Sample Essays

Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.64

The sun glared down at NYC in the cloudless sky, scorching the cement on the crowded sidewalks. Tessa weaved in and out of the crowd tirelessly, briefly looking at every store’s display before hurrying on. She needed ...

A gift Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.33

The Dream Gift
by anonymous
Ranked 8.14

Balloons filled the house and decorations hanged from the ceiling. The smell of freshly baked cakes filled the room. I could feel the butterflies fluttering in my stomach. It was my eighth birthday and I was so excit...

A perfect gift for a perfect brother
by Naomi
Ranked 8.04

"Eee, Eee, Eee" my alarm goes off as I open my eyes to a beautiful day and birds chirping. Beams of light come through my window while I cross of the yesterday on my calendar. My brothers elephant footsteps could be h...

The Little red bag Course package
by Arya
Ranked 7.99

Rows of presents were lined up on shelfs. I looked through them trying to find the right gift for my friend. It had to be the best in the store. Little red bags were also stacked there, the colour of rubies. I pick...


by Alex Ma
Ranked 7.86

Stepping out of his bone white Mustang, Daniel turned the outdated car's ignition off, slammed the door shut, and slipped his keys into his jeans as he brushed himself off. The man turned around and marveled at his su...

The Gift Course package
by Annoymous
Ranked 7.62

Chloe looked into the window of a jewellery store, eyes narrowed. Her face lit up as she spotted a sign saying 50% off. She hurried into the store and browsed quickly, scanning the shelves. It was then that she saw a ...

The Gift Course package
by Cooper
Ranked 7.41

Ronald’s hair brisked across his cheeks as he rode his bike toward the gift shop. Today was his grandmother’s birthday. He was heading to the local gift shop to retrieve his grandmother’s present - an old wristwatch h...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.28

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My hand scanned the side table of my bedroom for the frame, they dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them on my drool-dripped f...

Surprise Present
by GG
Ranked 7.13

The sun shone brightly in my room and the birds chirped happily as I opened my eyes. Then the corners of my mouth drew right back as I remembered something. My heart started racing as I rushed down the stairs, nearly ...

The Gift Swap Course package
by Carolyn
Ranked 7.13

I was in the gift shop at the shopping centre, looking for a gift for my best friend Lonnie’s birthday. I scanned the shop for a suitable present when my eyes stopped at the sight of a beautiful red gift bag with a da...

A Gift Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.1

Me and June skipped together on the brick paths on the way home, we squealed with excitement as we talked on and on about Christmas nonstop. Christmas was only one week away and I was very worried about a Christmas pr...

The Gift Course package
by Nithika
Ranked 7.07

Sally’s nose twitched as she entered the shop. A plethora of scents overwhelmed Sally and made her sneeze uncontrollably. Sally needed to buy a perfume for her best friend’s birthday present. Her eyes darted all ove...

Christmas Quiz Course package
by Starry Eyes
Ranked 6.91

It was finally Christmas Day! Prina and I excitedly raced downstairs to the Christmas tree, ready to rip open the wrapping paper. To our surprise, the Christmas tree's underneath was squeaky-clean! There was nothing, ...

Amy's gift Course package
by Hcalculator
Ranked 6.91

"Thanks, Ella", Amy yelped catching sight of the beautiful, red and white gift bag with satisfaction, as she touched the velvet fabric with her long hands. "Your welcome", Ella rushed as she was hurriedly pulled by he...

Question 9 : The Gift
by Joe
Ranked 6.9

The sun glared down at the shopping centre in the sunny sky, scorching the pitchmen on the crowded pavement. Randal weaved in and out of the crowd determinedly, briefly looking at every store’s display before hurrying...

The Gift (I decided to rewrite as suggested by Vi)
by anonymous
Ranked 6.89

(I decided to rewrite The Gift prompt as suggested by Vi) The gift from no one was a bright red box with a white ribbon tied neatly on to it. I took out a pair of scissors and slowly and carefully cut the ribbon pr...

A Gift
by Lucky
Ranked 6.87

As the blazing sun started going down, I rushed past the stalls, briefly glancing at each one. The place was crowded and it felt impossible to be able to get a gift for the birthday party that was coming up. A drip of...

The Perfect Good
by Alex.W
Ranked 6.85

Crowds of people bustled in and out of shops weaving through pathways desperate to get to their wanted shop. The city choked with sodden traffic and people. As the sun dipped, streaks of blue, orange and red, mixed gi...

A Gift
by anonymous2020-2
Ranked 6.74

Plot: Go shopping for a birthday present but it gets slightly ruined. 1. Go to the shopping mall and look for good presents. 2. Find the perfect present and a perfect bag that is the last one. 3. The bag is splatte...

