Sample Essays

The Picnic Plot Course package
by helen
Ranked 8.33

Joyful cries were all that could be heard as the children walked the winding path over the field. The day had finally come for the friends' annual picnic. This was the day where the children put all their sorrows asid...

A picnic
by Renee
Ranked 7.3

The sun was bright in the sky, and there were no clouds in sight. The more Sally thought about it, the more she realised how this was the perfect weather for a picnic. Shaking with excitement, she ran down to the base...

A Picnic
by Hannah Thai
Ranked 6.93

This piece was written mainly on the prompt "A Picnic" Sunny day, happy day. A day perfect for a picnic… The sun shone brightly in the blue sky emitting rays towards the crisp green grass. Small droplets of dew gl...

A picnic Course package
by Oliver
Ranked 7.01

Bev skipped cheerfully along the rocky path, under the stumpy oak trees, whistling her favourite tune. She was on her way to a picnic with her friend, Sally Mueller. "Look who it is!" exclaimed Sally, when Bev arrived...

Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 6.33

Behind the hills, the sun peaked brightly. The wind whispered through the trees as the cheerful sun rose. Five children were setting up their very first picnic in the park. The children could smell the freshness of th...

Sample essay for QUESTION 13 - A picnic by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.17

As we lay on the ragged quilt the only thing visible was the flattening waves of rippling spring grass. All the breathes taken from the fresh morning sky split a content grin on our faces. No one dared to speak for th...

Food, Fun and FRIENDS? Course package
by Hannah
Ranked 5.67

'Super yummy food just for me, CHECK! Ice cold lemonade, CHECK! A warm, fuzzy blanket, CHECK! And my favourite novel, check!' Jane zipped up her backpack and flung open the door. 'Going somewhere special?' her mot...

A picnic Course package
by EH
Ranked 5.87

“Perfect weather for a picnic,” stated Sarah, everyone agreed as they set up the large, new picnic blanket Sarah had brought. Today, was Sarah’s 11th birthday and she had invited four of her closest friends to have a...

The prank picnic Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 5.84

Jaiden sat on top of her picnic rug, staring at her sandwich. A worm, sticking out the middle. She wanted to run away, but fear planted her to the floor. She hated worms, as much as she loved sandwiches. But then, som...

The picnic Course package
by Annoymous
Ranked 4.82

plan picnic shopping meet at the park has a picnic go home conclusion One Tuesday Sam thought that it would be nice to have a picnic with his friends. He realised it would be even better to have it at the new park a ...

A Picnic Course package
by student
Ranked 4.0

"Sarah get the basket on the way to the car will you!"called Mum from downstairs "Yes!" Sarah the fourteen year old answered. She ran downstairs with excitement. Earlier in the week Sarah's family had decided to go on...

A picnic Writing Club Course package
by Eden
Ranked 3.67

As the sun slowly peeked out of the hills, I secretly sneaked out of my room and rushed over to the phone downstairs, careful not to wake either mum or dad. As I walked towards the phone downstairs, I accidentally ste...

The picnic Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 3.33

Plot: having a school picnic at the park but someone is hurt p1: going to the school picnic p2: having fun p3: someone got an injury p4: going home On the way to the school pi...

Sample essay for QUESTION 13 - A picnic by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 3.33

Amber flopped down on the fleecy quilt and stared at the rolling hills. It was a particularly hot spring day and sweat glistened on all the five sibling's foreheads leaving them listless and sluggish. Ruby was daintil...

the picnic Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.17

The picnic I woke up to the beautiful smelling food; we were going to the beach for a picnic. It was a scorching hot day and we were going to the cool beach. We packed up the amazing smelling food into the back of th...

A picnic Course package
by Deeksha
Ranked 2.83

We were really excited when Dad announced that we were going bird- watching! Out of all of the Lawson family, I was the most excited. I started packing all the equipment and other necessaries for the trip, I was in su...

The Picnic Course package
by baski
Ranked 2.33

I couldn't sleep. I was too excited. We were going on a picnic tomorrow with Tom and his family and was going to be so fun. It was going to be big feast with more fun activities following. There was only 12 hours left...


by Bryan
Unranked

My friends and I were all chatting with smiles and grins on our faces while eating mouth-watering food and lying down under the shade of a tree. I saw sparrows on the grass providing the joy to the idyllic scene, I cl...

The Picnic Course package
by Hcalculator
Unranked

"Mmm", Amy muttered, gently sucking on her favourite raspberry, jelly sandwich. "This food is the best Amy!", Steve added, licking his lips with his jelly-filled tongue. "Make sure you thank your mother for this", Cla...

Course package
by VG
Unranked

Lola, Suzie, John, Tim and Jim were best friends. They all went to kindergarten and into school together. They organised sleepovers almost every week, they had lunch at each others houses on the weekend and after scho...

The picnic Course package
by Annoymous
Unranked

One Tuesday Sam thought that it would be nice to have a picnic with his friends. He realised it would be even better to have it at the new park a few streets away. Not soon later he was in his car chugging down the ro...

