QUESTION 18 - When I helped someone

Write a creative piece to the following prompt: When I helped someone

When I helped an injured puppy.
by Lucky

I helped a poor puppy once.I was strolling down the newly paved footpath in the park once when I saw some big teenagers doing some hitting action.The teens look a bit like gangsters and they wore jeans and a black shirt.I asked them ,"what are you doing ?". Then they replied in a rude manner ,"It's none of your business" and grunted. I waited and waited and then they revealed what they were hitting.A white puppy was sleeping their , starting to wimp in agony. The teens now just walked away except for one teen who came towards me and said,"This mad dog scratched our expensive Lamborghini and tried to bite our friend.Ignoring what he said , I sped off to the puppy and started to apply some bandages that I always brought with me when going to the park .Then I gave some antiseptic and some ointment to relieve the dog. Just to make sure the dog was fine on it's own, I brought it to my house. Mum and Dad immediately helped the dog with some more ointment and gave it some meat. The dog healed a bit and it slept overnight with us. The next day, someone came to our house.It was a lady and then I remember yesterday. She was terrified and was sitting their and afterwards left with no hope it will survive.She picked up the cutest puppy I have ever seen and hopped into the car and drove out of view. 'I will never forget that day ,' I think.

Writer- Prudhvi Veer Guduru


Word count: 262
submitted over 7 years ago

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