Sample Essays

Melbourne Writing Club
by
Ranked 8.5

Plan: On Melbourne Star Lights go out. Power's out! Scared. Oh no! somewhere here mention absence of light Moon comes out. Comforts person. light's go back on Moon disappears. As I rose higher and higher, the...

Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.53

Katie sat next to the window of her 7th story apartment, looking out to the brightly lit street of Alien Drive. Everything about Alien Drive was brightly lit. All the rooms in every house were open, the dozen street...

Fishing Writing Club
by
Ranked 8.33

Casting the line, the man on the moon resurfaced from his special crater. The astronauts would be asleep now. He waited patiently, for those on the moon were patient. They waited each night for Night to cloak the eart...

The absence of light Course package
by 🎸Madalsa 🎶
Ranked 8.48

Plan: Introduction: Introduce character Geoff lighthouse worker Climax: Lights go off and Geoff gets a fright Resolution: Sees the light of the moon and feels secure Ending: Lights come back on and Geoff learn...

The Absence of Light Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.34

There was a terrible rumble from deep inside the belly of the earth that prickled every hair on my body. Then, the ground beneath my feet lurched as if the world was a tiny boat in a vast, stormy sea. The walls scre...

The absence of Light Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.06

The moon shone brightly as Joe walked along the footpath, heading towards his suburban home. Joe had a habit of overworking himself and today was no different, so here he was, at past midnight, walking home. Clouds mo...

The absence of light
by Rushi
Ranked 8.04

The Absence of Light
by Karl
Ranked 7.72

As the old lady trudged home, the rain pour down as the thunder grumbled. Her thin arms shivering as a gust of wind blew by. Slowly, step-by-step, she finally arrived at her front step. As she looked up to unlock the ...


by ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ PANDA ☆彡
Ranked 7.71

I stared at my blank art paper, tore it in half, scrunched it up and stamped on it. The entries for the school art competition was due tomorrow and I still hadn’t thought up of an unique idea for the theme of ‘somethi...

The Shed in the Dark
by anonymous
Ranked 7.33

I walked along the path in the park in a continuous shudder. The influence of night over one's perception was obvious; this morning, the walk would be relaxed and pleasent, yet in the dark, it was sinister and hauntin...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.49

“Penny, the sun is gone and it’s time for bed. Please come inside.” My mom called from her bedroom window, looking down at me in the backyard. I wondered why I couldn’t stay outside longer; the weather had just gotten...

In The Shadows of Night Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.17

"Ouch! What happened? Where am I?" wondered Kate. She studied the space around her in the illuminating moonlight. Trees and many unique plants surrounded her. The wind brushed it's icy tendrils against her face giving...

Where am I? Writing Club
by Rajas Satija
Ranked 7.0

The loud music, smashing my eardrums feeling like it would burst. The disco lights going everywhere making the students liven up. Everyone's dancing, running around and just talking. It's crazy. The smell of alcohol a...

Course package
by Dragonite
Ranked 7.26

The absence of light made the stairs glow in a gloomy way. Every step he took resulted in a creak in the staircase. He scanned continuously for room 667. His hood and mask were adjusted so that only his eyes were visi...

The night Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 7.17

Fred turned on a torch. He was in a cabin at the start of the night in a forest. Bugs chirped and he could hear some wolves howling. Fred liked camping but he hated the night. The night was dark and spooky. The small ...

The absence of light
by anonymous
Ranked 7.12

A Mysterious Creature
by anonymous
Ranked 7.05

My house at midnight is the definition of darkness, nothing could be seen, only heard. I tried to be calm and collected, as I crept down the stairs, a golf club in each hand. I chuckled, despite the situation, think...

The moon
by Kutty
Ranked 7.02

It made me calm, every time that I stared at the sky. The stars bright, sparkly and beautiful. Then there was the moon and capturing me in its dazzling shape and colour. I was an astronomer, my job seems dull to othe...

August 2nd
by anonymous
Ranked 6.95

The day was August 2nd, school had just concluded and I ran home thinking about nothing but what I was going to go home and do. Was I to play video games or to hang out with the boys I was indecisive, however that nig...

The Dark Moon Course package
by Paddy
Ranked 6.86

On a dark and stormy night, the people on Earth were in despair. A thick layer of clouds formed by pollution had covered the sky worldwide. Nobody could see any solution except to live in the dark. However Sophia had ...

