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Sample essay for QUESTION 17 - My saddest day by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 7.67

It happened so fast, as if a heavy book were slamming over a delicate butterfly. In Carol's case the butterfly was her little sister, Clare. Fragile and innocent like an autumn leaf but as beautiful as autumn leaves a...

My Saddest Day Course package
by helen
Ranked 7.5

My saddest day was the day I left primary school. I studied at the school for six years and made many great friends. Our cries of joy still echoed around the red metal playground. Posters we had made hung in the class...

White Lies Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 7.0

Rats scuttle, maggots crawl as my wrinkled hands fix a bayonet to my rifle. Hair and furrowed eyebrows blend in the strong gusts of wind. Gunfire overhead fills my ears, as I sit in a trench full of sorrow and despai...

Sample essay for QUESTION 17 - My saddest day by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 7.0

It happened so fast, like a heavy book slamming over a delicate butterfly. In Carol's case the butterfly was her little sister Claire. Fragile and innocent like an autumn leaf but as beautiful as autumn leaves are... ...

My Saddest Day Course package
by suba
Ranked 7.0

A luminous sun emitted beams of light towards the bustling city. The trills of hummingbirds had aroused with the hushed scampering of insects on the foliage. Sunlight poured in through Tom’s window, casting pools of l...

Sister Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.67

The news hurt me more than physical pain itself . Just the thought of losing my beloved sister would have churned my innards but now that it was a reality I was lost in a sea of emotions slowly drowning with every tho...

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by anonymous
Ranked 6.22

It was a Saturday morning, the birds were chirping and everything was serene.The leaves danced under the cool morning’s breeze. As the sun shone through the white dusty curtains, I jumped out of my warm cosy bed and g...

My, my, present Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 5.67

P1: Saw a present on the dining table P2: Deciding whether or not to open the box P3: Opened the box P4: Nothing in my present box Alex walked out of her bedroom, avoiding the creaks that she remembered off by ...

My Saddest Day Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 5.17

It was the day I met him, like everyone did this day. It was a meeting I never had expected. I thought him being far away.It was the day everything fell into ruin.I had no idea about the date we had; however I knew, I...

My saddest day Course package
by Oliver
Ranked 5.64

"Jonathan, it's your 18th birthday!" my mother screeched in my ear. It was my birthday today and I was euphoric. Nothing could go wrong on my birthday. I got out of my bed and into the dining room. "Happy birthday to ...

My saddest day Writing Club Course package
by Eden
Ranked 4.5

My saddest day was when I left my beloved primary school. I had studied in this for six years already, six years of great friendship and eduation. Six years of artwork and bright classrooms. My mind recalled to the fi...

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by Shreyas Manoj
Ranked 4.0

Well I thought it would get better but, it just got worse than ever. As soon as I approached my school and I was walking up the steps I slipped and fell on the dirty, overgrown grass. After that I went to my maths cla...

My saddest day Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Ranked 4.0

It was dark, the time was very late, I went to bed. I had a terrible nightmare.Well the nightmare sure did put off my day today, because when I woke up in the morning i went to the dining table to have breakfast, bu...

My saddest day Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 3.67

Life is a strange mixture of joys and sorrow. Some days are so sad that they take away all joy and peace from a soul. I cannot forget the day that was the saddest day in my life: It was the 25th of June in the year...

My Saddest Day Course package
by student
Ranked 3.67

Intro| \/ It was Monday last week that I deemed my saddest day. I'm Luke and Monday last week I got... you know what never mind it doesn't matter what does matter is the scolding and yelling I had to bear fro...

My Saddest Day Course package
by student
Ranked 3.67

Intro| \/ It was Monday last week that I deemed my saddest day. I'm Luke and Monday last week I got... you know what never mind it doesn't matter what does matter is the scolding and yelling I had to bear fro...

My Saddest Day Course package
by student
Ranked 3.33

I felt like my cheeks would become so red that people would mistake them as tomatoes. I was embarrassed because I had torn my pants in half in front of the whole school. On stage. I had to figure out how to get new pa...

My Saddest Day Course package
by _ForeverBooks
Ranked 3.17

I slumped against the weather torn wall allowing silent tears to fall.Today must have been my saddest day. I could now see nothing, everything was a blur, even my so-called friend. Everything about her was almost per...

My saddest day (Take 3) Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 3.0

It was a painful goodbye; I was at the airport in Pakistan saying goodbye to the people I knew, people I loved and people who were closest to my heart. My dad had moved to Australia a year ago, and he had called us th...

saddest day of my life Course package
by Zayaan
Ranked 3.0

I was walking home from school and I was very excited to play with my dog. My dog's name is Don, is very playful and he doesn't bark at all, well sometimes. When I came home I didn't see my dog in his usual place in t...

My saddest day (Take 4) This is a re-edit of my take 3 please read this one Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.9

It was a painful goodbye; I was at the airport in Pakistan saying goodbye to the people I knew, people I loved and people who were closest to my heart. My dad had moved to Australia a year ago, and he had called us to...

