Sample Essays

The Twinkling Stars
by Vicky
Ranked 8.88

The lofty stars twinkled above Ester in a reassuring way, winking and glinting. A trivial breeze snaked its way through the woven threads of her shirt. Lowering her hazel irises to the large lake before Ester, she rea...

The Twinkling Stars Course package
by helen
Ranked 8.33

"...twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder what you are." Emily's mother gently sang again. Emily loved the stars! Every night she would listen to her mother singing "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" while gazing up ad...

Twinkling Star Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.68

Lachie called a quick goodbye to his parents and headed out to stargaze. Apparently on the news, today was the day when the stars are in the brightest and prettiest forms. Lachie was rather excited, he had a big inter...

There's no place like home Course package
by JEN
Ranked 7.13

I inclined on a beach chair, gazing at the billions of twinkling stars as I stared at one intently. You may not know this but I actually come from another star. It was an excursion, I was on the rocket as we were goin...

Twinkling Star Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.77

I glanced out the window and saw twinkling stars on ebony of the night sky. They stood out like sparkling crystal-white diamonds on a black canvas. I woke up the next morning, dragging my feet to school. The calendar ...

The twinkling Stars Course package
by Harry
Ranked 6.76

Scott sat near the campfire eating sweet toasted marshmallows. He looked up towards the clear sky where there were so many twinkling stars. In the big bustling city where he came from, he could barely see any stars, i...

The Little Blue Star Course package
by Yash
Ranked 6.0

The stars twinkled overhead in the dark, shady and misty cloak of the night sky. I'd always loved stars, especially the way they twinkle like diamonds in the blanket of darkness. Suddenly I noticed one that I had n...

The Little Blue Star Course package
by Yash
Ranked 6.0

The stars twinkled overhead in the dark, shady and misty cloak of the night sky. I'd always loved stars, especially the way they twinkle like diamonds in the blanket of darkness. Suddenly I noticed one that I had ...

The Twinkling Stars
by anonymous
Ranked 6.29

The towering stars twinkled brightly in the night sky above the watchful eyes of Jeremy. Jeremy reached out his right hand to touch the stars as he tried every night, believing he can one day, truly touch them. Though...

The stars behind the sun Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.28

The Twinkling Stars Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 6.07

P1: In her imagination, Mary was a twinkling star that flew all around the galaxy. She would often travel with other stars to many other places she wanted to call home. As she flew, the planets around her always swir...

Hope Course package
by Eric
Ranked 5.33

As I opened my large bedroom window I felt a gush of soothing warm air drift into my room. I climbed onto the rough roof of our double story house and sat, watching the cascading stars. There were many millions of the...

A Bright, Twinkling Star Course package
by Tony
Ranked 5.75

“Why do people have to be so heartless?” I whispered, looking up at the stars after a horrible day at school with people teasing me. I have always loved the stars, blinking brightly in the darkness of the black sky. T...

Sample essay for QUESTION 05 - The twinkling stars by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.67

Sequin like stars lay scattered above Mauve's head like a surreal blanket. The stars were the only things that really caught her attention when she was the grim beachside sanatorium, away from her friends and family t...

Twinkling Stars Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.03

As I looked up at the sky a million light years away, I saw the stars twinkling light light bulbs. It was like looking in to sea of darkness where the only light came from the moon, that looked as though it had been t...

The wishing stars Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.98

Creaaaak the polished wooden floor glints off the light of the twinkling stars, but I didn't slowly tiptoe across this creaking floor all night to look at it. I swing open the door and step out onto the pitch black f...

Star Moon Course package
by Cloud!
Ranked 4.96

Blue eyes gazing at the full moon surrounded by stars that night. Bits of turquoise hair flowing in the summer night breeze. Long legs stretched out under the watch of the watchful-looking moon. Meet Star Moon, the g...

The twinkling stars Course package
by Deeksha
Ranked 4.33

I walked alongside my friends- Mason and Scarlet - as bombs were heard from a fair distance. It had been three months since the civil war had begun however the school had decided that education was far too important a...

The Twinkling stars Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Ranked 4.33

Every evening when i go out to the park i look up into the skies looking at the stars twinkling at the dark sky. I bring my telescope to view the planets. But the thing that fascinates me is the twinkling stars. Ideas...

Starlight Dreams. Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.17

Sarah enjoyed a rainbow fruit kebab on a bamboo seat, and smelling the salty, night sea made her think about the twinkling stars that spread like a warm blanket over a cold sky. It was her cousin's birthday on the bea...