A picnic Course package
by EH
Unranked

Jennifer was a new girl at Riverol State School. Her palms were sweaty and her tummy was all tied up as she walked slowly into the wide open gates of her new school. Other students stared at the sight of a student the...

Surprising Picnic
by perthmum
Unranked

I was having an amazing day at the park when suddenly i saw a group of kids having a wonderful picnic and they were laughing so much, i don't know why they were laughing so i decided to go up to them and ask them wha...

The Best Day Course package
by Bhavi
Unranked

Today is the best day of our lives. When i say our lives i mean mine and my friends Bob, Jeff and Sam. The reason why we are happy is because today we are going on a picnic. I am the most excited out of all of us bec...

The Picnics Course package
by fufz
Unranked

Phew! I had finally done it. I had packed for three picnics in one day. I huffed and puffed to the car and I rushed to the door and stepped not the pedal. I was as busy as a bee today. I luckily I had all the picnics ...

went to meet my girlfriend
by rustic boy
Unranked

on the last weekend, I had planned to meet my girlfriend. so I went to meet her at Gokarna smarak park. Actually her name is Sangita Bhattarai.She live in Kathmandu also..i have loved with her for five months.so I was...

The Picnic Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

The three siblings slowly walked down the long winding path to the lush grassy meadow. They set up the picnic blanket under a shady cool spot. The trio took out the food from the picnic basket and neatly set it all ar...

Course package
by XavierK
Unranked

It was a beautiful, sunny day at the top of a hill. My family and I were having a wonderful picnic eating salad and subway for lunch. It took us a one hour drive to get here and now we could finally relax. But then ou...

Course package
by XavierK
Unranked

It was a beautiful, sunny day at the top of a hill. My family and I were having a wonderful picnic eating salad and subway for lunch. It took us a one hour drive to get here and now we could finally relax. But then ou...

A Picnic Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Unranked

I went around my friends houses, asking if they'd want to come to a picnic. My little brother decided to come along, and our mum and dad drove us to a park. All ten of us brought food, like pizza, cheese and crackers...

Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

Behind the hills the sun peaked brightly. The wind blew hard through the trees as the sun rose. Five children were setting up for their picnic in the park. The children could smell the fresh food for their picnic. Su...

My picnic with friends Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Today me & all my friends (6 friends) went out on a picnic. All of our parents came. My mum set out the blanket, Dad with the plates & all the other parents brought food (even ours) . We ate our food while our parent...

The Picnic Course package
by Jacy
Unranked

I was in a park with four of my friends Leanne, Max, Sam and Tony. They were my good friends from school. The park was a few blocks from school. We always walked there after school to have a picnic and to play soccer....

The Best Picnic Ever Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Unranked

Behind the hills, the sun peaked brightly. The wind whispered through the trees as the cheerful sun rose. Five children were setting up their very first picnic in the park. The children could smell the freshness of th...

family picnic Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"a picnic?not really my idea of fun"stated Molly oh how much i hated her she always had to rain on our parade or should i say picnic "yeah we know "i said back "oh look a perfect spot for our perfect picnic" said mum ...

family picnic Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"a picnic?not really my idea of fun"stated Molly oh how much i hated her she always had to rain on our parade or should i say picnic "yeah we know "i said back "oh look a perfect spot for our perfect picnic" said mum ...

The Picnic Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

It was a perfect day for a picnic. We could ride our scooters on the path next to the road while the sun beams down on us until the sunset. Even then we could watch the vibrant and vivid colours of the sunset. We arri...

Hillarys picnic Course package
by vyom
Unranked

We spread the picnic rug on the soft, neatly trimmed grass of Hillarys and stuffed ourselves with delicious jam sandwiches even though they were not white bread. We went to the change rooms to get dressed in bathers a...

Hillarys Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Hilary's Course package
by vyom
Unranked

A picnic Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

the horrible disaster Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

In bed I say, “Today is the day where we go to our first picnic”. Dad, sister and me of course are coming I get out of bed straight away. I make tea (because my family is addicted to tea) make breakfast and get ready....

Sample essay for QUESTION 13 - A picnic by Leanne Hopkins Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Unranked

Plot Go inside a tree and find a world of mini creatures. B having a great time at picnic. Meet goblin. M shrink and go inside a tree to world of goblins. Boy goes to goblin king. A Fun One day, a group of fr...

The Picnic Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

Wash the dishes, dry my hair, cook some breakfast, make the beds and curl my hair (that was hard!). Those were all I did for my mom in my whole morning. Who did she think I was? A slave? I glanced longingly at the win...

The picnic Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

The shimmering sun beamed through the canopies. How I wish the parents could join us. Unfortunately, the parents are afraid of the pesky insects that swarm over our food. Food, food. FOOD! Everyone loves baking in the...

The picnic Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

The shimmering sun beamed through the canopies. How I wish the parents could join us. Unfortunately, the parents are afraid of the pesky insects that swarm over our food. Food, food. FOOD! Parents love baking in the s...





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