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Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Ranked 9.0

Edited version 2 Talent show B Going to the talent show M Perform a trick that goes wrong E Win encouragement award Theme perseverance Characters - me and Adam who always wins It was just another or...

The Day I Realised Course package
by PPAK
Ranked 7.84

My mum always told me to never give up on my dreams, even if they scared me. She was always optimistic about these things. Unfortunately, I was not, and the day had come. A day that I had dreaded yet waited for in exc...

Portraits
by Joselyn Wong
Ranked 7.76

I solemnly laid in bed that night, creased notes with angry scribbles grasped in my hands. Drafts of portraits of nameless people and things: the hands of a violinist, the lonely men in the bar, climbing peach trees a...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.53

The walls of the hospital room were pure white. I compared the colour to the deathly pale on my older sister's cheeks. With her frail body laid in bed and the covers tucked under her chin, I could only watch helplessl...

Sample essay for QUESTION 01 - Imagine that you've finally achieved something by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 7.0

I lay bundled in a heap of blankets my eyes straining in the tenebrosity. In my hand was a book, half it's pages crinkled and it's spine damaged beyond repair. Inside were pages decorated in hand drawn pictures and be...

Becoming Best Figure Skater Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.24

I took a deep breath and stepped onto the ice. Today was the day I've been desperately waiting for. I took another glance at the golden trophy, the letters 'Best Figure Skater' glimmered beautifully under the lights. ...

The letter Course package
by ilikepositivity
Ranked 7.01

I was holding the letter ever so gently, as I feared that one touch could crumple the whole envelope. My biggest goal in life is to be successful, and this letter could make or break that dream. Harvard in one hand an...

Course package
by Millie
Ranked 7.0

Today's the day, as I walk onto the stage, all eyes on me. I took a deep breath and looked over my shoulder to see my piano accompaniment ready to start. The lights were bright and shining on my face blurring the face...

My heart still plays for you Course package
by kim
Ranked 6.96

I took private piano lessons since I was 7, my father insisted that I should be just like him too. Our mornings wake up to the sound of harmony and elegance, as the notes ladder up to synchronize a songbird. And I fin...

Course package
by DT
Ranked 6.94

I cast my eyes around the gym, clutching my Australian Gymnast's Club uniform tightly in my hands. My eyes slowly adjusted to the dim lit room with a sizeable square window masking the grey walls. The ceilings hung hi...


by anonymous
Ranked 6.54

As I stepped into the brightly-lit airport, I was bombarded with questions from fans about how I did it, and blinded by the blinding flash from the paparazzi's cameras. To the unknowing eye, it would have seemed as ...

Victory! Course package
by Huldah
Ranked 6.39

It was the day the world had been waiting for, I was standing against some of my national competitors. Even though I was considered one of the greats, there was still a sense of worry that I couldn’t eliminate. Still ...

The Race Course package
by Shaista
Ranked 6.17

Characters: - Protagonist - Ray = {mean character, who participates in the race}. Intro - Standing at the starting line with the other racers; feeling tremendously perturbed but avid at the same time. Lead up ...

Achievement of my life. Course package
by Kurumbi
Ranked 5.67

Plan- has a speaking debate, sees the smartest pupil in class, phone rings while doing a speech, dodgeballs thrown, judges in confiusement, but amazingly wins. Today is the day of the oral speech competition, the d...

Something that I finally achieved Course package
by Kennix
Ranked 5.52

I looked up at the colossal cliff that towered over me. The top of the cliff was still beyond my sight, to make matters even worse, I have to climb this massive cliff with a sword and shield on my back. My hands are b...

Counting grass Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 5.45

Nick wanted to count all the grass in the world and he had counted every single piece of grass apart from one field in Stuttgart, Germany. He had gone on a plane to Stuttgart like he did when he went to all the other ...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.23

I step out into a humongous arena filled with a flood of dedicated fans. Dozens of bright lights shine over my figure. The crowd goes wild and the adrenaline is pumping. The yelling of thousands of my supporters fills...