The Little Star Course package
by Ovinde
Ranked 4.0

There was once a tiny, tiny star about the same size as a mosquito. The star lived in space, next to its parents, which were two absolutely enormous stars.The tiny star was very curious and always wanted to know what ...

Shining Universe Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 4.0

I was flying my remote control toy rocket with a camera strapped on it at night. I was shooting it into space to investigate the stars and other objects in space. I could show my class all the astonishing photos and v...

The Twinkling Stars Course package
by skelebob
Ranked 3.83

It was a beautiful night, the sky was full of bright stars. Emily was in bed, just looking out at the stars. Until her mum came in. 'Emily, go to bed,' her mum said. 'Alright!' Emily replied. So she drifted to slee...

THE MAGIC STAR Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 3.0

The sun dove down, and the moon had risen. Sara had lain in her bed as her mum came to say goodnight. "Mummy," said Sara. "Can you sing to me?" She asked. Her mother nodded as she sat on the edge of Sara's pink bed. "...

The Star Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 2.83

.One gloomy, dark night, I sat on the roof of my house alone. My baby brother, Zac, had gone to sleep and my parents were angry at me for trying to act like Logan Paul and smash plates. I suddenly saw a shooting st...

The Meteor Shower Course package
by Avengers01
Ranked 2.93

Tina had waited a long time for this day to come. She was about to witness her first meteor shower that day. She was about to leave in her grey car. Along the way Tina kept asking “Are we there yet?” every few seconds...

Twinkling Stars
by Harshad
Unranked

Phil's footsteps echoed as he walked down the silent wilderness. He was content and felt safe even though it was pitch black. Phil stopped for a moment to check his surroundings and took a deep, relaxing breath. He th...

Be Careful For What You Wish Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was another ordinary Saturday for me. At least that's what I thought. As usual I woke up at 8:30 am to begin preparing for my tennis lesson, then 30 minutes later at 9 am I would have my 1 hour tennis lesson. When ...

The twinkling stars Course package
by ♡✿❤️𝒞ockαtσσ❤️✿♡
Unranked

Rose gazed at the stars, glowing brightly in the deep, night sky. A gentle breeze gushed through the trees, making them sway in the eerie moonlight. A small, pink one seemed to stand out as though trying to get her at...

Stars in the Sky
by JewelJoanna
Unranked

The dark sky was pitch black and felt like the baby blue was trampled down, I sought to find the way in the dark from the park to my precious home. It felt like forever, walking in the dark on a Wednesday night. Howli...

Night lights Course package
by ♡✿❤️𝒞ockαtσσ❤️✿♡
Unranked

A comet streaked across the bright blue skies. The beautiful northern lights light up the dark, lonely night as crowds of people gathered in wonder to witness this beautiful, eye-dazzling event. I curled up peacefully...

Course package
by Oliver
Unranked

Prompt- The Twinkling Stars Orientation- honey bees buzzing around, minding their own business. They die Complication: they turn into zombie bees Climax: They get killed again Resolution: The stars shine a...

Course package
by Oliver
Unranked

Prompt- The Twinkling Stars Orientation- honey bees buzzing around, minding their own business. They die Complication: they turn into zombie bees Climax: They get killed again Resolution: The stars shine a...

Up Up and Away Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I stared at the dark sky in wonder, had it always been so beautiful? As if answering a star somewhere off twinkled in delite. Looking up at my mother I saw that she too admired them. We sat their on the ground but f...

Twinkling Stars Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I marvelled at those fluorescent bulbs of light emitting their majestic rays in the night sky. Those twinkling stars, unlike people, would never fail to impress me no matter how many times I glanced up into the paint ...

Twinkling Stars Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I marvelled at those fluorescent bulbs of light emitting their majestic rays in the night sky. Those twinkling stars, unlike people, would never fail to impress me no matter how many times I glanced up into the paint ...

Twinkling Stars Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I marvelled at those fluorescent bulbs of light emitting their majestic rays in the night sky. Those twinkling stars, unlike people, would never fail to impress me no matter how many times I glanced up into the paint ...

The stars Course package
by Christian Bauer
Unranked

We had made it to the campsite. It took us twelve hours to get to the city from our small farm in the country but we made it after all. I saw lots of kids running around and playing cricket with their parents but that...

Starlight Dreams. Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Sarah enjoyed a rainbow fruit kebab on a bamboo seat, and smelling the salty, night sea made her think about the twinkling stars that spread like a warm blanket over a cold sky. It was her cousin's birthday on the bea...

