Sample Essays

The Ordinary into Extraordinary
by Naomi
Ranked 8.52

This morning I got up early in the shimmering sun to take my precious Papillion Pixie on a walk. My dog and I had been by each other’s sides since day one when I first saw her big brown eyes and cuddled into her soft ...

Bob and Jim on the mission to save the big salmon Course package
by Joe
Ranked 7.34

This morning Bob and Jim were heading to the park, to have a swim at the lake. The they had been by each other’s sides since the day when, it was the first day of kindergarten, they stated playing with each other and ...

Bushfires
by Kuribo
Ranked 7.14

It was a dark, gloomy day and the clouds patched up the sun. Ash was the only thing that this firey monster left us, that and our lives. Leafless trees were helpless and the few bushes looked as if it was about to shr...

Green EyeBalls Course package
by Cooper
Ranked 7.14

I was walking home from the party with my best friend William. We were enthusiastically chattering away down the dark and desolated road. It was nearly midnight and the street lights which had been the only light sour...

Suddenly it appeared
by anonymous
Ranked 6.64

Birds chirped and flew around as I walked down a quiet, lonely street, enjoying the peaceful atmosphere. It was a Sunday morning in the summer holidays and I had finally got out of the house and was strolling around t...

The Eagle Appeared! Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.33

Jacob has spent all of his life chasing forgotten treasures and revealing forgotten secrets all around the world. One day , he was climbing a huge rock of the Great Sandy Desert in Western Australia, when suddenly it...

Whale-Watching Course package
by helen
Ranked 5.67

The wind chased the waves onto the sandy shore as I excitedly strolled along the long wooden pier with my parents. We were going whale-watching! Whales were the most beautiful giants of nature, and being able to see t...

Suddenly it appeared Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.1

My brother rushed into the house, screaming that a whale had been washed up onto the beach. My Dad put down the newspaper and calmly looked at Joe who was standing there raving on about the whale. Dad told him that we...

The Coke Bottle Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.72

“Where has my Coke bottle gone?!” Max asked in despair. You could almost see his veins popping out of his pale stricken face. I chuckled – I knew whenever Max had Coke, he was desperate to have it all. Of course I hi...

The Twin From Another Dimension Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.48

"Your 3rd 0% in a row!" yelled Mum while shaking the test paper in my face. "Cool down Mum I'm almost at level 8" I said while fiddling with the controller of my new PS5. "Young man I cannot stand this for a moment lo...

Just then... Course package
by CoolyGirl7
Ranked 5.38

The birds on the front porch scattered as i closed the door behind me. I held Lilian's hand as she skipped along the path, while looking up at the sky. It was as if Leonardo Da Vinci had painted a thick coat of light ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 25 - Suddenlyit appeared by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.83

Edging closer towards the horse I put out my hand .The horse snorted boisterously sending me into a grea deal of disturbance.I forced down a scream "MRS RYDER!"she came rushing in her riding blazer still half un-butto...

My Sister Course package
by Casey
Ranked 5.31

It has been a week, since my sister has been murdered and I still can’t think of anything else but her. All I can think of is what her expression would have been when she saw the murderer. And also still can’t believe...

Footsteps Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 3.83

It was a gloomy night and my older sister and were home alone. Our parents had gone out to watch a movie while we were watching our favourite movie “Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows part 2”. We were in the middle ...

Suddenly It Appeared Course package
by Joanne
Ranked 4.45

I was walking home from school with my friend Zac.We were talking about the thing we wanted the most. “I really want a T-Rex”I said “Really Jack, you know that a T-Rex won’t appear in front of your doorstep”he re...

Suddenly, It appeared Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 3.5

It was a sunny day and I had gone to play with my friends at the beach. When we got there, it was crowded and we couldn’t find a place to put all our stuff down. We finally found a spot and threw our stuff on the grou...

Suddenly it appeared Course package
by fufz
Ranked 3.33

There was a tremendous roar, a loud grumble and an earth-shattering explosion. A few square metres of the ground shot up into the sky creating a shower of dirt everywhere along with a hail of molten rocks. A humungous...

Suddenly it appeared Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.0

Suddenly it appeared, I was shaken as it appeared! Wait.... let me start from the beginning. It was a luminous day and I was frolicking around the dead neighbourhood, no one could bother to step out of their air-condi...