The race Writing Club Course package
by Lachlan
Ranked 4.67

This was my day to shine above the rest by doing my very best will test my abilities and show if my long preparation paid off. I fixed my eyes at the man standing next to the door waiting for him to gesture me out ont...

The time I achieved my life's dream
by HELLO11
Ranked 5.07

I switched off the TV, having troubled yet excited thoughts in my head. The new Dance Dance Dance competition has been announced and it is open for entries. At that moment, Malissa, my best friend knocked on the door,...

I have finally achieved something Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.04

All my life, I have been big, fat loser. I have never won anything before. In sport games, such as basketball, soccer and tennis, I have always cost my team a wins, until they have no longer wanted to tolerate me and...

The Match Course package
by Ayush
Ranked 4.44

It was no ordinary day, it was Saturday the 15th, the day we would have the Championship Finals match against the number one team in Melbourne. I was strolling nervously to the sparkling soccer pitch that the match w...

Winter Wind Writing Club Course package
by thewriter
Ranked 3.67

When I finally noticed, I found my fingers were not shaking anymore. My movements were mellifluous, performing the best étude I could ever play. It felt nice - the stage light shining on me felt nice, it was as ...

The bike Course package
by Zolecames
Ranked 3.57

After falling a few times and badly grazing my knee. I finally achieved my life long goal. To ride a bike! It felt amazing not to rely my training wheels, like I was a step closer to becoming a big girl, like my siste...

First Woman on Space Course package
by DT
Ranked 4.11

The point of singularity. The point where the universe started, one small dot. That's what I felt like. I felt like the point of singularity. Star strewn, the inky black sky filled with dots of white splattered ac...

The swimming race Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.0

"On your marks, get set, go!" the umpire roared as the first division of swimmers took off for the swimming races. The crowd were like a pack of lions, roaring with delight as each race took place. The ground was litt...

The running race Course package
by Silver
Ranked 3.0

Everytime I see that pair of dusty running shoes sitting in the corner it reminds me of how my feet pulsated and my how my heart ached after adding another tally to my last place list, but there was a drive in me to k...

The Dull Class Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 2.67

Another dull day in class, even walking into a puddle with wet socks was worse. Honestly I wonder why school is like this. I began to ponder, what if i could change the school and make it a happier place. This would m...

Nine Years Ago Course package
by Lee
Ranked 2.0

I don't remember as much as I wish I could. Just a few, simple memories that I will never forget. It was loud, unbelievably so, even the hushed silence was too overwhelming. I normally dove in the private pool at the ...

The time I achieved my life's dream
by HELLO11
Unranked

I switched off the TV, having troubled yet excited thoughts in my head. The new Dance Dance Dance competition has been announced and it is open for entries. At that moment, Malissa, my best friend knocked on the door,...

I had Done It!
by Alina Munzir
Unranked

My hand trembled as the bright phone screen shone on to my anxious face, illuminating my bright, expecting eyes. The words and colours of my email inbox blurred, except for a specific email from Mac Robertson High. I ...

I got in.
by Charlotte
Unranked

My hands trembled with fear as my legs felt cooked strands of spaghetti. This is it. This is the letter that would determine whether l would get into my dream school. Whether the countless hours l spent doing work, re...

The Running Competition! Course package
by Praveen
Unranked

There's a running competition at my school, today, in 30mins. Everyone was told that about a month ago, but I told 8 days later, because I was overseas visiting my Nana in Ireland. I enjoy competitions in general, but...

Space Scientist At NASA Course package
by Aadi
Unranked

It's been my childhood dream to become a NASA Space Scientist, and i have finally acheived it today, it's the best day of my life!!. It took a lot of effort to reach this far and i had to make some really tough decisi...

