Sample Essays

The lost girl Course package
by Arya
Ranked 8.99

As silent as a mouse, my feet were quietly padding along the golden sand. I heard, my sister, Belle, laugh and say "Stella, I can hear you!". I gave sharp turn and saw Belle charging at full power, my footsteps quicke...

Footsteps
by Acedit
Ranked 8.01

Rose crouched behind a soft, leafy bush as a blinding light swept over it. Her stomach was burning with desire of food. Rose came from a poor family, her dad was a fisherman and her mum sold the food for money. Rose w...

Echoing Footsteps Course package
by helen
Ranked 7.5

We were finally about to enter Crystal Cave! The ten-meter stone archway stood tall in front of us. Crystal Cave was famous for its unique natural formations, and also for its echoes. In a certain chamber, everything,...

School Lockdown Course package
by Wise Ghost
Ranked 7.32

I heard foot steps coming closer and closer. I was frightened and worried. It was a lockdown in school and I went to go to the bathroom. But I heard creepy noises and ran to my locker and hid inside. My heartbeat even...

Course package
by Bryan
Ranked 7.3

I put on my pyjamas and went into my comfortable bed as my parents tucked me in bed. Tomorrow was a big day because I had a test so I tried to sleep however I just couldn't. So many things were on my mind and I was h...

Footsteps
by Karina Chung
Ranked 7.25

p1: I stayed late at school to finish the project that was due the next two days p2: I heard mysterious footsteps coming into the art room where he stayed p3: Next day I heard the same big heavy footsteps coming tow...

Course package
by Val
Ranked 6.97

It was John's 10th birthday today but nobody realised or cared. When John woke up, he expected a stack full of pancakes but all he saw was just some plain jam toast. He expected to see two or three presents on the lo...

Footsteps Course package
by MidnightSky94
Ranked 6.79

Ava always adored reading, so instead of playing video games, she'd rather read. To her misfortune, something always attracts her attention while she is reading. Ava was born in a rich family, and her parents passed a...

Footsteps in the Night Course package
by S8G8
Ranked 6.7

It was a gloomy evening in January and I was lying in my bed staring at the ceiling. The cool breeze came through the window and the sound of owls could be heard. I was trying to get to sleep, but I couldn't sleep a w...

Footsteps Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.66

I could hear the sound of footsteps ringing around the cave. If Bigfoot was here like Joe said I'm sure they'd know that we were here. Suddenly, we spotted huge footprints in the cave's wet floor. We were on the way t...

HIDING Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.52

I hear footsteps. With sweat dripping down my face, I peek through the gap of the wardrobe door to see if anybody is outside, to my relief nobody is there. I’ve been cramped in this wardrobe for about ten minutes h...

Footsteps in the dark Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite2
Ranked 6.0

Growing up, I wasn't really scared of anything; ghosts, witches or even criminals, well, until one night. I was home alone while my parents had gone out to a movie and my older sister was at her annual school camp. At...

Footsteps Writing Club Course package
by DRSEUSS1
Ranked 6.0

Antonia's bag was heavy as she wondered out the school gates. With the long week that had past and the thought of all that French homework, she may as well been carrying a ton of bricks. She slowly lifted one foot off...

The reunited family Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.28

As silent as a mouse, my feet were quietly padding along the golden sand. I heard, my brother, Oli, laugh and say "Aaron, I can hear you!". I gave sharp turn and saw Belle charging at full power, my footsteps quickene...

Runners' Footsteps Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 5.83

In the gigantic Perth arena, an athlete named Jason was participating in the Rio Olympics 2016 in distance running. In the past, he was defeated in the Olympics but this time, he won't let his guts down. “I have come ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 26 - Footsteps by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 5.67

The footsteps echoed through the passageway and for some irrational reason Marie found them comforting. Maybe it was because of the familiar repetitive sound or maybe because it reminded Marie of a carefree time many ...

The Footstep Maker Course package
by Yash
Ranked 5.6

Lots of used paper lay in a huge pile next to me as I tried my hardest to think up a new musical instrument. It was the middle of recess as I tried to generate a flow of ideas for a musical instrument when amidst the...

I heard someone with me Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.94

It was late midnight, dark and cold. I was working in my office, no one around. The building was all empty, just me working in a room. Very nervous and scared I took glimpses around me. I ask “ is there someone?”. I l...

The House with the Footsteps Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 5.33

The first thing about the house that I had found, is that it was so gloomy, dark, dull... It was a house I had never seen before in my whole life living in this country. I used to live in Yishun, Singapore but on the ...

THE UNKNOWN MONSTER Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 5.33

Tired and exhausted , my sister Emily and I came back from boring school. As the front door of our cosy, little house was unlocked by Emily, something grabbed our attention, it sounded like a rhythmic thump-tap of boo...

Footsteps... Course package
by Shona Negi
Ranked 5.79

My name is Amelia . I am a 8 year old girl and I am in grade 3. One day when I was walking towards my home, I heard footsteps echoing behind me . I instinctively looked behind me. Nothing. Creeped out I briskly ran ...

