Sample Essays

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by Eric
Ranked 9.33

I could smell the salt from the great blue ocean wafting through the clear clean air. My eyes were dazzled by the reflection of the sun on the sand. My little brother Andre and I were building a giant sandcastle. Our ...

Sandcastles Course package
by Bahar Emami
Ranked 8.0

I stared, awestruck at the amazing scenery. From the shimmering golden sand, to the blinding light reflecting of the crystal blue water. I love the beach. The beauty of it carries me to a whole new majestic wor...


by Tony
Ranked 7.67

"Last one to the seashore is the rotten egg!" shouted Tim. Ben and Tim ran as fast as their legs could carry them from the beach shack Grandma owned. The boys were staying with her for the weekend. Due to the busyness...

Sand castles Course package
by Tea Jasinski
Ranked 7.48

I could smell the salt from the great blue ocean wafting through the clear clean air. My eyes were dazzled by the reflection of the sun on the sand. My little brother Andre and I were building a giant sandcastle. Our ...

The sandcastle Course package
by Anonymous2010
Ranked 7.39

I could smell the salt of the great blue ocean. My feet sinked in the hot sand and I could feel the salty water reach my feet. I had some issues at school so for the past few days I was really depressed but today was ...

Sandcastles by Dom Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.32

I could smell the salt from the great blue ocean wafting through the clear clean air. I was mesmerised by the reflection of the sun on the water. My little brother Henry and I were building a giant sandcastle. Our fam...

Sandcastles Course package
by HJ
Ranked 7.22

Dave added shells to the tall sandcastles he proudly constructed with his little brother, Tom. Dave was building the tower and he could not stop putting all the various kinds of shells he found that were sunbaking on ...

Sandcastle Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 7.12

The sea spray flew out everywhere. I could smell the air, an elixir for the sadness of our dad's death. I adjusted my glasses again, looking at Jake. He looked back at me from where he was trying to find a stick. Even...

Sand war Course package
by Aaron
Ranked 7.08

Two delicate sand castles stood side by side, ready for the deadliest war that ever happened in sand castle history. The king or Alex palace was, well Alex. he was facing an intruder from the closer sand castle, Thoma...

Sandcastles Course package
by Deeksha
Ranked 6.67

PLANNING Intro:  Ocean  brother- Adi  sand tools  mountainous sandcastle Middle:  we had always loved building sandcastle – especially Adi  Adi was a cheerful and a simple soul  Ha had a round face w...

The Sandcastle Course package
by helen
Ranked 6.67

The crystal clear sea rolled on and off the beach, emitting a salty sea breeze. The soft brown cushion of sand sunk under the feet of Josh and his little brother Jamie. Both their shorts were spotlessly white. Josh's ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.67

The little boy carefully patted the sand into the bucket . Almost all of his memories were made here on this beach.He was sure he would spend his life here on this beach building sandcastles for that is what he wanted...

Sandcastles! Course package
by Hannah
Ranked 6.92

"Yes!" I screamed with joy "We are going to the beach!". My family and I were going to the beach which was called 'Jarvis Bay'. I loved the white sand, the waves which were good for boogie-boarding and especially the ...

Sandcastles Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.79

Rip! Rip! Rip!
by anonymous
Ranked 6.6

Whoosh! Whoosh! Whoosh! The ocean roared. Seagulls flied in the sky as if they had just been free. I could taste the sea as I went in the ocean. I felt the cold water touching my legs. I looked back at my brothers who...

Sandcastles
by Vicky
Ranked 6.45

As I sat miserably on the jagged tip of a rock ledge, the breeze washed over me and I felt a trail of hope in the wind. However, this wasn’t enough to satisfy my hunger for a friend. Every object in sight, even the bl...

Living in royalty Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.11

Yes! Finally today was the day, my family and I were finally going to the beach. My family consisted of me, my brother Nate, and my parents. We had recently moved to Melbourne, Australia and we heard that the beaches ...

Writing Club Course package
by DRSEUSS1
Ranked 5.77

P:Brothers spend time together building sandcastles. Water comes up and washes it away, but they build another one. B:Brothers visit the beach and make a sandcastle. M: Water washes it away. E: They work together t...

The best sandcastle Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 3.67

Bobby lived near the beach. He also went there often with his brother Jamie. When they went to the beach they always built a sandcastle. One day there was a rumbling sound and a mover truck pulled into the house next ...

The sandcastle Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 3.33

Plot: Making sand castles but it rains P1: Went to the beach with mum P2: made the biggest castle P3: Rains and sandcastle wrecked P4: Go home WRITING On the way to the beach I saw eagles swooping above us. I...

Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.33

There my brother and I were this close to the beach we could smell the salt on the shore and we could hear the waves crashing onto the rocky shore. Finally, I thought to myself we have arrived at the beach and now my ...

The Great Sandcastle Competition
by anonymous
Ranked 3.92

This was the day. We were entering the biggest competition yet, the great Sandcastle Compitition. As James and I got in the car mum set off and we were cruising along. We were on the trip for a good 25 minutes. We pl...

Sandcastle confusion. Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.0

Pushing my glasses back up on my nose, I rested my head on the stiff car seat. We were going to the beach. As we drove closer to the golden sand dunes, I began to think what my brother and I would do. Go in the turquo...

sandcastles Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.0

Sandcastles My young brother John and I were at the beach watching the aqua blue waves crash onto the soft silky sand. When I came up with a great idea ‘’let’s build an amazing sandcastle’’, I said to John with a big...

Sandcastle Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 3.57

I was at the beach, burying my toes into the sand. I would rather swim, but I was too scared, for a shark might appear and bite me. My friend, Billy, was making a sandcastle. He loved making them. He wanted to be a pr...