The Art idea Course package
by Kyu
Unranked

I looked down at my watch, the time was nearly 9:30 at night. It was time for bed, but here I was sitting down at my table still scribbling down ideas for the Art Competition tomorrow. This Art Competition was at my s...

Stage Fright Course package
by Kyu
Unranked

Carl woke up in a unwilling manner this morning. She didn't want to go to school today. The term presentation was today and she had stage fright. She took a very long and warm bath, trying to forget that the presentat...

Course package
by DT
Unranked

Girl wants straight A's Girl tries really hard Girl gets good grades, but not straight A's She learns that straight A's do not matter, it is what is inside that matters I always felt the heat of my overbearing p...

The Race Course package
by Anand
Unranked

Plan: - when I started running - growing up running - coach asks me to race - race win Story: I don't know when I started... Probably at 2 or 3. I took my first steps then fell. Took another few steps, th...

the Play
by KoalaLime
Unranked

plan -loves acting and singing -gets stage fright -mr markov insists they act in the play -she works to overcome her stage fright -forgets script -remembers all her lines and is happy the story: i really don...

Try and try until you succeed
by SVK08
Unranked

I can't do it, I think to myself, I am never going to have a high of a standard to become a dancer. I had tried for hours on end doing grande gestates and pirouettes across the dance floor trying to be as good as my ...

Climbing Everest
by Minh
Unranked

As I stepped into the Airport, I was bombarded with the noise of hundreds upon thousands of people chattering as they hurried to their flights. The sound of the rolling wheels combined with the voice on the intercom m...

Counting grass Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Unranked

Nick wanted to count all the grass in the world and he had counted every single piece of grass apart from one field in Stuttgart, Germany. He had gone on a plane to Stuttgart like he did when he went to all the other ...


by Thrindu
Unranked

It all came down to this moment. My chance. What I had been waiting for my entire life, it was like a dream. However, I hadn’t got it yet. I stiill had to put effort. So I ran. It was as if my whole life had come into...

Finally, I had got it!
by Potatochip
Unranked

Sold the most biscuit in girl scout Time of the year again, leader telling Standard is too high Found a person who loves biscuit, find scientist who want to do an experiment I skipped cheerily to girl scout, wea...


by Rakshana
Unranked

Plan: What was acheieved- My first medal in badminton. 2nd place in the western suburbs -Started playing -Became a regular activity and joined a class -Got a wonderful coach -Started to learn tips and tricks -Be...

The Special Opportunity; Band Solo
by tariALIENbelia
Unranked

The lights dimmed and the focus was now on me. My conductor lifted his baton and I breathed in sync with it. I began playing and the saxophone resonated throughout the auditorium. The piece was a ballad and I loved is...

I have finally acheived something!
by vishalks
Unranked

As I flicked through the old, memorable photos, one image caught my eyes. The moment of enlightenment started to agitate me as though it was the only thing I accomplished in my whole life. …


by abc123
Unranked

It had been three years. Three years of had work, which all led up to this final success. I achieved my dream. My parents' dream. Everyone I loved's dream. It finally happened. I could not control the happiness I felt...

Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

Plan Finally hit a six - setting: cricket pitch mood: nervous and anxious I watched my team block each and every bowl, and the other team our knock down our wickets. After a couple more wickets fell, I ...

Soccer
by Revolver
Unranked

The deafening crowd filled my ears. The magestic light shone onto the beautiful pitch as I walked up the stairs and saw the magnitude of people covering the stands, awaiting the start of the what is known as “the game...

Singing Competition Free
by Nammu
Unranked

I looked out of the car window, I saw the same poster about a singing competition on every single building there was in the city as I stared in amazement. "Mum, Dad, Can I please go to that singing competition!" I as...