Glistening stars
by studyaddicted
Unranked

We used to lay on the freshly cut, the richness of dark green grass and endure the presence of the magnificent, glistening stars. The connected constellations gave us a light feel to our hearts. Half moon, the Full mo...


by Zahra
Unranked

As the glistening sun falls into a deep slumber the cyan blue sky fades into a deep ebony. The frolicking clouds disappear, only to leave twinkling stars in its place. The darkness engulfs the light and evil lurks in ...

The Stars Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

Every night Would go to my backyard and sit on my wooden deck. I would gaze at the stars for hours. I would try to count them and try to find different picture by joining the stars up together. It was never tiring eve...

The twinkling stars Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

Ellen gazed upon the gleaming night sky that overflowed with twinkling stars that lit up the pitch-black sky. Ellen just finished dinner and shuffled through the clump of clothes to the window. Suddenly, a blaze of fi...

As I gazed up Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

As I gazed up into the sky, I saw the stars' constellation. I watched them slowly pass over the roof, thinking of where they are going to. The dark side of the moon? No. To Utopia? No. To history? Already been. To...

Twinkling stars. Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

As I went outside to the park in the evening with my friends, as I always do, everyday. I lied down and watched the stars. I was fascinated by this incredible natural things that are above me. I always wonder going ou...

Sample essay for QUESTION 05 - The twinkling stars by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

I stared into Mira's eyes not because I'm a creep or anything just because her eyes really did seem to have twinkling stars in them for a long time now I had a creeping suspision that she wasn't an ordinary girl but I...

The Twinkling Stars Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

It was a cold and rainy night and there was nothing to do. I cant go outside because my mum doesn't want me getting wet. I cant play my Ipad because my brother David used my Ipad the whole day yesterday and forgot to ...

The twinkling stars
by sam
Unranked

The twinkling stars shown brightly as the moon had been emerged in the sky, everything seemed dark but the stars brightened everything up. I wondered what it will fell like if i was one of the stars that escaped form ...

The twinkling stars
by sam
Unranked

The twinkling stars shown brightly as the moon had been emerged in the sky, everything seemed dark but the stars brightened everything up. I wondered what it will fell like if i was one of the stars that escaped form ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 05 - The twinkling stars by Sparsh
by Sparsh
Unranked

The Twinkling stars. Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

I look up in the dark black night sky everyday glancing at the long lasting stars forever and ever.It's like a dream gazing at them all night.My mum just had a baby and I think she has been working more than she needs...

Babysitting Course package
by Jane
Unranked

" Look, Jon, look! The twinkling stars!" Ben exclaimed. I hate babysitting. It's so boring. And this one, Ben, isn't an exception. In fact, Ben is the one who gets into trouble most of the time. But he doesn't loo...

The twinkling stars Course package
by vyom
Unranked

I look up at the stars every night and wonder why they twinkle. They're just big balls of gas. How could they twinkle? I think there's some aliens up there that affect their sun. Maybe some scientist know but they're ...

The Twinkling Stars Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

"Twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder what you are..........." I heard Stella, my 4 year old sister sing. She sings that all the time because it is her favourite song. However, Stella never had any ideas about ho...

Sample essay for QUESTION 05 - The twinkling stars by Aditya Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

One day I was walking in the in sunset with the breeze blowing into my face. Just loving the time not thinking of anything. So I sat on a bench to have a rest. As I was sitting I saw something it was a light I thought...

the false eclipse Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

"How about going on a camping trip to watch the once-in-a-hundered-years eclipse?" my room mate suggested enthusiastically. "It is on the first day of the holidays and it sure meant some relaxation for all of us!" Eve...

Sample essay for QUESTION 05 - The twinkling stars by Aditya Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

One day I was walking in the in sunset with the breeze blowing into my face. Just loving the time not thinking of anything. So I sat on a bench to have a rest. As I was sitting I saw something it was a light I thought...

Solar Eclipse Course package
by Nala
Unranked

I look through the telescope and twist the third valve to get the zoom press even further. The eclipse should happen any minute. there was a beautiful twinkling and then the moon turned a bright red colour. I was in ...

The Twinkling Stars Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

"MUM! Jen stole my computer! Ben took my iPad for his work! There is nothing else too do!" I yelled at my mum. We were moving house and everything else was packed away. Mum just sighed and said " You'll find something...

Twinkling Stars Course package
by Hiral Patel
Unranked

I twinkle all night until its morning. I don't know anything around me accept the other stars and the moon. Once a rocket came up into the sky and nearly hit us. I said 'that was a close call'. He landed on the moo...

The twinkling star Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

Plot: a shooting star come across B:Set the scene of where I am and who I am M: A shooting star, make a wish E: Dissolve into dust and air In the faraway galaxy, a galaxy like no other, I stand there in silence....





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