes and everyone bursted out laughing.The teacher shouted at everyone and her faced ...

When I Helped Someone Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 4.4

One evening I was walking down the misty, dirty street on a winters eve, there was something eerie about it - it just seemed to be too quiet.You must be going crazy I thought to myself, there was crunch of a leaf. I...

Good Things Come When You Help Someone Writing Club
by Cringe
Ranked 4.33

She walked beside her father, holding his hand and swinging it back and forth. They looked out the windows and saw the airplanes fly up and into the clouds. The girl watched her dad's eyeballs searching for something ...

Teaching Tables Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Ranked 4.33

Plan Intro: describing day, classroom, tables, and so on p1: does a spelling test and person next to him struggles p2: the class is doing multiplication test next, and before it happens and teaches person next to...

Writing Club
by EBWhite1
Ranked 4.33

The lights were flickering out slowly in the old,dirty corridor in the middle of the school.The steel lockers was a mess. The stone floor consisted of couple Of rock hard stones poking out because of the horrible qual...

When i helped someone Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 4.33

It was math class, and our teacher was teaching us BODMAS. She was writing numbers on the board and was applying different types of operations to them. I already knew BODMAS, so I was able to comprehend it w...

When I helped someone Course package
by mar
Ranked 4.85

My parents, friends and teachers have always said to be nice to everyone. Especially my grandmother, my grandmother helped anyone who was in need. " Think about others that need more than you do," she said. And so f...

Making Friends Course package
by helen
Ranked 4.17

The burning midday sun shone down on the school playground as lunchtime began. The children's joyful shrieks filled the air as they played their games. Our playground contained all the students in the school. There wa...

Lifesavers and bystander Writing Club Course package
by dk
Ranked 4.17

I just sat there confused. I wasn't sure if i should go up and help them or just stand by and watch as the whole plot unravels.Although i have not done anything bad today i had a tingling feeling , a bad one. I hadn't...

when I helped someone Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 4.17

she was looking around curiously sitting on the bench,next to the play ground.People walked straight past her not even asking what's wrong ? I watched her day by day still none talked to her at last I came up to her a...

Writing Club Course package
by Michelle
Ranked 4.0

I wake up. Heart racing, head pounding. Today is the day. The writers Festival. I think I have just set a record of chugging back my breakfast. Clothes slide on, and hair is combed. I jump on my bike and pedal fast....

When I helped an injured puppy. Writing Club Free
by Lucky
Ranked 4.0

I helped a poor puppy once.I was strolling down the newly paved footpath in the park once when I saw some big teenagers doing some hitting action.The teens look a bit like gangsters and they wore jeans and a black shi...

Sample essay for QUESTION 18 - When I helped someone by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.0

The small child felt her towards the court. She listened to the thudding of the ball and the encouragements of the teammates She sighed wistfully as steamy tears made their way down her pale cheeks.How she longed ...

When I helped someone Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 4.0

I was in the border of the wide open Savannah, in search of a tasty meal to devour. Then, something interrupted my hunt. A hunter climbed out of a car cumbersomely. The hunter got some baits and chucked them on the gr...

Help Was Badly Needed! Writing Club
by Kat
Ranked 3.67

Astonishing lemon coloured sunshine flew fast into my window as I got ready for school. It was a new day, and like my older brother predicted the clouds were as fluffy as cotton wool. I was quickly dressed and was out...

When I helped someone Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.67

Here I am listening to the most boring class at school, health. Miss Nice was teaching us about helping students or people that look like they need help or if they are asking for it. My friend Fred was almost like a b...

The swing accident Writing Club
by MEMFOX4
Ranked 3.67

One fine morning I was taking a walk in the park because I thought that it was a nice day. It was great. I was just walking to the swing, when I saw that there was a barbecue! I was delighted and the sausages tasted s...

Essay for writing club-week 1-Ethan Kuach Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Ranked 3.5

The ball flew through the air, coming at me but I stopped it with my gloves. The other team were tempted to win this match but every time they got past the defenses and tried to shoot I would still be the last line of...

Writing Club
by Raje
Ranked 3.33

“Ring Ring!”, the school lunch bell rang. “See you in the next lesson “said my English teacher, Miss Lisa”. I was so excited to go play with my friends. I rushed out to the playground, in search for my friends. As I ...

A Helpful Idea Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 3.33

I went to school like any other day. Nobody was excited but just the usual feelings as everyone headed off to their classes. During a long class lesson, everyone was told that a writing exam was going to commence in 3...

Bermuda triangle incident (narrative) Writing Club
by EBWhite3
Ranked 3.33

As the alarm, went I jumped from my seat at the sound of our commander speaking. “Another disappearance in the Bermuda triangle.” I thought about the disappearance of flight 19 and the 2 seaplanes that went to sear...

