Sample Essays

Sample essay for QUESTION 32 - Sudden change is painful by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 9.0

Immediately after I heard the news my legs went limp, as if crushing under the severity of the news. My eyes darted around the room wildly, looking for something to stop me from collapsing. But it was too late for soo...

Change is Painful
by Tony
Ranked 8.52

Our family used to be full of laughter. I giggled in my dreams just thinking about my life five years ago. I laughed so loudly that everyone in the house got woken up. Dad, my brother and I were having a pillow f...

The Longest Night Course package
by ITN
Ranked 8.23

Laughter filled the room as my family, and I played a board game later at night in a little town called Springsbloom. As the night grew older and we continued to play, I began to faintly hear the sound of a spark. It ...

Moving house
by Torch
Ranked 8.03

Rain lashed at Naomi’s family car window as it followed the moving van towards an unknown future. She watched as the house she has been calling home since she was born disappeared behind the street corner and a k...


by Ravina Panangalage
Ranked 7.85

Sudden Change is Painful Course package
by Dolphin
Ranked 7.63

“A sudden BANG! awoke me from my slumber; I crept out of my room to investigate… I cautiously snuck through the hallway, avoiding the squeaky floorboards. I entered the lounge, where I saw my mother, on the couch, wit...

Sudden change is painful
by Ravina Panangalage
Ranked 7.12

Hiroshima Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.63

"Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great sudden change." That is precisely what Joe felt, another 11-year-old schoolboy, felt like as the atom bomb fell from the sky. Seconds after the smoke had cleared aft...

Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Ranked 6.61

I feel a sudden pain in my chest. Like a thousand knives coming at me. I slowly sit down on my bed to process the news I have just been given. I hear a quiet sob and I look up at my parents but I realise it is me. All...

The Moving Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.0

I loved this house. It was easily accessible, it was clean and most importantly, there was a huge storage to store everything that needed to be put away. If I had to move, I would be on a level of depression and anxie...

The New School Course package
by helen
Ranked 5.33

"Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change." Simon definitely knew that now. How could Mary Shelley have been so clever? Had she gone through a change as big as moving school? That was what ...

Sudden change is painful Writing Club
by EBWhite3
Ranked 5.17

I looked at the old photo of my friend and me. I remembered the moment. The photo had been taken so long ago that the frame of the picture had started to crack. Now he was gone. Somewhere on the other side of the wo...

A Sudden Change Is Painful Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling2
Ranked 5.17

I looked at her with utter shock as my eyes filled with tears. I cannot believe her, my twin sister was… dead?! Tears flowed down my cheeks, my knees buckled and I crumpled to the ground. I cried and cried until a war...

“Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change." Course package
by Cooper
Ranked 5.63

It was not difficult to tell that this family was delighted. The father humming a tune while tapping the steering wheel, the little brother laughing with his mother, and a boy staring out of the window, admiring the g...

Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Ranked 5.07

James leapt up after hours of sleep, then realized his school bag sat beside his bed. The inevitable memories of school came back to him, but this it was his first day of high school, dreaded year 7. James panicked in...

Sudden change is painful Writing Club Course package
by Eden
Ranked 5.0

"Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change." These words repeated over Jack's head over and over as he sat on the unfamilier school bus. He had spent nights after nights weeping on his bed a...

Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 5.0

I was woken by the loud noises coming from downstairs. I was clue less, I didn’t know what happening. I jumped out of my bed, slipped my slippers on and headed downstairs. Nothing was there, the couches weren’t there,...

The Change Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.41

It was a cheerful Sunday morning and I was happily enjoying my challenging game my wonderful mother bought for Christmas. I didn't care what my busy mum was doing downstairs, but I can hear her hastily folding heavy b...

Sudden Change Is Painful. Take 3 Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 4.67

“Ryan, you are going to the local school tomorrow” Mum said. Waves of shock and fury ran through me, why hadn’t she told me before? Couldn’t we have at least discussed how I felt about it? I had never been this angry ...

Sudden change is painful Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.08

P1: Figure out mother is dead P2: Struggling with life P3: Weird dream, doesn't care P4: Learns something useful P1: I looked down on her grave; wishing it had never happened. I saw dad trying not to cry when ...

Understanding life Writing Club
by Elaria
Ranked 4.5

When I was a little boy I loved playing soccer, until I broke my arm off when a boy tried to tackle me while I was bobbing and accidently jumped onto my arm. It was a horrible moment and a big change. My parents rushe...

Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change.
by Minh
Ranked 4.33

t was a perfect day to compete in the tennis grand finals. The sun had risen, little wind disrupted the games and I was fully prepared. Considering that I had flawlessly won every single game leading up to this one, I...

Sudden change- Moving Houses Writing Club
by Raina
Ranked 4.33

The radiant rays of sunshine warmed, Carly's face, as she heard the bell ring. She ran out to meet her friends, excited for their play-date at her house. Books in hand, she strolled past the rusted old gates that hadn...

