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Swimming finale Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.65

My feet were pushed up against the rough and worn out diving block with my hands griped onto the edge. My heart was beating so fast, my brain processing thoughts over and over. It was not until this moment when I felt...

Winning the race
by Hannah Thai
Ranked 8.0

My feet were pushed up against the rough and resistant diving block with my hands clutching on to the edge. My heart was beating its way out, my brain processing thoughts over and over. It was not until this moment wh...

The Big Race Course package
by Harry
Ranked 8.14

Sam had been practicing for years. Now he was here, at the Annual Snowboarding Competition. This was the day that all his hard work would pay off. He got out of his car and looked up to the snowy peak above him. His s...

Keep your eye on the line Course package
by JEN
Ranked 8.01

I gripped my diving board as participants around me anxiously got ready. My race was next and I could see my parents with a big lilac banner saying "go Ellina!" and custom made t-shirts. "Can the 11 year old girls ple...

The race Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.26

I could feel the fierce, powerful wind rushing against my face. It howled in my ears like a wolf on a full moon's night. My speed was pushing my body back in my seat. I was In 8th position, and to get a trophy ...

Victory on the track Writing Club
by Son Le
Ranked 6.67

As I scanned through the web of boringness, to my astonishment, an ad appeared saying that there will be a race car competition starting tomorrow at 3pm. I could not hold the mouse tight enough to hit the application ...

Winning the race Writing Club Course package
by Eden
Ranked 6.0

This was it. Today was the day I would make my school proud. Today was the inter-school cross-country race, where I would be competing against students from other schools. This year I was up against one of the stronge...

Winning the race Course package
by _ForeverBooks
Ranked 6.0

The day had come. It was time for me to represent my school in the biggest race ever- Cross Country. As I lined up and took a long and calm breath, I could see all the foreign people who have come to watch me. Lookin...

Winning the Race Course package
by helen
Ranked 5.67

The sun shone down on the grassy backyard as the Snails and the Slugs gathered for their annual race. Stevie Snail led the Snail clan, competitively eyeing his rival, Sam Slug. Sam had beaten him by milliseconds last ...

Bicycle Race Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Ranked 5.67

I peddled through the woods eagerly, on a small dirt path, with a wooden fence to the right, racing. there was a river on the far right, and a cold metal bridge. the smell of sweat clogged my nose as spun my red and b...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.33

Amy jogged at a steady pace, trying to stay towards the front of the swarm of people. The waves lapped silently on to the sandy shore as she padded along. Amy's golden locks whipped out from behind her, catching the w...

Dawdle Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 5.0

Beads of sweat trickled down my forehead. The day was unbearably hot baring the same amount of humidity as the Amazon Rainforest. The only thing to look forward to was the occasional wisps of cool breeze and of course...

WINNING THE RACE Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.67

The wind rushed through my hair as I cantered up the steep, grassy hill. The jump ahead of me seemed to be getting higher every time I took a small stride. The jump finally approached, and WHOOSH, I soared over it. ...

Winning the race! Writing Club
by MEMFOX2
Ranked 4.67

The crimson sun released its burning waves, which dragged nervousness closer to my sweaty body. In a few hours, I was going to participate in the race that would determine the fastest runner in the school, the annual ...

Course package
by Oliver
Ranked 4.97

I twiddled my thumbs as my name got called to the track. Sweat trickled down my face and I wiped my sweaty palms on my shirt. I jogged to the field, trying not to waste a lot of energy. "3,2,1, GO!" the referee shout...

Course package
by Yash
Ranked 4.33

“SNAP!” Harry stormed over a stick in his wake, as he thundered off through the practice course, determined to win the running competition. He bounded past the finish line and checked his time. “Incredible!” he though...

The unexpected winner Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.83

Bang!!, the starting gun blew I felt like a bullet flying through the air. I was passing all the other components. ‘’Okay, concentrate now’’, I said to myself as I passed another competitor. I was coming sixth but I...

The unexpected winners Course package
by Eric
Ranked 3.6

"We have decided that out two entrants in the 2014 Great Boat Race will be Bob and Don Morgan. Finaly they felt the great feeling of relief. All the time waiting for the nominations but before all of that, the trainin...

WINNING THE RACE by GAYATRI S Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.33

Girl angry Thinks nervousment day of the race end unconscious wakes up to come first I looked up. My mum and dad's faces were smiling with faith that wasn't real. They had forced me to join the race. They had ma...

Winning the race Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 3.33

I walked down and sat in my b I awkwardly smiled as I tried to believe them.ay. Today was the school carnival and I was in the running competitions. I must compete in every race and complete it. I sat under the tent- ...

Winning the race. Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 3.0

PLAN: PLOT: The girl never wins a race but today she came first(5 opponents) P1: Started the race P2: 1 tripped and tripped the others P3: competing the last opponents (fastest one) but got an asthma attack P4:...

Winning The Race Course package
by baski
Ranked 2.67

There was only five minutes until the race would start and I was starting to get nervous. Butterflies in my stomach, pins and needles in my feet. It was all upon me to beat team blue and the other teams and win the tr...

The Finals Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.67

One astonishing day, Claire had just arrived at the Final running race. There were 30 people running in the race.The starters were about to shoot the gun. BANG! Everyone started cheering.They were of to a tremendous ...