The Worst Day of My Life (take 2) Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.67

It was a cold winter Thursday, and I was rotting in my dad's crummy blue car. We were driving to Victoria, and it was 6 am in the morning we were moving to our family's abandoned farmhouse in a small town 10 miles awa...

The Worst Day of My Life Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.67

It was the first Monday of June, and I was sitting in the lonely backseat of a blue car as my dad drove us to our new home. I didn't want to move, but because my father was bankrupt, we had to go into our family's cru...

The Worst Day of My Life Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.67

It was the first Monday of June and I was sitting in the lonely backseat of a blue car as my dad drove us to our new home. I didn't want to move but because my dad was bankrupt we had to move into our family's crummy ...

My saddest day Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 1.0

The flight simulator menacingly loomed in front of me. It was a boxy shape that seemed to be laughing at me that I would fail - again. I had entered this "government experiment" - flying the flight simulator - because...

The saddest day ever Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 1.07

I was walking home from school, and I felt sad, really sad. So sad I wanted to die. I was walking home, kicking rocks and thinking about all the events today. I sat on my sofa, crying. I wanted a sandwich, but I didn'...

The Saddest Day In My Life Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The day I lost my family was and is my saddest day. I was at home watching TV while my parents went to get my sister Hannah from acro. After 30 minutes I got a call. I expected it to be my parents but it was my aunt...

why why Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

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My unfortunate day Course package
by enthral
Unranked

Once I got my test results, I was terrified to see my results. This was the end of year exam and if I got anything below an A, my father would kill me. My friends were talking about how bad they went, this frightened ...

The Saddest Day In History Course package
by S8G8
Unranked

I woke up to the happy chirping of the birds and I hopped out of bed and skipped down the stairs to the kitchen where I found my mother sobbing on the table. I found that she was having a divorce with dad. It was the ...

The Day When Everything Turned To Ash Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Arthur D'Varn's family owned a house in New South Wales, Australia. He had lived there for his whole life without any reason to be sad, but he would soon know what the true meaning of devastation meant. He was in his ...

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by Bhavi
Unranked

Today is the day, the day I can shine and show everyone how good of a soccer player I am. Today was our tournament and guess what it starts at 6 am in the morning. We entered the pitch praying we could win. The whistl...

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by Bhavi
Unranked

Yay today is my birthday i hope everyone remembers it. This is because everyone promised me that they would all give me my presents as soon as I woke up. Due to this I ran down stairs and saw that everyone was still ...

My Saddest Day Main Event and Conclusion Course package
by Oliver
Unranked

'It's an emergency! Move along people,' the paramedic shouted loudly, so people could hear him. I lay motionless on the ground, waiting for the paramedic to take me to the ambulance. The paramedic ran as fast as he co...

My worst day Course package
by Oliver
Unranked

I woke abruptly, feeling a tingling sensation of joy because it was my twentieth birthday. I got out of my bed and walked to the city to buy a television. Unfortunately, I wasn't paying attention at the rocky path...

I lost my dog Course package
by Kirtan Pari
Unranked

"Rocky, It's time you take a bath you are so muddy and dirty there is no way mum is going to let you in the house now," said Ava "woof grrr woof!" shouted Rocky "it's going to be fun" persuaded Ava so she took Rocky a...

My Saddest Day
by Aleesha Mohammad Ali
Unranked

She was gone. Gone for good. So this is how my Saddest day began... I was at work, into so much work. Then a...…

The Race Course package
by Utpreksh Sharma
Unranked

I was squealing with excitement as I ran down the school corridor. It was Cross Country day today. It was awesome. Running hard with all the other Year Six students and most of all, my friends. I was quite good at run...

The Saddest Tree
by Leilei
Unranked

My pulse quickened for I feared that axle was to destroy my trunks. They would be deported, just like my family. I stared at the sky for the last time before the woodcutter struck me. I have seen many catastrophi...

The Saddest Tree
by Leilei
Unranked

My pulse quickened for I feared that axle was to destroy my trunks. They would be deported, just like my family. I stared at the sky for the last time before the woodcutter struck me. I have seen many catastrophi...

My saddest day Writing Club
by Raina
Unranked

When I ran past the lush green lawns, the heavy weight of my backpack slowed me down. I reduced my speed to a steady pace. I really wish I hadn’t. Ambulance sirens invaded my mind. Blood scattered amongst the road....

My saddest day
by Apple
Unranked

We moved restlessly as I waited for the school bell to ring. We were all eager to leave school and being summer holidays. Our class dragged on and on as though the time was going backwards and felt like the bell would...

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by Kaori
Unranked

Bob's father had told him to remember 'the day'. it had been jacks saddest day. it started to rain on that day and jack was only 5 years old but most of the things that happened one that day, he remembered. that day h...

My Saddest Day Course package
by student
Unranked

Intro| \/ It was Monday last week that I deemed my saddest day. I'm Luke and Monday last week I got... you know what never mind it doesn't matter what does matter is the scolding and yelling I had to bear fro...

Georgia's walk to school
by Kirtan
Unranked

It was as quick as a bolt of lightning, as quick as a heartbeat. Georgia was walking to school in a rush, normally she would not rush as her mother would drop her off to school via car but today she was at the local c...