Dark Night.
by MrX
Ranked 6.85

Even though it was a full moon, the dense leaves of the forest blocked out any light, leaving me only my torch light to guide me. 'Jack?!' I called out again, but no response. My child was one cheeky fella, and having...

The Moon Festival Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.82

Darkness was never my friend. I dug my nails into my palms in a white-knuckled grip. Swallowed by dark shadows, I desperately clung on Mama's arm. Calmly, Mama lighted a candle as if the sudden power-outage was merely...

The absence of light Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.71

Street lights fill the city as everyone settles down for the night. You open your window and stare out into the beaming neighbourhood, almost blinding your eyes. You're used to this, the constant buzz of the street li...

Stargazing Writing Club
by Abdus
Ranked 6.33

Glistening in the night sky, the stars bring life to the pitch black sky. Like thousands of tiny lights, they illuminate the world when the sun is absent. With its radiant glow inherited from the sun, it's the biggest...

The absence of light
by Harsh Sharma
Ranked 6.0

"Bye Ryan! See you at school tomorrow!" I yelled as I exited my friend's house. I sauntered down the road as the sky turned peach. Soon, the street lights switched on. As I walked gloomily through the eerie jungle of...

Flight Writing Club
by David Toluwade
Ranked 6.0

In the sky, Alex could see the radiant sparkles shining a light in the darkness ; he felt as if he could touch the moon. He went up and up, gliding and soaring through the sky, waltzing with shooting stars and hoverin...

The odds against a runaway Writing Club
by Jining
Ranked 5.83

The tiny shadow of the boy lay crouched under the old house. The ramshackle structure was alive with fleas and dust. He had escaped from an orphanage ten miles away, where he was looked after fairly well, had sufficie...

}:-) The absence of light (-:{ Course package
by Khang Vo
Ranked 5.67

The absence of light can mean different things to people. It could mean the starry night sky, or it could mean that the power went out. But to Max, it meant fear. On a typical Wednesday night, Max was in his bedroo...

Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 5.33

He could feel the absence of light and how much he regretted what he had done. Robin was freezing and had nothing to cover himself. He couldn't even see his own hands. He longed to escape and be with the loved on...

Writing Club
by Moss Cowcher
Ranked 5.33

Jonathan was walking home from his new friends house, checking the map on his phone. He wasn't very familiar with the area, he hadn't visited his friend Max before and even tough it wasn't far from home, he wante...

The absence of light Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 5.17

The absence of light has long since dawned on our world, covering us with its long, empty hands. Taking away our freedom and safety, along with our will to survive. It had once enraptured us, making us wonder what was...

Shadow from the dark Writing Club Course package
by Lachlan
Ranked 5.17

As a little boy i never slept with the absence of light . My parents and classmates always bullied me and teased me about this, saying i was a little boy and a scardey cat. But tonight i want to show them that I wa...

Did someone steal the moon?
by shion
Ranked 5.64

19th October 2040, nothing. I lie with my back to the ground, listening to the rusting of the grass beside me. My eyes long for glittering stars sprinkled over a never ending deep blue sky with a moon, glowing so pur...

Absence Of Light
by Joselyn Wong
Ranked 5.23

What is light? An angel-like celestial being or the tender way you hold my hands in search of something that we never knew was missing? An absent light in our lives as we sleep without a glance at the crescent moon lo...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Ranked 4.67

As I stared up at the night sky, all the wondrous things waiting to be discovered, I turned to look at the moon shining brightly. The craters, gullies and mountains make it my favourite night sky object. How it wax...

Course package
by Ra-sa
Ranked 5.16

I slowly open my eyes. The only thing I can see are some bubbly clouds and a full moon. I shake my head and then I look around, I realise that I'm covered in snow. I have no clue how I got here, the last thing I remem...

The absence of light Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.1

I looked up in the sky and pondered. It had been months since my village had seen a clear, bright sky - these days it was just dark and gloomy. Daily chores were the number one priority for me, so I headed out and s...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.01

I lay there, silently, on the green, vibrant grass. The itchiness of the wet strands of grass begin to frustrate me, but it didn't matter. I take a moment to completely adore the scenery. It was a bright night sky, su...

Trip with the moon Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.0

For whatever reason, the moon looked extra beautiful today. Its giving a light butter coloured glow with the stars around it looking like little body guards. It was long past my bed time but the moon's beauty has kept...

Absence OF Light Course package
by Aadi
Ranked 5.0

It was a starry night, we stood on top of our roof looking at the fabulous shining stars and the moon. Mostly the moon is our only source of light during night time. I live in a village in Western Australia. This is a...

