Sample Essays

Champion? Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.33

Plot: Annika, was a overly confident girl, who always wins until she goes to a competition and loses. P1: Annika winning the first few races making her over confident (heroic) P2: She gets cocky, since she's been wi...

Robosociety
by Priyann Thanujan
Ranked 8.2

The Earth was embedded in metal. Metal cities,beings and technology covered every inch of the planet .Automatons were now superior to humans, and all life remaining was hiding deep underground. However, some humans ma...

Sample essay for QUESTION 21 - Coming last. by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 8.0

Beads of sweat trickled down Keira's sunburnt forehead. She smirked as she inspected her opponent's faces, their faces were lined with pathetic hopefulness. Keira chuckled egoistically. They would never beat her, no m...

Last! Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 8.15

I looked at the lane that was spread out in front of me. Sweat had soaked the collar of my shirt; I knew I was slow compared to the other runners that I’d been racing. My eyes darted from side to side, watching the ot...

Sample essay for QUESTION 21 - Coming last. by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.67

I inhaled the smell of freshly trimmed grass. The smell of victory. A couple of my opponents were punishing themselves by laboriously running laps around the herculean track. I smirked what a way to squander your tim...

Coming Last Course package
by Val
Ranked 6.77

I’ve been waiting all year for this day, the sports carnival. Every year I always come last in the race, but I have trained all year for this moment. All my friends still think that I am slow and that I will lose this...

Coming Last Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 6.33

It was a scorching day and Mike was boasting about how he was the fastest runner in the school and how he could beat everyone because he had come first in every race. His parents were rich, so he was just a spoilt kid...

TIME TO GET DIRTY! Course package
by ∩ (︶▽︶) ∩
Ranked 6.56

Plot: he really wants to win a race so he plays dirty but loses. P1: he gets the idea of playing dirty. (sneaky) P2: he starts running and he sabotages a few people. (cheeky) P3: he sabotages everyone in front of h...

Coming Last Writing Club Course package
by DRSEUSS1
Ranked 5.83

Ben was puffing with every step. He was running his hardest, yet still falling behind. He was one of the first people to leave the starting line, and one of the last to get to the finish line. He was the slowest kid i...

Coming Last Writing Club Course package
by Anu
Ranked 6.22

"Come on mum" I said, with a hint of urgence in my voice. "We can't be late for the race!" "Ok Jack, calm down," Mum responded in a soothing tone. Beams of light cascaded down like lances from above as I stood...

Coming Last Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling2
Ranked 5.5

“Hey Lucy, are you practicing, to come last, for the running race?” I jeered, behind me Alison and Julia smirked. “Very funny, Courtney.” she replied not looking at me at all, but searching for something in her filthy...

Coming last... Course package
by Jessica
Ranked 5.84

Freya is a very competitive girl. She doesn't like being beaten by someone else, which is why she is determined to become champion for everything. Her school was hosting a netball competition between Team Aqua and Te...

OVERCONFIDENCE OF HONESTY? Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 5.17

I hadn’t practiced because I didn’t need to, I had won tens of gold and silver medals for swimming at my school. This time, children from other schools were participating, but I was not scared, our school was the best...

Last (Fourth Draft) Writing Club Course package
by Zayed
Ranked 5.03

P1: Get invitation to international swim race [tone: excited] P2: Not practicing [tone: overconfident] P3: Competing with opponents [competitive] P4: Finding out I came last [tone: embarrassed] Running to the ...

Coming Last Course package
by helen
Ranked 5.0

The bright morning sun shone down on the grassy, mown sports oval for the day of the school athletics carnival. Lines were marked out for each of the sports, and brightly coloured faction bays were set up next to the ...

Coming Last Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Ranked 5.0

Josh and his team of German Soccer players walked to the training room as excited as a squirrel. This was the final soccer match in the Rio Olympics. Their minds were filled with determination as they needed to win or...

Really, relay Writing Club
by MEMFOX4
Ranked 5.0

This was it. The final relay race. The winner of the race wins the sports carnival. But it looked like everyone else wanted to win the race like I did. I was trembling, because that's what happens when I am in a compe...

Is Anna Last or First?
by Tony
Ranked 4.93

Ready, steady, BOOM! Anna was running in the Big Apple Marathon, her knees trembling as she ran. Anna had practiced hard and she hoped to receive the prize. Anna longed for the prize (free plane tickets to Hawaii) so ...

Coming last Writing Club
by EBWhite3
Ranked 4.83

John loved competitions. In any of his spare time, whether it was at home or at school. He had never lost in any competition. When John heard of a motorbike race, he was the first to enter. He had never experienced ...

Last Second Goal Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 4.73

Plot: Our soccer team came last in the season (We looked back at our trophies we won in the past and we realised our team is not so bad after all). P1: Having a soccer match against Leister City (energetic/excited) ...