Footsteps Writing Club
by Anu
Ranked 5.0

Ava gazed determindedly at her feet, to begin the dance. It was different now. The whole school was watching her perform. Quickly, she glanced around, to see the shining shoes of other children and the floral heels of...

Footsteps Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling2
Ranked 4.83

Footsteps! I could hear them! They were coming! I needed to get away, as fast as I could I ran down the stinky dark tunnel that twisted and turned but I could still hear the footsteps behind me. I was so tired, my leg...

Sound of Footsteps Course package
by helen
Ranked 4.67

I glared nervously down the dark alleyway. I heard the footsteps approaching fast. If I wanted to escape, I would have to go in there. Finally, I made up my mind and bolted down the alley. It was less than half as ...

Course package
by XavierK
Ranked 4.5

I was alone at home. My brother was at scouts and my mum and dad were at work. I was doing homework that my teacher gave me. I suddenly heard soft footsteps. There wasn't supposed to be anyone at home. "Mum, dad are y...

Forest Footsteps[Final Draft] Writing Club Course package
by Zayed
Ranked 4.5

P1: Waking up in the forest alone {tone: Scary} P2: Following a trail of footsteps {tone: excited} P3: Finding two paths where footsteps stop {tone: suspenseful} P4: Choosing the right path and going home {tone:...

Sample essay for QUESTION 26 - Footsteps by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.33

The footsteps echoed through the passageway, for some irrational reason Marie found them comforting. Maybe it was because of the familiar repetitive sound or maybe because it reminded Marie of a time many years ago or...

The last seconds of my life? Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Ranked 4.27

Kai the duckling was having so much fun that he didn't pay attention to his surroundings. His heart was pounding with excitement chasing the beautiful butterfly. Soon he was too tired to play and the butterfly left. A...

Footsteps Writing Club Course package
by EBWhite4
Ranked 4.17

In the small lime green oval of St Hilda’s primary Bradley was getting pumped for the 2016 annual interschool athletics. Bradley was competing in the 100m sprint. He was starting to feel apprehensive and extremely ner...

The kidnapped president Writing Club
by MEMFOX4
Ranked 4.0

It was hot. It was stuffy. It was like an oven. The president was kidnapped and tied up in a hot stuffy room. At least he thought it was a hot stuffy room. It was actually a wardrobe, but he didn't know that because h...

Following My Dreams Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.0

Everyday, I'd watch the same video over and over again. No matter how many times I'd watch it, it would've given me a spring to my step and a smile on my face. I've told everyone that when I grow up, I'd like to be ex...

"i could hear footstepts" Course package
by Vindhya
Ranked 4.52

one step and a time Ashely step down her creaky staircase. Ashely would be home before the crack of dawn. Ashely was heading to Himple woods inside of Himple wood was the haunted house that no one has dared to enter s...

Footsteps Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.52

The alarm had been ringing for at least 20 minutes now, and the school had been put into a full lockdown. My teacher had ordered us all to get against the wall so we couldn't be seen, some of the kids were already in ...

Footsteps Writing Club
by MEMFOX3
Ranked 3.67

“Lunch time!” Dave’s mum exclaimed. Dave came rushing down from his bedroom after receiving the message. He got angry as he was disturbed while watching his favourite Harry Potter movie, ‘The Deathly Hallows, Part One...

Footsteps and Detectives by GAYATRI Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.5

MIND CANT REMEMBER SOMETHING-SLEEPING FOOTSTEPS DECTECTIVES SEARCHING MIND--HAS TO TELL BOSS NEXT DAY DOES'T KNOW--GOING TOTELL POPS IN HEAD I searched my brain rapidly, for I had been told just yesterday. My afro ...

Footsteps Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 3.5

It was dark when Holly slid in her bed, no light, no nothing. She grabbed her favorite book and turned her lamp on. Holly pulled the thick, dusty cover apart then started to read. It was only few minutes when Holly...

Footsteps
by anonymous
Ranked 3.33

The footsteps are nearing... It is a dark and gloomy night, Bob and I have snuck out of our houses to seek for the Guardian's Chest. The Guardian's Chest is a chest full of money and a special gem unknown to oth...

Stress in the Olympics to a whole new level Writing Club
by Lucky
Ranked 3.33

The 1000 metre contest was nearing. Usain bolt was tensed. He had never had experience of doing this.He was left by his mum who would continually say ",Just run, don't think about winning or losing, just run."He knew ...

Footsteps Writing Club
by EBWhite3
Ranked 3.3

Kelly was walking back from school, looking for another adventure. Every day he would get lost in an abandoned street or find another secret passageway from one place to another. Today, however, was different. U...

bad times Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

dear diary sep 12,1987 Me and my friends jon, aarav, vik were sailing through the Tasman sea. After hours and hours of sailing we reached the dtr (dain tree rainforest). It has now been two days. Today jon was g...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

I put on my pyjamas and went into my comfortable bed as my parents tucked me in bed. Tomorrow was a big day because I had a test so I tried to sleep however I just couldn't. So many things were on my mind and I was ...

The Hallows Footsteps
by anonymous
Unranked

I heard it, I could feel the coldness of its breath, its light footsteps. I was shivering from the tip of my nose till the end of my spine. I could feel its drool, I could also see the redness of its eyes. It didn’t k...