Winning the Race! Course package
by AnonymousMarch2020
Ranked 3.19

The sun was shining above my head and the crowd cheering loudly. I could see my parents waving at me and saying good luck for the race. Everyone lined up on the starting line for the 1000 meter cross country then thei...

The Race ( main event and conclusion) Course package
by Zayaan
Ranked 1.67

The big day had come and the little boy was very jumpy and excited. He tried to stay calm and went on the race track. The grass was very shiny and with sparkly,glistening dew. The little boy got ready and started at t...

The Race Course package
by Zayaan
Ranked 1.67

There was a little boy who wanted to win the running race in their school at least once. But the last four three year he came fourth then the year after he came third and the year after that he came second. The little...

The Big Race Course package
by Harry
Unranked

Sam had been practicing for years. Now he was here, at the Annual Snowboarding Competition. This was the day that all his hard work would pay off. He got out of his car and looked up to the snowy peak above him. His ...

Winning the race Course package
by Hcalculator
Unranked

Haze looked out of the window, sensing a feeling of deep nervousness, as she sensed butterflies fluttering in her stomach. Just thinking about the race developed a thought of losing, and being made fun of. She knew sh...

Winning the Race
by Bryan
Unranked

I was going to represent my school in the one hundred meter race. That day my heart palpitated when I stepped onto the race track. I bit my lip, sweat flooded my body as I stood on the race track shaking. I stared ove...

we won Course package
by Annoymous
Unranked

It was one misty day, the race was announced, many people gathered around the podium where the mayor was standing. All aged from adult to child anyone could compete. The goal was to row a wooden boat across the river ...

Run and Win! Course package
by S8G8
Unranked

Today was the big day. I had done so many exercises and practices for this day. I got into my sports clothes and dashed out the door and jogged to my school. This was the big race. I had to win!! I lined up at the ...

Bringing Home Gold Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

"On your marks, get set... GO!!!" ordered the referee with his whistle. I sped off, pumping my legs with energy. A quick glance to my right indicated that I was neck to neck with my worst enemy, Oscar Larwood. Soon I ...

Bad Sportsmanship! Course package
by Hannah
Unranked

Zoe bolted past Sasha and felt a rush of wind as she flew past the finish line and won the race! 'Yes! I'm going to go to the States competition!' she thought. People clapped and cheered. The timer looked at his stopw...

Winning the race. Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Unranked

PLAN: PLOT: The girl never wins a race but today she came first(5 opponents) P1: Started the race P2: 1 tripped and tripped the others P3: competing the last opponents (fastest one) but got an asthma attack P4:...

The great race
by anonymous
Unranked

I can't believe it my friend Champ signed me up to the great race and I'm barely in shape he started me doing soccer games and swimming but I didn't think it would be leading to this.Now Champ wakes me up at 4'o clock...

The Carnival
by Hema
Unranked

I was getting my running shoes on when a horn blew. The horn is a message for the runners to come to the track.So I had to go, I climbed up the stairs and walked over to the track. The runners had gotten ready and the...

The Best Day Ever Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

I warmed up my legs and prepared to run in the annual school running competition. The weather conditions were so bad I had to wipe my head every five seconds.There were only a few seconds before the race commenced. I ...

The unexpected winner( intro and first paragraph) Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

The day had come, the race day. The day of the 200 m sprint. I had been practicing day and night for this race. When I came to school our school sport teacher announced for the age group runners to come down to the ra...

Coming First (Intro & First Body only) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Pew! The gun was shot. I ran like Wes was in for build-ups. I felt like a jet plane, flying off an- 'no, I need to concentrate', I thought. I flew away, ran into 5th and leaped for speed.…

Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

When the race starter said go, I tripped over at the start. I thought that was it I wouldn't win the race. But I stood up and started running. The other runners way ahead of me. But again, I heard the same voice. This...

Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

It was the day, the day had come. The 100 meters sprint. I have been practicing this day and night. This tested my endurance over the week. I had came to the school, in the racing area the racers went by age group. Th...

Dawdle Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

Beads of sweat trickled down my forehead. The day was unbearably hot baring the same amount of humidity as the Amazon Rainforest. The only thing to look forward to was the occasional wisps of cool breeze and of course...

Dawdle Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

Beads of sweat trickled down my forehead. The day was unbearably hot baring the same amount of humidity as the Amazon Rainforest. The only thing to look forward to was the occasional wisps of cool breeze and of course...

Winning the race Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today is very exciting, because we have my very first swimming carnival. The sad thing is i am not really a good swimmer and i don't like swimming. Anyway i am going to try my best because its not about winning it is ...

Winning the race Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today is very exciting, because we have my very first swimming carnival. The sad thing is i am not really a good swimmer and i don't like swimming. Anyway i am going to try my best because its not about winning it is ...

Winning the race Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

For the next Few weeks I was training harder than anyone. It was not a lie that I was covered in sweat and mud by the time that I had finished but I need to get win that race desperately. Getting into that school was ...

Winning the race Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

Dan and I were practising for the upcoming race. If I won I could get a scholarship to the best school in Brisbane. Dan was smarter than me but I was way faster and sportier. I needed to get into that school, because ...





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