The Darkness
by Minh
Ranked 4.99

The sound of my shoes hitting the ground resonated throughout the deserted neighbourhood as I sprinted to the safe haven in the woods. I had to get away from it. The darkness that plagues the earth, wiping the minds o...

The absence of light
by MEMFOX6
Ranked 4.33

I had gotten out of the cab, grabbed my suitcase and headed off to gate 3. As I approached the entry of the plane, my legs were trembling with fear as if they had been replaced with pasta. My heart sunk down to my ...

The Crash Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Ranked 3.0

On a cloudy, dark night, an aeroplane crossed the runway. The airplane was a small airplane that couldn't have much people in it, because it was tiny. The airplane was a dark blue and it had several windows that weren...

My Desert Adventure Writing Club
by Sarah Berezowski
Ranked 3.0

I was driving through the desert when my car starts to slow down i got aggressively put full throttle on the car, I had only gotten it yesterday I realize that it is no use as the engine is running out of gas. I start...

Bad times and good times Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The moonlight was slowly giving up on showering bright, luminescent light upon me. I held me gaze, with my arms hugging me knees together and my head staring out the beautifully curtained window. The moon was crescent...

Bad times and good times Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The moonlight was slowly giving up on showering bright, luminescent light upon me. I held me gaze, with my arms hugging me knees together and my head staring out the beautifully curtained window. The moon was crescent...

Lost Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Me and Isaiah pulled over our bedsheets and tucked ourselves in, getting ready to rest under the moonlight. It was so nice and peaceful, just me and him, Mum and Dad watching soccer on the TV, the noise within the gla...

The Abscence of Light Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Overshadowed by worries hope was lost. Forever gone. Every night I would stare up at the twinkling stars and glowing moon as a symbol of hope but it began to fade by every passing day. The grey of clouds kept edging c...

The absence of light Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

Plan - About a boy who is stargazing and all a sudden there is an absence of light. Sam laid upon the grass in his backyard and glared up at the many stars in the night sky. Something about the night sky put Sam ...

The absence of light Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

Plan - About a boy who is stargazing and all a sudden there is an absence of light. Sam laid upon the grass in his backyard and glared up at the many stars in the night sky. Something about the night sky put Sam ...


by emily sattler
Unranked

The velvet sky was a bottomless chasm of liquid blackness, an invading tenebrosity that made the stars look so terribly inconspicuous that their negative presence shown like neon lights. Amongst the dotted canvas stoo...

The Absence of Light.
by MrX
Unranked

The room was the definition of darkness, nothing could be seen, only heard, just like the faint breathing sound under my bed. My adult mind was telling me that that could not be possible, by my ears were telling me di...

Absesnce of Light
by ahmad
Unranked

I sat there silently, regaling the wide, glittery expanse of the moon and the stars through my captivating smile. The twilight was enough to remove the shades of darkness inside, which were caused by a power shortcut....

Sample essay for QUESTION 11 - The absence of light by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

I sighed with satisfaction .I loved the dark and the sombre feeling that came with it . I stared at the moon that iluminated the sky the distant chirping of crickets was the only sound to be heard . I was quite intro...


by Michelle
Unranked

Darkness enveloped the tiny wood cottage, singnaling night. The only glow was coming from the the stars above. The atmosphere was filled with an ominous silence. This particular feeling was both eerie and comforting a...

Prisoners
by littlemissdontno
Unranked

Darkness ruled the lan, an infectious disease, wherever you went its mark could be seen. The occasional glint of silver badges, enforcing the message with grey suits and black glasses, or the grim faces of those who m...

Sample essay for QUESTION 11 - The absence of light by MSL
by MSL
Unranked

plan: moon, celestial, crescent moon, night, pearly-white, cumulus clouds, despair - something lead to hope - hope. Loss - cat missing - returns at a certain time, favourite pet - familiar sound of bell - grandmother ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 11 - The absence of light by MSL
by MSL
Unranked

plan: moon, celestial, crescent moon, night, pearly-white, cumulus clouds, despair - something lead to hope - hope. Loss - cat missing - returns at a certain time, favourite pet - familiar sound of bell - grandmother ...

The Everlasting Night Course package
by Niya
Unranked

Sarah brought up her trembling hands to her mouth. Her peachy skin looked pale in the ghostly moonlight and her hair swayed in the child midnight wind. She, among the rest of the people in the village looked up at the...





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