The Winged Menace (Edited) Course package
by Skyler Bui
Unranked

I was getting ready to go to sleep. I opened up a book and started reading. After a while, I stopped- and heard a soft noise. Step. Step. Step. I rubbed my ears and listened more closely to the disturbing noise. Inste...

Footsteps Course package
by Skyler Bui
Unranked

I was getting ready to go to sleep. I opened up a book and started reading. After a while I stopped- and heard a soft noise. Step. Step. Step. I rubbed my ears and listened more closely to the disturbing noise. Instea...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

I walked upstairs as my parents tucked me on the bed; my bed was always so comfortable and I always felt safe under the blankets. I closed my eyes trying to sleep and then started to think about the horror movie I had...

Course package
by Jess D
Unranked

1- someone is stealing from friend bag 2- friend wants revenge 3- attempts to steal from friends but here's foot steps 4- gets caught but firns giv back As June and Tay walked to school, they talked about how b...

Bloodcurdling Footsteps
by Harshad
Unranked

Splash! Splash! Splash! The puddles in the uneven concrete wet my brand new shoes as my adrenaline pumps. My head feels heavy and my tummy grumbles. I catch a glimpse behind me and instantly turn my head back. I sprin...

Cold Red Blood
by Harshad
Unranked

Theo ran through the narrow alleyway. The sound of footsteps followed him as he tried his best to escape. Drops of blood dripped down his arms. He was losing strength. His body ached and the sound of footsteps seemed ...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

As silent as a mouse, my feet were quietly padding along the golden sand. I heard, my sister, Belle, laugh and say "Stella, I can hear you!". I gave sharp turn and saw Belle charging at full power, my footsteps quicke...

Footsteps Course package
by Joanne
Unranked

As silent as a mouse, I was walking down our tranquil street while my big sister was behind me. She knew I was always scared when I get scared so she kept scaring me. “Stop it!”I gnarled at her “You know I hate it!”...

Footsteps! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The shimmer of the ghostly white shadow radiated into my room but it was still only substantial to see obscure and hazy figures. My eyes were dragging but I was reluctant to let it dominate. Unfortunately, I fell infe...

Footsteps! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The shimmer of the ghostly white shadow radiated into my room but it was still only substantial to see obscure and hazy figures. My eyes were dragging but I was reluctant to let it dominate. Unfortunately, I fell infe...

footsteps Writing Club
by ArjyBargy
Unranked

I heard the tip-toes of the vikings outside and the rats scampering on my roof. I quietly hid under the steps, and when I stepped out, there was some bedraggled guy. His face was smugged with black grease and he had t...

gaint footsteps on a sparkling beach
by MilkyTheCow
Unranked

"watcha doin'" Quinn said to Ginny with a wink as he walked towards where we were sitting on the beach watching the crashing waves. Ginny laughed at this and told Quinn that she was bored. Being Quinn, he jumped up an...

Footsteps Writing Club
by Caitlin
Unranked

Lara ran across the land that her parents owned. It had just rained and now everywhere Lara stepped her boots made an imprint on the mud. Suddenly she heard a branch crack, she spun around but saw nothing but a trail ...

Footsteps Writing Club
by Caitlin
Unranked

Lara ran across the land that her parents owned. It had just rained and now everywhere Lara stepped her boots made an imprint on the mud. Suddenly she heard a branch crack, she spun around but saw nothing but a trail ...

Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

I lay in bed after dinner. Mum and dad went out to the restaurant, while I was grounded. I buried my body under pillows and blankets. Sweat ran down by my body and the loneliness got to me. I decided to go downsta...

Footsteps Of The Dark Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

One time, a boy named Jack who dressed in blue overalls went into The Forest of Midnight. At day people would go hunting for wild boars, but at midnight, it was a fantasy place! Jack walked into the forest with only ...

Footsteps Writing Club
by EBWhite1
Unranked

The sky was a clear bright blue. Splash! I dived in into the clear water.I had a perfect view of the fishes and the seaweed that laid around the seabed. I then popped my head out of the water only to find the sound o...

Footsteps Writing Club
by JRRTolkien3
Unranked

Melanie woke up and found herself in a forest after she was hypnotized.The forest was haunted and had greeny fog. Melanie gulped and swallowed the fear.She had no phone to call,no money to pay or anything ...

War Prisoner
by Oscar
Unranked

Plan: -trussed up in room. -overhear Hitler, Nazi officer and a fraulien(doctor) -free myself with knife -they enter, i stab Nazi officer and kick doc in guts, whilst grabbing NO's pistol, and pistol-whip Hitl...

War Prisoner
by Oscar
Unranked

Plan: -trussed up in room. -overhear Hitler, Nazi officer and a fraulien(doctor) -free myself with knife -they enter, i stab Nazi officer and kick doc in guts, whilst grabbing NO's pistol, and pistol-whip Hitler. ...

Footsteps
by Hanujan
Unranked

Small bits of ice plummeted down from my body straight to the ground. My whole body was shaking as I searched around for food. Nothing there. Just pieces of snow. It plummeted down from the air. I looked worried aroun...





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