When I helped someone Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite4
Ranked 3.33

I walked out of my classroom thinking about what I was going to turn into as time went by, and if I would turn into a good person or a bad person. Well I really don’t think that I’ll ever find out because I never seem...

Mall Mayhem Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling2
Ranked 3.33

Today I got lost in the mall, I couldn’t understand the map I was given when I came in, and the crowd all around me didn’t help at all! This was not what I had expected! My friends and I were going to meet up, and go...

When I helped someone Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 3.33

I was wandering around the concrete crumbling under my shoes. I was blase to do anything. All of a sudden, a boy fell down on the rocks. From my point of view, the sharp rocks pierced his skin. I felt compunction for...

When I helped someone
by Karina Chung
Ranked 3.17

plot: How I helped Emma practice questions for the test coming up the next two weeks p1: Emma worrying that she won`t pass the math quiz the teacher setted up for the whole class p2: Emma`s teacher doing practices...

Course package
by Bhavi
Ranked 3.79

"Hey Bhavya why are you late today? questioned Bob. I promised the coach that you will get here on time and that you will be selected in the team". The reason I was late is because, as I was driving into the super mar...

When I Helped Someone Writing Club
by Briana Hautau
Ranked 3.0

When I helped someone, was in a cold gray night, who was sitting in the shadows, just waiting for warm light. I took of my coat , warm and soft, I gave it too him ,who had a slight cough. Then he embraced me and ...

Writing Club Course package
by Zayed
Ranked 2.83

As I was walking home from school I heard a groan and saw a kid lying in a puddle of water and blood. "Help me" he croaked before falling unconscious I looked around for a way to get him to the hospital quickly. T...

When I Helped Someone Writing Club
by AR BROS
Ranked 2.67

I exhaustedly walked out of the school gate after another long day of school. Mum wasn't going to pick me up today because she had to go to work. I told her that I would walk home. It wasn't far so she didn't really m...

Writing Club
by Caitlin
Ranked 2.33

The teacher walked into the classroom, he said, “Okay class, roll call.” “Bryan.” “Here.” “Katie.” I said “Here.” “Denise.” “......” “Denise.” “......” I realised that Denise must be late and I called to the ...

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by student
Ranked 1.0

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When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

When I awoke with a sudden call from my mum for going shopping, I groaned. I hated shopping because it was monotonous. All we really do is make a list of things we want and then go look for them. Sometimes, you expect...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

When I awoke with a sudden call from my mum for going shopping, I groaned. I hated shopping because it was monotonous, in other words, boring. All we really do is make a list of things we want and then go look for the...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

When I awoke with a sudden call from my mum for going shopping, I groaned. I hated shopping because it was monotonous, in other words, boring. All we really do is make a list of things we want and then go look for the...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

When I awoke with a sudden call from my mum for going shopping, I groaned. I hated shopping because it was monotonous, in other words, boring. All we really do is make a list of things we want and then go look for the...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

When I awoke with a sudden call from my mum for going shopping, I groaned. I hated shopping because it was monotonous, in other words, boring. All we really do is make a list of things we want and then go look for the...

When I Helped Someone Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

P1: Introduction- Me and my mum go shopping P2: Problem- I spot a poor family trying to buy some things with no money P3: Solution- I go to help him buy what he wants P4: Conclusion- We let him have dinner at our ...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

The bell rang as we slapped on our backpacks and we ran around playing games of all sorts; our school turned peoples faces from gloomy to smiling. I saw sparrows in the eating area providing perfection to the idyllic ...


by Bryan
Unranked

Our teacher told us that a new boy would arrive in our class the next day. I smiled and grinned broadly because I was imagining how I could help out the new boy and be friends with him. I slapped my bag on my back and...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The time was drawing closer to us. The new girl named Emma was coming to our classroom and everyone was jiggling in their seats. It was really hard to concentrate on our math lesson. I was grinning broadly because I c...

The Best Help I Have Ever Been. Course package
by S8G8
Unranked

A fresh layer of snow was falling onto the thick snow from previously when the snow fell. Melissa was in her room in the attic in her warm cosy bed whilst looking up to the window in the roof to watch the snow fall do...

The Project Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

"How are we going to escape?" whispered Jade frantically, peering over the table to look for Dr Vanns. I glanced at the only door out of the science room. Dr Vanns stood at the door, looking at his phone. He would def...

The Project Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a Thursday lunch when a small girl approached me asking for help. "Excuse me, could you please help me finish my science project?" the small girl asked. I groaned. Dr Vanns was the worst teacher ever. He would ...

When I helped someone
by Karina Chung
Unranked

plot: How I helped Emma practice questions for the test coming up the next two weeks p1: Emma worrying that she won`t pass the math quiz the teacher setted up for the whole class p2: Emma`s teacher doing practices...