STATE CHAMPIONSHIPS Writing Club
by MEMFOX3
Ranked 4.67

Sweat trickling down my face, I nervously stood on the dusty metal blocks. After easily coming first in the District 800 meter race, I thought how much harder Regional would be. The manager of the race explained all t...

Coming Last Writing Club
by Anu
Ranked 4.67

Plot: A young girl who is great at running and who wins every race, soon is beaten by others in a running contest. P1: Introduction of Jackie, running hero [ exciting] P2: At home, she gets a letter to compete in Lo...

Sport Meltdown Course package
by Hannah
Ranked 5.19

'You can do it Zoe! Come on!' I thought encouraging myself, 'Beat her! Beat Kirsty! You can win this! You can...' OOF! I tripped over something and fell over, face first. My forehead was throbbing and my knees w...

Coming Last Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 4.5

I was standing on the podium as the crowd cheered for me. I had come first again. I walked over to the Duntroon tent, Duntroon is my school house and it had won the most trophies. Every race that I had been in yet, I ...

Coming Last
by freddos
Ranked 4.33

P1: Noah as won all his races and is overly confident P2: He doesn't need to warm up for his race and loses the race P3: Noah learners his lesson and becomes a true winner It was time. The gun fired and the 200m...

The Mario kart race Writing Club
by Lucky
Ranked 4.17

Beth was examining her flowers. Beth was a 12-year-old girl, and she had another sister called Rachael. They both were very bored and didn't know what to do. Suddenly, Beth said", Should we play on the Wii and play M...

Course package
by Deeksha
Ranked 3.83

Coorparoo Sate School's P.E teacher fired instructions at everyone like an army officer. "Students run on the," she commanded. I sure wasn't as experienced as other athletic students at school, but I definitely had ...

Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite4
Ranked 3.67

Jacob was competing in the Rio Olympics 2016 as a long distance runner. He was 19 at the time. This made him the youngest contestant at the event. He was preparing for the 800m race feeling anxious and exceedingly ner...

Glorious or Kind? Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite2
Ranked 3.33

Her whole life, Alexa Atkins had dreamed about winning first place in the Hawaiian Island National Surfing Championships. She was born a surfer and ever since she caught her first wave, Alexa knew that this was what s...

Coming last Writing Club
by JRRTolkien3
Ranked 3.33

Amy and Amelia were running around the table.The girls accidentally knocked the tickets.Mum shouted "Amy,Amelia get ready for the airport!"Amy and Amelia jumped up and down with excitement. The girls father's face ...

Coming last Writing Club
by EBWhite1
Ranked 3.0

“Where is the starting line?”I asked to one of the parent helpers.”Over there.”was the reply with her finger pointing me in the right direction. I didn’t say anything back but beamed a big smile towards her.I couldn’t...

coming last Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

The cars dashed beside me and took over, I veered left and outmaneuvered them, but I was still second. "I have to win." I thought to myself "or I'll be seen as a newbie.". The car behind me exploded, sending me skiddi...

Coming Last
by Bryan
Unranked

There were only a few days until the most competive race would start ; cross country. I had won so many times I thought to myself so I just slumped onto the couch forgetting all about cross country. I only remembered ...

Robosociety
by Priyann Thanujan
Unranked

The Earth was embedded in metal. Metal cities,beings and technology covered every inch of the planet .Automatons were now superior to humans, and all life remaining was hiding deep underground. However, some humans ma...

Coming Last
by freddos
Unranked

P1: Noah as won all his races and is overly confident P2: He doesn't need to warm up for his race and loses the race P3: Noah learners his lesson and becomes a true winner It was time. The gun fired and the 200m...

Coming Last Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

I stood up and did pull-ups to prepare for my 100-meter sprint race to the finals. I was brought over to the Olympics. My dream had come true. My heart was pounding in panic, who was I going to verse. I walked up to a...

The Day I Thought I was Going to Come Last
by Xiaopin
Unranked

It was the eighteenth of June and our school was competing in the interschool athletics carnival with nine other schools. Every tent was buzzing with excitement ,anxiety and barks by the teachers'. Hours flew by that ...

Last for the first time Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

Gary was the fastest kid in the school.He was a very competitive runner and he would always boast about his skills. Every time he would win a race he would go to the other players to discourage them. He always keeps o...

coming last Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

I hadn't practiced for the race; I didn't need to. I had already won 8 gold medals. I had always won so, I knew that I would win again. I was waiting at the starting line for the race to start. BANG the race started ...

I have crushed dreams now. Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

"I am sure I can do the 1500," I said to my mum. "I can do it!" "Look sweetie-pie, It's way late, but you can do it." "Ok mum, and don't call me sweetie-pie!" I ran to the court. The announcement went - "Calling al...

Sample essay for QUESTION 21 - Coming last. by xueyan Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

John always comes first in races. He never failed every single race. John was the best in class at all subjects, and he is a bully too. However, when the new student came, everything began to change. The new studen...





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