Sudden Change Is Painful. Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 4.33

“Ryan, you are going to the local school tomorrow” my mum said. I was shocked and furious, why did she never tell me before, couldn’t she have at least consulted me and see how I felt? I had never been as angry as I w...

Writing Club Course package
by Marissa
Ranked 4.33

Plan: P1: Girl's parents go on holiday while girl stays at aunt's place P2: Plane crashes P3: Girl is upset P4: Girl lives with aunt ___________________________________________________________________ " Michel...

Writing Club Course package
by LEWISCARROLL3
Ranked 4.33

Darting through the ruined streets while coming home from school became usual for me. It was difficult to hear the teacher while she was speaking due to all the guns and bombs exploding around in the area. My hearing ...

The super sudden change Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 4.84

“Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change.” That's what Mary Shelly said. I totally agree with her. With this story. My Mum was my favorite family member, my dad was always at work. From...

Sudden Change is Painful Writing Club
by 4Real
Ranked 4.17

My bed was all wet because of my tears from crying all afternoon. I had to tell my friends the bad news. My mum had told me that we were going to Sydney because of my dad’s work. I started crying as soon as she told m...

Sudden Change Is Painful. Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 3.67

“Ryan, you are going to the local school tomorrow” mum said. I was shocked and furious, why did she never tell me before, couldn’t she have at least discussed it with me to see how I thought about it? I had never been...

Moving house Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 3.67

Jerry lived in a cozy three storey house in a small street. Jerry liked to live there. His father worked in the city but sometimes visited on the weekends. One night Jerry was woken up by his mum talking on the phone....

The Beauty of Being Different Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 3.33

To be different is to be unique, to stand out from the rest, to be a difference of your generation. To think differently, to have a hidden talent, one we don't show- just to 'fit in'. Life is wonderful, why waste it t...

Sudden change is painful Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 3.33

Xin and his family dragged their feet to the airport with downcast eyes. Japan was having an earthquake and their property was going to be wrecked. They had no choice but to fly on an aeroplane to China to stay at the...

question 32 Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Ranked 3.33

Mil came in through the door. He entered his old house that looked so old it could pass for a house that was over 200 years. School had finished for the day and now he had the rest of the day to put all his attention ...

Sudden change is painful Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 1.0

“Nothing is so painful to the human mind as great and sudden change”. I knew that now. I was moving schools. There is a lot of things that happen when you move to your new school. You get bullied and no one pays atten...

The Pain of Change Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I skipped down the stairs to my family, who had just begun breakfast. I pulled out a seat from under the table, sat on in and took the cereal and served it into a bowl. I noticed that there was a stiff silence that hu...

Sudden change is painful Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

I yelped at the thought of my mum enrolling me in a different school, but mum hardly seemed to notice the tears trickling down my face. One day, my dad saw me with my palms glued to my face. I heard the footsteps and ...

Sudden change is painful Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

I yelped at the thought of my mum enrolling me in a different school, but mum hardly seemed to notice tears trickling down my face. I never did anything about the issue because I didn't want to ruin my mum's happines...

Sudden Change
by Bryan
Unranked

I heard cheers erupting from the crowds as I won the maths tournament again and I grinned as the medal was laid over my neck and as a shining gold trophy was handed to me. I had won three years in a row and was titled...

Sudden Change
by Bryan
Unranked

I heard cheers erupting from the crowds as I won the maths tournament again. I grinned as the medal was laid over my neck and as a shining gold trophy was handed to me. I had won three years in a row and was titled a...

Miserable! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I couldn't believe; it the day had unfortunately arrived. We began to load the truck with our furniture and possessions while on the footpath stood my loyal friends grieving the situation. I had fallen into a glum wor...

Miserable! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I couldn't believe; it the day had unfortunately arrived. We began to load the truck with our furniture and possessions while on the footpath stood my loyal friends grieving the situation. I had fallen into a glum wor...

The Moving Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I loved this house. It was easily accessible, it was clean and most importantly, there was a huge storage to store everything that needed to be put away. If I had to move, I would be on a level of depression and anxie...

The Change Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a cheerful Sunday morning and I was happily enjoying my challenging game my wonderful mother bought for Christmas. I didn't care what my busy mum was doing downstairs, but I can hear her hastily folding heavy b...

Everything's changed Writing Club Course package
by Marissa
Unranked

Plan: P1: Girl's parents go on holiday while girl stays at aunt's place P2: Plane crashes P3: Girl is upset P4: Girl lives with aunt ___________________________________________________________________ " Michel...

Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

'Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change.' Well, if you think of it, the 'sudden change' is like our life's turnaround point. 'Nothing is so painful' is referring to the pain of death, or ...

Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

'Nothing is so painful to the human mind as a great and sudden change.' Well, …





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