When I helped someone
by Karina Chung
Unranked

plot: How I helped Emma practice questions for the test coming up the next two weeks p1: Emma worrying that she won`t pass the math quiz the teacher setted up for the whole class p2: Emma`s teacher doing practices...

When I helped someone
by Karina Chung
Unranked

plot: How I helped Emma practice questions for the test coming up the next two weeks p1: Emma worrying that she won`t pass the math quiz the teacher setted up for the whole class p2: Emma`s teacher doing practices ...

Saving Mr Ken Course package
by Utpreksh Sharma
Unranked

Jake ran for the injured Mr Ken. The hyenas were coming! Jake picked Mr Ken up and put him on his shoulders. He turned back and ran rapidly. Thud, thud, thud, Jake was sweating with extreme tension. He used every m...

When I helped someone Writing Club
by Raje
Unranked

“Ring Ring!”, the school lunch bell rang. “See you in the next lesson “said my English teacher, Miss Lisa”. I was so excited to go play with my friends. I rushed out to the playground, in search for my friends. As I ...

When I helped someone Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

I was at the playground at school in an intense game of tag. Tim stood above me on a pole. I ducked and leapt out of his clutches, barely escaping. I raced across the equipment in search of safety but all was visible...

The day I helped someone Course package
by Bahar Emami
Unranked

I happily walked down the road, as I do every morning. The breeze blew in my face, making my wisps of blonde hair fly all over the place. The birds sang their lovely morning song and I whistled along in harmony. I was...

LifeSavers and bystander Writing Club Course package
by dk
Unranked

I just sat there confused. I wasn't sure if i should go up and help them or just stand by and watch as the whole plot unravels.Although i have not done anything bad today i had a tingling feeling , a bad one. I hadn't...

Savers and bystanders Writing Club Course package
by dk
Unranked

I just sat there confused. I wasn't sure if i should go up and help them or just stand by and watch as the whole plot unravels…

Making Friends Course package
by helen
Unranked

The burning midday sun shone down on the school playground as lunchtime began. The children's joyful shrieks filled the air as they played their games. Our playground contained all the students in the school. There wa...

When I helped someone (intro and first paragraph) Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

At school the worst thing happened. It started of at lunch when a kid was running like Usain Bolt in the hallway and then "CRASH." He fell down, just then the playtime bell rang and everyone rushed of outside;everyon...

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by Exam Success
Unranked

This is the body of an essay. This is the body of an essay. This is the body of an essay. This is the body of an essay.…

When I Helped Someone by: Briana hautau Writing Club
by Briana Hautau
Unranked

When I helped someone, was in a cold gray night, who was sitting in the shadows, just waiting for warm light. I took of my coat , warm and soft, I gave it too him ,who had a slight cough. Then he embraced me and ...

When I helped someone Writing Club
by Briana Hautau
Unranked

When I helped someone, was in a cold gray night, who was sitting in the shadows, just waiting for warm light. I took of my coat , warm and soft, I gave it too him ,who had a slight cough. Then he embraced me and ...

Treating A badly Injured person (Main Body and Conclusion only) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

As we got down to the First Aid Room, I told the lady that 'he fell onto the ground with a graze'. He was still crying in agony, but less louder. As they treated him, I got treated with the treaty-est treat in all o...

Treating A badly Injured person (Intro and First Body only) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

At school, the worst thing happened. It was like this: It all started at lunch. A kid was running like Usain Bolt, and then WHAM! He fell onto the ground, crying. I whispered "ssssccccchhh. (sucking with your teeth c...

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by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

I carried Dan and made him sit behind me on my bike. As I tried to get to the school to show the school doctors his injury, my friend suffered pain. I tried to go faster but the traffic was slowing me down. I had no i...

I helped my friend Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

After I woke up and I had my breakfast and then got ready for school. After I got dressed up I went to get my bike from the garage. Then I took it out and went on the road When I was riding I saw my friend Dan ridi...

I helped my friend Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

After I woke up and I had my breakfast and then got ready for school. After I got dressed up I went to get my bike from the garage. Then I took it out and went on the road When I was riding I saw my friend Dan ridi...

The day I helped someone. Course package
by vyom
Unranked

I was going to Bunnings to buy some mortein for the cockroaches but then I saw an old man straining to carry a heavy bag. I was afraid that he would break his back so I asked if I could help him but he said " just...

When I helped Someone Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

The next day a line I had got thousands of phone calls from available trainers. The day before I had put posters up in the gym. For some reason, I couldn't get a decent trainer. All of them had something wrong with th...

When I helped someone Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

The cross country race was in a week. I had to prepare. Last year I came last because the school bully pushed me over and I sprained my ankle. We'll that won't happen this year if I practise because the school bully i...





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