Sandcastle competition Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.67

It was a nice and sunny day at the beach. Liam wanted to participate in the sandcastle competition. He sat down in his seat. Liam was of to an over satisfying start. His hand were tumbling. One wrong move and he will...

The Sandcastle Course package
by Cloud!
Ranked 2.77

"It is time to go to the beach!" A boy with black hair called Jack exclaimed to his little brother in an annoyed voice. "Comming!" Called back his brother, Julian, in an excited voice. They got into the car as thei...

Sandcastles City
by Mal
Unranked

The cold breeze blew against Coby's face. The sand was nice and yellow and the sun was just rising. The sand was still wet from yesterday's rain but it was almost dry. He went up to where his brother, Nathan was sleep...

sand castles Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

The summer breeze swept over me, and the ocean sprayed over my face. I scooped the sand up and plopped it into my bucket. Then I patted it down using my shovel. After that, I flipped the bucket over then a newly made ...

Our Sandcastle Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

I grabbed my beach toys, packed my swimming costume, brought a few snacks, and headed downstairs, all ready for the trip! Me and my family were going to Second Valley for a holiday. We were going to stay there for a c...

Kinetic Sandcastles Aren't Original Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Hi I am Danny. I love the beach. I especially love making sandcastles with the sand. I used to only like making sandcastles with my kinetic sand. This all changed one day, when I decided to take my kinetic sand t...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

I smiled as soon as our parents said that we were going to the beach today; me and my brother loved beaches , the yellow sand, the awe-inspiring waves, the happy mood, the beach was like a paradise. Me and my brother ...

The Majesty of Sand Course package
by Myrah
Unranked

It was 1997 when it happened. I was short at the time, only 11 years old. I had lived with my father and three-year-old brother since my mother went away on a business trip. I hated sand and beaches at that time. I us...

Ping + Pang's sandcastle Course package
by Hcalculator
Unranked

The turquoise waves rushed across the golden seashore, refreshing it will a hint of cool, breezy water. Ping delicately stood up from the sinking sand, leaving a print of his backside on the land. He lured his younger...

The fun in making a sandcastle Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The crystal clear sea rolled on and off the beach, emitting a salty sea breeze. The soft brown cushion of sand sunk under the feet of Josh and his little brother Jamie. Both their shorts were spotlessly white. Josh's ...

Sandcastles Course package
by Oliver
Unranked

John and his little brother could not stay still for a single moment in the car because they were going to the beach. When the car stopped at the beach, John and his little brother ran to the beach to make sandcastles...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Abby had always loved building sandcastles. Every bit of free time she got, she spent it on sandcastles. Abby's family lived in Bribie Island, down by the beach. Her uncle had been a professional sandcastle builder an...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Abby had always loved building sandcastles. Every bit of free time she got, she spent it on sandcastles. Abby's family lived in Bribie Island, down by the beach. Her uncle had been a professional sandcastle builder an...

The Sandcastle Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

Today was going to be an exciting day cause we were going to go to the beach for our school trip. We all rushed into the bus in an happy mood. When we got to the beach we were permitted to get to change into our swimm...

I Made the World's Largest Sandcastle (in my dream) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Today I went to the beach to build a sandcastle. When I started all I had was a lump of wet sand. From that, I created a simple sandcastle with a moat and a flag. I modelled it into a castle with twin towers. I then t...

Making my first sandcastle Writing Club
by Lucky
Unranked

The sun rose in a crimson of gold and yellow and the clouds said hello to me when I entered the beach. This was my first time coming to the beach because my parents came here without me and with my brother so I knew t...

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"look at that little sandcastle Allie made doesn't it seem perfect enough to smash" smirked Frank his gang followed after "aw look little Allie Wallie cry" and then he took my spade and waved it in front of me menacin...

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"look at that little sandcastle Allie made doesn't it seem perfect enough to smash" smirked Frank his gang followed after "aw look little Allie Wallie cry" and then he took my spade and waved it in front of me menacin...

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"look at that little sandcastle Allie made doesn't it seem perfect enough to smash" smirked Frank his gang followed after "aw look little Allie Wallie cry" and then he took my spade and waved it in front of me menacin...

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by vyom Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today was the big day i am participating in the biggest sand castle competition in the city. I have been practicing for months. It is held in City Beach and there will be about 200 people there. I am so scared that i ...

Sandcastles Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today was the big day i am participating in the biggest sand castle competition in the city. I have been practicing for months. It is held in City Beach and there will be about 200 people there. I am so scared and i h...

Sandcastles Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

Jack and Jim were making sandcastles today.A spectacular way to spend the day with the sea and the sand.When suddenly they spotted someone from a distance calling for them to come. The boys both walked in one pace to...

Sandcastles Course package
by Nithika
Unranked

It was a Saturday morning and it was so hot that it felt like my house was an oven and I was being cooked. The annoying thing was that the air conditioner was not working. I stood there thinking of what to do as a bea...

Sandcastles Course package
by Nithika
Unranked

It was an Saturday morning and it was so hot that it felt like my house was an oven and I was being cooked. The annoying thing was that the air conditioner was not working. I stood there thinking of what to do as a be...

Sandcastles Course package
by Nithika
Unranked

Sample essay for QUESTION 15 - Sandcastles by Nicole
by Nicole
Unranked

Diego and his brother Daniel were at the beach …

Sandy paradise
by Kate
Unranked

"We're going to somewhere special today guys!," said Mum. It was a bothersome hot summer day, and our family of five spent our days lounging around the garden-our sanctuary. But today seemed so special my Mum-usually ...





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