The Amazing Machine Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Ranked 2.0

Suddenly it appeared when I walking home form school a silver metallic coloured machine, which looked like a small, mini apartment. Then I went in because I thought that this futuristic-looking machine was transportat...

Suddenly... it appeared Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

I squinted, scared to open my eyes. I heard frustrated calls from my mum over and over again, yet I did not move an arm or a muscle. My birthday was in another at the end of the week, and I was only four years old. Ob...

Course package
by VG
Unranked

"[9 x (7 + 6) - 38 = what, " I muttered under my breath. This maths test was impossible! Ten minutes had gone by and I was only on the third question. I still had 17 questions to go and only 20 more minutes! I scrawl...

Ancient Pages Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

DING! The sound of my door bell ringing was followed by the sound of knocking. I stood up from the couch, and lazily opened the door. To my surprise there was no one there but there was a small package saying "Fragile...

Suddenly it appeared (Take 2) Course package
by Joanne
Unranked

I was walking home from school with my friend Louise and we were talking about what we wanted the most because it was my birthday tomorrow “I want a unicorn!”I suddenly shouted. She had replied in a grotesque tone...

Suddenly it Appeared
by anonymous
Unranked

Suddenly it appeared. The thing. The purple, mammoth, thing. I don't know what happened. Wait, back up a tiny bit. Ellie Dawson's the name, and I am obliged to recount what has happened these past few days. "Mum! ...

Suddenly it Appeared
by anonymous
Unranked

Suddenly it appeared. The thing. The purple, mammoth, thing. I don't know what happened. Wait, back up a tiny bit. Ellie Dawson's the name, and I am obliged to recount what has happened these past few days. "Mum! ...

Suddenly it Appeared
by anonymous
Unranked

Suddenly it appeared. The thing. The purple, mammoth, thing. I don't know what happened. Wait, back up a tiny bit. Ellie Dawson's the name, and I am obliged to recount what has happened these past few days. "Mum! ...


by Sujaay
Unranked

In the far galaxy, there is a planet it is quiet and peaceful .It is called planet Bong! Everything is opposite like when you are getting older you'll get smaller , when it is morning in earth it is day and when it is...

From middle of no where
by Sujaay
Unranked

In the far galaxy, there is a planet it is quiet and peaceful .It is called planet Bong! Everything is opposite like when you are getting older you'll get smaller , when it is morning in earth it is day and when it is...

A terrifying sight Course package
by Bahar Emami
Unranked

John strode along, flattening the lush grass beneath him. The dense leaves of the colossal trees allowed no light to pass through. The moist soil was full of grubs and insects and every now and then, a colourful bir...

Suddenly it appeared. by fufz Course package
by fufz
Unranked

The was a tremendous roar, a loud grumble and a earth-shaking explosion. The ground a few meters away was sent into the sky, sending a shower of dirt everywhere. A hail of molten rocks flew out and then a column of sm...

Suddenly it Appeared! Course package
by fufz
Unranked

I was looking out the window when suddenly it appeared. I thought my eyes were just playing tricks when a column of ash, fire smoke and a flash of lightning appeared. It was the size of a skyscraper. It had huge glowi...

Course package
by XavierK
Unranked

The running race was coming up. I had trained day and night formally months now and I was sure to win. I had practised for four hours everyday with my brother analysing my progress. A few days went by and the day o...

Where did it go Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

A boy called Dig hadn't very much prize possessions. But he did have somthing that was worth a million dollars. He found it when he went in a cave for tourists. It was a gold nugget. He had made sure that you couldn'...

Suprise! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I was at Revolution Laser Arena. (Conistion) It was my go. I picked a team... Blue! I wore a blue chestplate, scanned my ID card on it, and played. I walked up the ramp like I was in war (well it's kinda like it) an...

HELLUCINATION
by coolbatmanDLCPRO
Unranked

"Hey Simon,stay here and do your maths,english and homework and if you're finished go down and help yourself a snack and then do unfinished work" explained dad carefully. I groaned and sighed and went up to my room. I...

Suddenly It Appears Course package
by Jay
Unranked

In the darkness the DarkLord was unbeatable, he wanted to be the most powerful thing in th universe. So it pushed the light away from their territory and squished them into a little space. That's when the light Lor...

Suddenly it Appeared Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

"Agent Lewis! Agent Tomlin! Hide behind that bush! Not a sound! I hissed. I could hear them scattering to the bush as a torch light scanned around the room for more spies. Finally, it turned off. I wiped sweat off my ...





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