Sample Essays

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by Eric
Ranked 9.33

Please note when marking that we used the word prompt "A dinosaur", rather than the image shown above to write this story. We stared in amazement at the gigantic beast struggling frantically in front of us. The m...

The Mystery of the Dinosaur Course package
by helen
Ranked 7.5

This was it! My class was going on a field trip to a museum that everyone was talking about. They said there was a dinosaur there that was cursed. According to a rumour, everyone who went near it was never seen or hea...

The terrifying experience Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.36

Finally! My class was going on a excursion to the National museum and everyone was talking about it. They said there was a dinosaur there and that it was cursed. The bus was filled with screams and chatters as people ...

A dinosaur
by anonymous
Ranked 7.17

Today is my parents last day in their house before they move to the retired village. My kids and I are going to visit the bedroom l lived in when I was young. They will decide which of my toys are kept and the ones th...

A pink dinosaur has no friends Course package
by Cooper
Ranked 7.04

There once was a pink stegosaurus who lived with his parents, his name was Erald. One day, the stegosaurus family received an invitation to the most popular school. Erald gleefully jumped up and down, he never went to...

The Dinosaur Toy Course package
by Nithika
Ranked 6.79

Tom’s mouth opened into a wonderful smile, he was clutching his toy in his right hand while getting ready for school. Tom was so excited to show all his friends his amazing, colour splashed toy. Tom was on his way to ...

Philosaurus Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.64

Philosaurus was a dinosaur who lived in a large cave, together with his mother, his father, his grandmother and his three brothers. He had his own room in a little corner and he had a family who loved him more than an...

My Pink Dinosaur Course package
by enthral
Ranked 6.0

My pink dinosaur's name is Ethan. He is a genuine Thagomiser. He is friendly and never bites, well maybe once or twice my dinosaur has had a nibble or a chomp, but he is an exquisite dinosaur. I am Ethan's favourit...

The Disastrous Dinosaur Course package
by Utpreksh Sharma
Ranked 5.33

I opened my eyes. Dazed, I glanced at my surroundings which mostly consisted of lush, bright green trees. I did not know where I was but it appeared to be the prehistoric era. I was amazed that this invention that a m...

The Proven Miracle ~ SAMPLE ESSAY for QUESTION 10 Course package
by suba
Ranked 5.77

The glimmering moon cast a serene ambience across the forest floor. It was showered with pearls that were distinguishable by their rosy colour. Tom leisurely strolled, the lush green grass reaching out to tickle his t...

Diana's Dinosaur Course package
by Zee
Ranked 5.65

Diana's had her dinosaur for six years now. Her mum gave it to her when she was born. While other girls had their barbie dolls, she had a dinosaur named Daisy. Daisy was a magenta dinosaur with yellow thorns on her ta...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - A dinosaur by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.93

The humongous skeleton of a dinosaur towered above me.I had never witnessed such a huge skeleton . Though it was dead and we all knew that the tour guide still tried to convince us kids that they're alive. Who does he...

The Dinosaur Course package
by student
Ranked 4.67

Last Sunday I woke up to the sound of my baby brother crying. Oh no not the dino toy again! I thought to myself. So my brother has a toy that he ironically loses every Sunday and this Sunday was no exception. I got up...

The Day Course package
by Hamzah
Ranked 4.5

I am Jeff Stegosaurus. I am one of the youngest dinosaurs of my herd. Today is The Day. On The Day young dinosaurs become Neuro-nourished. Neuro-nourishing is when young dinosaurs like me go to the Holy Rock and recei...

Dinosaur! Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 4.99

We stared at the massive beast that laid there on the ground peacefully. He was so soundless when he was asleep I wondered if it were dead. It was fluorescent pink with plates along its back. Long razor spikes protru...

The King of Dinosaurs Course package
by Dhiren
Ranked 4.99

It was peaceful, happy and busy,the dinosaur village was thriving. No wars and tragedies have ever happened in this country, because all the other creatures are scared of the dinosaurs in the village. Everyone who doe...

the little muddy dino Course package
by Yash
Ranked 4.33

Long ago, when tortoises were still young, there lived and thrived the age of dinosaurs. Unfortunately for all the herbivorous dinosaurs, they were all coloured bright pink and because of this, they found it hard to e...