The Time Machine
by Dashiell
Unranked

It was a passion when I was 10 years old, to find out if we could ever time travel to the future. Time travel is the current trend of this year everyone is scavaging on the internet trying to find a way to time travel...


by Rose
Unranked

My heart was thumping inside my ribcage like a wild animal.My palms were sweating exorbitantly making my grip on the microphone loose. I practiced the breathing techniques that my mum had taught me in order to calm my...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Unranked

Edited version Talent show B Going to the talent show M Perform a trick that goes wrong E Win encouragement award Theme perseverance Characters - me and Adam who always wins It was just another ordi...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Unranked

Talent show B Going to the talent show M Perform a trick that goes wrong E Win encouragement award Theme perseverance Characters - me and Adam who always wins It was just another ordinary day at schoo...

My Greatest Achievement
by Vij
Unranked

My greatest achievement in life is undoubtedly my greatest failures in life. To "learn from your own mistakes" is a quote by which I have lived all my life and will continue to live by. All my life, I, like all other ...

Imagine that you’ve finally achieved something that meant a lot to you
by lo
Unranked

I was two years old when I started to dance, I loved it. The idea of showing people my unique passion to dancing help me grew as a person but also as a former A trouper. My mindset was to be the best of the best, a da...

Imagine that you’ve finally achieved something that meant a lot to you
by lo
Unranked

I was two years old when I started to dance, I loved it. The idea of showing people my unique passion to dancing help me grew as a person but also as a former A trouper. My mindset was to be the best of the best, a da...


by Jean Williams
Unranked

I don't know when it all started. Maybe it was when I saw Father, with his old, faithful acoustic guitar, serenaded Mother and swept her off her feet, like what he always do on the night she worked overtime or he fuss...


by Jean Williams
Unranked

I don't know when it all started. Maybe it was when I saw Father, with his old, faithful acoustic guitar, serenaded Mother and swept her off her feet, like what he always do on the night she worked overtime or he fuss...


by Faith
Unranked

Alicia felt her palms sweat as she worked her way through the crowd of eager students. Sighs and cheers surrounded her as students gazed at their results on the pin board. The yearly exam meant everything here. The be...

Tricks
by Eve
Unranked

It was a beautiful Saturday morning, the sun was shining and the sky was blue. Last week, the cutest most adorable puppy was brought into my life, he was named Cotton. Cotton was as white as snow and as fluffy as well...

The Road Trip Dream
by Shagoon
Unranked

Last Thursday was the day when I and my four besties from my bike club had started off on a dream-come-true Road Trip to the Himalayas. Never had we imagined that one day we would be zooming off towards the Himalayan ...

Pressure Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Everyday for the whole year, I have been preparing for this one day. I was willing to replace the times that I could have spent with my friends after school to achieve my goal. Even though it was hard, I enjoy the cha...

Achieving My Dream Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I could see the finish line on the corner of my eye as I twisted by the corner. I could just see myself holding the marathon trophy which meant a lot to me as it was my dream ever since I watched the Olympics. I sp...

Writing Club Course package
by Shiraz
Unranked

When I was five I started violin. The idea of playing such a unique and challenging instrument was music to my ears. Determined little me set out to bring the musician in me out, let it roar and show the world what I ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 01 - Imagine that you've finally achieved something by eshwar
by eshwar
Unranked

I can't remember when it was, but i can say that it was around my 9th birthday when i competed in a running competition. Running was my life, so was it for my good old dad. Even though running was my life, i had a fea...

My sailing championship
by Jairaj Bajaj
Unranked

As soon as I started sailing I always fancied to win the once in a year Grand Prix championship. It was that tournament when all the sailors participated and did their best to accomplish the title of the grand winner....

My sailing championship
by Jairaj Bajaj
Unranked

As soon as I started sailing I always fancied to win the once in a year Grand Prix championship. It was that tournament when all the sailors participated and did their best to accomplish the title of the grand winner....