My saddest day Course package
by Bahar Emami
Unranked

Hesitantly, I walked into the classroom and looked around. Many eyes stared in my direction as I walked to my desk. “Children, this is our new student, Clarissa. Clarissa, I’m Miss Jones,” began the teacher. Slowl...

dawdle (intro and first paragraph) Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

Jane was soo happy to hear the spectacular news. She was going to stay with her grandmother for three days. How lovely. She had a big house and a lovely garden. Her grandmother had a way of giving unexpected treats,...

dawdle ( Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

Jane was soo happy to hear the spectacular news. She was going to stay with her grandmother for three days. How lovely. She had a big house and a lovely garden. Her grandmother had a way of giving unexpected treats,...

Dawadle Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

Jane was soo happy to hear the spectacular news. She was going to stay with her grandmother for three days. How lovely. She had a big house and a lovely garden. Her grandmother had a way of giving unexpected treats, ...

Why am I so unlucky Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

I arrived at school half an hour late and was given detention. The teacher then handed me back my homework about the romans with a red D on it. I just couldn't believe it as I had spent hours studying it. My friends t...

Why am I so unlucky Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

I arrived at school half an hour late and was given detention. The teacher then handed me back my homework about the romans with a red D on it. I just couldn't believe it as I had spent hours studying it. My friends t...

Why am I so unlucky? Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

The day went off to a great start. NOT. It started off when I woke up. I had wet the bed. When I took a shower there was no warm water. I froze to death. My favourite cereal had been eaten. Brothers! On the way to sch...

My Saddest Day (Main Body & Conclusion Only) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

"I got up late... Sorry." The teacher tsked twice. I knew this was bad... I missed math, recess, science and english, presented NO Science models as I was away when that happened; and we were about to go to lunch wh...

My Saddest Day (Intro & First Body Only) Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

My saddest day started out with a late wake-up. Nobody was home. I rushed my breakfast, lunch packing & dressing up for school. I caught the bus, ran up the hill, into the office, singed off and went into my classroo...

Tazi Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Tazi my babbie I love you dearly you truly were the light of my day coming home seeing you there next to charlie. it was the afternoon and I was doing coding when Suddenly Finn opened the door and slambed it shut. ...

Light or Dark Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

When I went inside the school gates I saw some of my friends, so I decided to have a chat. After a while, the school bell rang and then it was time for me to go to science class. When I got there the teacher showed...

Sample essay for QUESTION 17 - My saddest day by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

The news hurt me more than physical pain itself. Just the thought of losing my beloved sister would have churned my innards but now that it was a reality I was lost in a sea of emotions slowly drowning with every thou...

Sample essay for QUESTION 17 - My saddest day by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

Mira buried her face i my lap she was sobbing heavily " It's okay Mira" I lied there was nothing okay about it "i'm here now" I wiped blood off my cheek Mira looked at me worryingly "no really i'm fine" She blinked wi...

Murderer Jack Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

i stared at the dead body grief struck "what have i done?" i gulped and dropped on my knees the gun lay by my side as if to remind me of the criminal i have become i burst into tears "how could you?" said Ben stepping...

Murderer Jack Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

i stared at the dead body grief struck "what have i done?" i gulped and dropped on my knees the gun lay by my side as if to remind me of the criminal i have become i burst into tears "how could you?" said Ben stepping...

:( My saddest day ): Writing Club Course package
by Zayed
Unranked

My life is officially over. My family have died after challenging The Dark Lord now me Harry Chase and my sister Annabeth Chase are orphans. Yeah no way we were going to survive on our own. So our favorite teacher and...

My saddest day
by sam
Unranked

I sat there as everything was in chaos. Nothing was in order, everyone was screaming and going here and there. I could not help but sit there and lie there. It was hard to take in, the bomb had set off and people had ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 17 - My saddest day by xueyan Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

"No, she can't have!" cried Emma in sorrow and disbelief. "How can she!" "I'm sorry darling, I know that it would be hard on you, but Lucy did die in an car accident on the way to school yesterday." said Ms Fletcher ...

The day I moved school Course package
by vyom
Unranked

It was the 5th last week of school and I had just got home, when my parents told me something horrible. I was moving school. I was starting to cry because I had done it before and it was horrible. Just horribly awful...

My saddest day
by Kamilla Pal
Unranked

My life is officially over! My beloved mother and father have both died in an accident. I am left an orphan with no money also no home (my house has been taken away because of my parents depts). How am i going to surv...

My saddest day Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

I stared at my sobbing parents in disbelief. "NO! He can't have! You're both lying! What sort of parents are you?" I shouted over the cries of my mum." I hate you!" Then I slammed my bedroom door shut and collapsed on...

My saddest day Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

As I climbed out from my warm and cosy covers, I knew that it was going to be a bad day. Yesterday I had got my school report and I had failed on absolutely everything except sport, which mum and dad said wouldn't com...

My saddest day Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

As I climbed out from my warm and cosy covers, I knew that it was going to be a bad day. Yesterday I had got my school report and I had failed on absolutely everything except sport, which mum and dad said wouldn't com...





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