Reborn
by anonymous
Ranked 4.87

Sixty-five million years ago, when dinosaurs roamed the lands, one stegosaurus layer eggs in a cave, then shrewdly rolled a boulder over the cave, to block the entrance. That stegosaurus had foreseen an asteroid crash...

A Dinosaur
by xsaber
Ranked 4.72

My chisel hit something hard on the bedrock of the hill. Normally, I wouldn't find much on this hill so I kept chiselling away but I kept hearing a soft sound at places. Finally, I decided to put away my chisel and I ...

Dinosaur Revenge! (Dinosaurs are boys in this story) Course package
by Oliver
Ranked 4.68

The cumbersome pink dinosaur stomped around the plains, munching grass happily. While the pink dinosaur was eating, a smaller mischevious green dinosaur crept up behind him and kicked him hard. "Ouch!" the dinosaur ye...

Dinosaurs
by Vicky
Ranked 4.64

In the midst of steam, emanating from the alpine redwood trees, a puny Diplodocus emerged from an egg. His first scenes at birth was his older sister being pulled from the ground and torn apart by a two-metre long car...

The Pink Dinosaur Writing Club
by Cosmos
Ranked 4.0

I slumped on the couch and stuffed some crisps in my mouth; I lazily reached out to the television remote and switched it on. I switched through the channels quickly as I searched for something entertaining to watch. ...

The dinosaur Course package
by Bahar Emami
Ranked 4.0

A broad smile stretched out on David’s face as a soft breeze blew against his smooth skin. The lush green grass beneath him was flattened as he happily strode forward. Peering into the distance he sighted the vague ...

A Dinosaur
by jessie
Ranked 4.57

The waves lapped against the side of the small motor boat as it sped forward, heading to the unhabited island. It was the morning and the sky was clear. As I look ahead, I see the tiny shape of an island growing large...

Dinosaurs come to the Earth
by anonymous
Ranked 4.5

After serious Tsunami happened, the road was flooded everywhere and lots of people lost their homes and family members. The worst thing was Tsunami also affected dinosaurs who were planning to invade the Earth. I did ...

The Pink Dinasaur
by anonymous
Ranked 3.52

I was there when it happened. The comet falling in the middle of Manchester. Then silence...Suddenly a dinosaur came out of the comet as if the comet was its shell! The Dinasaur had big green eyes, a ginourmous mouth ...

Dinosaurs Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.67

In the middle of the dark, deep and rough jungle, there lived a ferocious beast, a dinosaur. His mighty jaws can cut through the strangling vines. His jaws were gigantic. He was a T-Rex. One day, he went searching ...

dinosaur hunt (Intro and first paragraph) Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.67

In the middle of the dark, deep and rough jungle, there lived a ferocious beast, a dinosaur. His mighty jaws cut through the strangling vines. The vines were mostly green and a bit of yellow. His jaws were gigantic. ...

Course package
by XavierK
Ranked 2.33

We were walking down the long corridor like lane as we gasped as monster like looking, gigantic beasts. They were tied down with thick brown ropes that wouldn't let go. I felt sorry for the poor looking beast so I snu...

Dinosaur Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 2.33

Here Jeff and I were in the muddy Argentinian forest, looking for two dinosaurs the Argentinosaurus and the carnotaurus. The Argentinosaurus is the biggest dinosaur in the world, the carnotaurus is the rarest to find,...

A dInosaur Course package
by student
Ranked 2.0

Philo the raptor lived happily with his mother and father in Phyrria, he was quite healthy but there was one problem, his leg. Philo was born without a leg and his father and mother had been searching for a doctor ski...

The Dinosaur Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 1.0

In a lost land of tropical forests, on top of the only mountain in the region, trapped inside an old volcanic crater system, lived the last ever group of large, ferocious dinosaurs. For thousands and thousands of yea...

A dinosaur Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 1.0

We all stared at this gigantic beast struggling frantically in front of us. The monster was tied down by thick knotted rope with, heavy metal weights. It opened its mouth trying to cut the rope with it huge teeth and ...