Win! Win
by Daryka
Unranked

Win! Win I get the score can I bore you with some more. Catch a kiss or recieve the gift of bliss. If you wake up and get a scare I believe you can't be wear Win! Win I get the score Can I bore you with some more…

Sample essay for QUESTION 01 - Imagine that you've finally achieved something by littlemissdontno
by littlemissdontno
Unranked

I grapple to fight the overwhelming sensation of my wings fluttering against the strong hold of the wind. I could feel my feathers flapping, it was just like Mother had told me! I cherished every single moment, the mo...

The Day My Heart Went Bright
by Thakshana
Unranked

I was walking down the street until I saw something familiar. I went to take a closer look and couldn't believe my eyes. It was a hundred dollar note! It looked so clean that I wanted to spend it right away. But then ...

Ballet Dreams
by Ela
Unranked

I can't remember when it happened. I think I was 10 or 11, when I finally got over my fear of dancing in front of an audience. I'd always imagined it would be perfect. The crowd cheering after my performance, flowers ...

Beauty pageant
by Aarabhy
Unranked

"And the winner is......" The host said gesturing his arm at the contestants. I looked straight out at the audience as the lights burnt my eyes as I could see nothing but darkness. My hand moulded into a fist as I t...

Kashmir Education Initiative- An NGO
by abidqazi
Unranked

I always wanted to be part of something which gives back to the society. With start of Kashmir Education Initiative - An NGO which works for excellence in education sector in Kashmir India ,the idea started to take sh...

Essay (creative)
by Ellina
Unranked

Plan: Tries to study in order to get a scholarship, to be acknowledged by her parents. She is sick and tired of getting compared. Gets accused of cheating in the scholarship test Her friend proves her innocence ...

Piano Festival
by smileyface123
Unranked

My palms are sweaty as I listen to the grand baby's melody. The sweet symphony echo's around the silent auditorium. As the dynamic playing slowly comes to an end an ceases I see that the audience is clapping. I couldn...

Piano Festival
by smileyface123
Unranked

My palms are sweaty as I listen to the grand baby's melody. The sweet symphony echo's around the silent auditorium. As the dynamic playing slowly comes to an end an ceases I see that the audience is clapping. I couldn...

Time is Ticking
by Naya Lay
Unranked

Plan: - Afraid of time - Learns to appreciate life as it is - Don't dwell on trying to be happy, you'll be too focused on being happy that you forget to let it come naturally and enjoy life as it is. Essay: ...

A drum kit Course package
by rekha
Unranked

I have been playing drums for about a year. I have been bugging my parents about getting me a drum kit for a long time. They said a bit demandingly you have to first show that you are compassionate about drumming. So ...

Fear of height
by Jason
Unranked

I have this fear, it causes my legs to shake, i start jabbering to anyone nearby? As thoughts of certain death ran through my mind, the world appears to be a precious, treasured place. I imagine my own funeral, then s...

Fleet of Time Course package
by Kevin Ding
Unranked

As we waited backstage, my mind was consume with fear and anxiety. How can I do this? Will I succeed. Oh, Lord, please don't let me fail. When the loud speakers blasted out the name of my band, I stood up with my drum...

Sample essay for by Jon
by Jon
Unranked

It was the moment we all dreaded for. 25 contestants to beat. We were all starting to sweat even though the venue itself was quite cold. The tension between each and one of us could be clearly spotted. Next to us were...

Sample essay for by Mariam
by Mariam
Unranked

plan: swimming competition, winning the prize and trophy - cant swim in front of many people - scared I wouldn't swim fast enough - shy, reserved Essay: I was elegantly gliding through the water peacefully i...

Sample essay for by Rosalae
by Rosalae
Unranked

When I think about all I have achieved in 6 years since I migrated to Australia from the Philippines, my feeling is mix, I sometimes get emotional and very proud of myself. I owe this from my supportive husband Frank....

Sample essay for by Exam Success
by Exam Success
Unranked

plan: what? long time achieve - practicing piano and winning a piano concert. - when started to play - fear of playing in public - asked to play - playing - playing in public. Write essays down here: I can...





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