The dinosaur Course package
by 312615🐕‍🦺
Unranked

P1: sees a dinosaur P2: Dinosaur roars and causes a stampede P3: narrator gets trapped P4: narrator escapes goes back to campsite I stared into the depths of the cosmos, the stars covering the night sky like a b...

The Dinosaur
by Mal
Unranked

The dinosaur was as big as a river. He had thick hooves and a spiky tail which was about 5 meters long. His teeth were 100 times sharper than a razor and his mouth could fit one million bears inside it. His tongue was...

a dinosaur Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

Plot: Two hikers see a dinosaur P1: they walk deeper P2: they hear footsteps P3: they see dinosaur P4: they take a picture The car stopped in front of the amazon forest, from here Bill and Phil could see the de...

The Scavenger Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The bus wheels rolled the bus to the museum. My heart was beating out of my chest with excitement, and my body filled with excitement every second we were there. We went to the museum and I wowed at every second of it...

LUCKY DINO Course package
by ∩ (︶▽︶) ∩
Unranked

There is a big test coming up soon and the only way I am going to win is with my lucky Dino. It has been passed down generation to generation it gives whoever holds it incredible luck. The Dino is green with marks fro...

LUCKY DINO Course package
by ∩ (︶▽︶) ∩
Unranked

There is a big test coming up soon and the only way I am going to win is with my lucky Dino. It has been past down generation to generation it gives whoever holds it incredible luck. The Dino is green with marks from ...

The Rogue Dinosaur (Edited) Course package
by Skyler Bui
Unranked

Today my class was going on a field trip to a museum. We were going to see the historical things there for a school project. I passed the Neanderthal exhibit. As well as the Ice Age exhibit. I finally stopped in fron...

The Rogue Dinosaur Course package
by Skyler Bui
Unranked

Today my class was going on a field trip to a museum. We were going to see the historical things there for a school project. I passed the Neanderthal exhibit. As well as the Ice Age exhibit. I finally stopped in front...

A Dinosaur Course package
by Hcalculator
Unranked

Hannah set off, with her lattice straw basket, dressed with a silky pink ribbon around it's hips, as she skipped along the pathway that led to the forest. As soon as she disappeared into a green world, sporting leave...

The Perfect Birthday Present Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I was browsing though a toy shop when I eyed a small, pink dinosaur toy with several yellow spikes on the end of its tail. I was planning to buy my little brother a dinosaur toy for his birthday, because dinosaurs we...

The dinosour is here Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

We stared in amazement at the gigantic beast struggling frantically in front of us. The monster was tied down by thick knotted ropes with heavy, metal weights. It opened its gaping mouth. I heard it mourning as if try...

Naughty and Happy boy
by perthmum
Unranked

Today was the day of my brothers Birthday! i was so happy for him. Today we decided to go to the dinosaur museum because he loves dinosaurs so much so in the afternoon we planned to go there. but before, we went to th...

Naughty and Happy boy
by perthmum
Unranked

Today was the day of my brothers Birthday! i was so happy for him. Today we decided to go to the dinosaur museum because he loves dinosaurs so much so in the afternoon we planned to go there. but before we went to the...


by perthmum
Unranked

Today was the day of my brothers Birthday! i was so happy for him. Today we decided to go to the dinosaur museum because he loves dinosaurs so much so in the afternoon we planned to go there. but before we went to the...

My pet dinosaur Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I've always wanted a pet before. But it was always one in particular; a dinosaur. How cool would it be to have a prehistoric pet who could take you beyond the clouds whenever you desired? I could imagine the breath-ta...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

AAAHHHHHHHHH! I was sooooooo scared!as if!…

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The gigantic shadow cast over me and my friends, as I looked up to see why there was a giant shadow, I saw an evil- looking, ugly, purple monster. "Dinner, at last," screeched the purple monster in a high pitched voic...

A dinosaur Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

Recently, professor Mark Wood had invented a machine that could turn drawings into reality. For example, a giraffe, the drawing would be inserted into the processor and carefully analysed by the CPU, and the creation ...

Time machine Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

Imagine if you had a time machine. You could go forward or backwards in time. Well I have just invented one and am going to go back to the time of the dinosaurs. It could be dangerous and risky but I am a risk taker a...

Time machine Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

Imagine if you had a time machine. You could go forward or backwards in time. Well I have just invented one and am going to go back to the time of the dinosaurs. It could be dangerous and risky but I am a risk taker a...

dinosaur hunt (Intro and first paragraph) Course package
by saanvi
Unranked

In the middle of the dark, deep and rough jungle, there lived a ferocious beast, a dinosaur. His mighty jaws cut through the strangling vines. He loves meat. His name is din. One day his was looking for his deligh...

Pink Dino Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

As I stepped into the time machine, I chose my destination from this panel: 7 8 9 4 5 6 1 2 3 seconds minutes hours days years decades millions ago in the future GO! '65.5 million years ago' was what I c...

A Sneaky Follower Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

My brother Kevin and I when we were 7 years old, we dreamt of making a time machine that would lead to the past. We had this dream because we had a fascination about dinosaurs and we wanted to see them alive and roami...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - A dinosaur by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

The humongous skeleton of a dinosaur towered above me.I had never witnessed such a huge skeleton . Though it was dead and we all knew that the tour guide still tried to convince us kids that they're alive. Who does he...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - A dinosaur by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

The humongous skeleton of a dinosaur towered above me.I had never witnessed such a huge skeleton . Though it was dead and we all knew that the tour guide still tried to convince us kids that they're alive. Who does he...

Writing Club Course package
by Zayed
Unranked

Plot: B: Introducing Minerva queen of dragons M: Gets possessed by the lord of plague E: Dies after bieng turned to stone There once was beautiful queen named Minerva. She was a dinosaur of grea...

A dinosaur Course package
by Jay
Unranked

If was a rainy and very dark day, the last remaining dinosaurs were struggling to find food. After the huge meteorite crashed into earth, most of the dinosaurs were dead, but some were strong enough to survive for now...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - A dinosaur by Nawar Mubarek Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

I'm scaly and spiky with big jaws and stomping feet.I'm a dinosaur!I like to snoop over dinosaurs and frighten them to their lungs.That is my most favorite hobby out of anything in the world,I even do it to my generat...

the true story Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

One day there lived creatures much larger then humans. They were all different kinds of shapes and personality . From small to big or proud to shy. These were called dinosaurs. There was one special dinosaur that crea...

the true story Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

One day there lived creatures much larger then humans. They were all different kinds of shapes and personality . From small to big or proud to shy. These were called dinosaurs. There was one special dinosaur that crea...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - A dinosaur by xueyan Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

It looks like I'm the only dinosaur left! I told them that there is going to be a gigantic Meteor Strike, but none of them will listen! The sun was shining so brightly outside that they just can't resist going it 'The...

Dino contest Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Unranked

I hate being a dinosaur. All of the other dinosaurs laugh at me because I'm 'different'. Only because I have light pink skin, purple spikes, green eyes and yellow tail spikes. My mum hates me. She says she wishes that...

The Dinosaur Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

“Nag, nag, nag! That’s all you do. Why can’t I have a pet with spiky ‘stuff’ on its tail?” Chloe whined. Her mum sighed huffily,” None of that lip, missy! You’re a pain in the kazoo! Get out and play! Don’t bother me...

The Dinosaur Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

B: Pain in the kazoo and bored, start drawing M:Dinosaur and scaring mum E: Animal catcher comes and disappear “Nag, nag, nag! That’s all you do. Why can’t I have a pet with spiky stuff on its tail?”Chloe whined. H...

The Dinosaur Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

B: Pain in the kazoo and bored, start drawing M:Dinosaur and scaring mum E: Animal catcher comes and disappear “Nag, nag, nag! That’s all you do. Why can’t I have a pet with spiky stuff on its tail?”Chloe whined. H...

The Dinasoar Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

"And the winner is... Guy Richards!" My heart sank. I had stayed up nights to finish my art work and I didn't even win the competition. I watched in envy as Guy strutted to the front and showed off to everyone. I star...





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