The Gift for Izzy's Mother
by Tony
Ranked 6.33

Izzy and her brother leapt out of bed. It was Mother's Day and Izzy and her brother ran towards their mother's bedroom. Her brother, Ben, banged the door open while screaming "Happy Mother's Day!" The children jumped ...

Something to remember
by ITN
Ranked 6.66

I jumped off the school bus still carrying the smile I had been wearing ever since I had woken up. Today was the day I could hand out invitations to my dream birthday party . Each invitation was individually decorated...

The most valuable gift I ever recieved Course package
by Ali
Ranked 6.41

I was a traveller. I explored the world, and enjoyed its beauty. But through all of this, there was one valuable gift nothing could replace. My camera. My black Yashica camera was the best gift I had ever received....

A GIFT by GAYATRI S Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.0

girl family forgets all b days nervous to tell them doesn't wakes up and gets ready present for her I looked sadly at my ninth birthday picture. My fake smile looked so real, like I enjoyed not having it celebrate...

Sample essay for QUESTION 09 - A gift by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.0

The little scarlet box lay rigidly in my hands. My eyes averted to my parents who gently urged me to open it. A few of their well placed words seemed to quell my rising doubt. With my heart hammering insanely in my ch...

Christmas Gift
by Tong Xu
Ranked 6.32

I gazed out of the small window in my bedroom. The night sky had a shimmering sprinkle of freckles laid across it’s dark, blue face, and the moon shone on like the lamp in my room. My eyes drifted through the door and...

A Gift Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.29

Today was Jack’s birthday, a day he had been waiting for a long time for. He had set up his alarm clock to go off at exactly 6:00 am, and he had begged his parents to spoil him. Gleefully, he knocked on his sister’s d...

The Best Gift Ever! Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.28

Gifts come in all shapes and sizes. Some people say the bigger the gift, the better, but I don't agree. The best gift that I got is from a small red bag. It was Christmas five years ago. We set up a massive Christma...

A Gift Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.19

Joe threw the ball towards Will. Will's new bat connected with the ball. Crack! The ball went high into the air. Joe tried to catch the ball. It was a home run! He couldn't believe how excellent the bat he'd bought fo...

The gift
by Horace Tan
Ranked 6.19

The Gift
by Anais Portbury
Ranked 6.08

“Quick everyone!” my mum cried. It was early Christmas morning, and we were traveling a long way to Grandma’s seaside cottage. Our whole family always has Christmas together, so we had many gifts crammed in the car wi...

Melody’s gift Course package
by starlight
Ranked 6.0

Freya was searching everywhere in the house for ideas for Melody’s birthday present. Freya was Melody’s best friend and tomorrow was Melody’s birthday. Freya knew she was going to make a present that was music related...

A gift
by Renee
Ranked 6.0

On February 14th, Sally and her class rushed to their seats as quick as they could, clutching a red heart-shaped box with one hand and a bag full of chocolates, roses, and letters in another. Then they started giving ...

A gift Course package
by mar
Ranked 5.95

"It's my birthday tomorrow, you better remember to give me a gift!". Arabell a boasted. She boasted how her parents were gibing her the brand new pink bag from kmart that every nine-year old wanted, including me. ...

The Special Gift
by anonymous
Ranked 5.81

"Omas, look here!"Walking on a stone pathway with my red ribboned gift bag I saw a small little plastic toy screaming at me. I quickly decided to buy this special little gift without a second thought for $20. When I w...

Christmas Day | A gift Course package
by Brendan Chew
Ranked 5.54

It was Christmas Eve and Oliver a young boy who was interested in investigating and was getting ready for a nice and relaxing rest after the day he has been through. His parents tuck him in his bed with his bear who ...

Course package
by Dolphin
Ranked 5.0

The shopping mall around me became a blur of shops and bright advertising, swimming through my stressed, exhausted mind. I found myself sweating, as if I was feeling trapped within this monsterous complex. I frantical...

The Gift Course package
by helen
Ranked 4.67

Strolling down the city street under the afternoon sun, I gazed joyfully at the gift I had bought for my beloved sister Sandra's birthday. It came in a red box with white circular decorations, tied with a white bow a...

The gift of her dreams
by Nethra
Ranked 5.17

As the sun rose out of it's bed Zara awakened her eyes slowly. It was her birthday and she was really jubilant that she was jumping like a kangaroo that ate red chillies. Yet of course she had to go to school. The jub...

The Gift
by Sam
Ranked 5.16

Tom and Jim scrambled intensely, closely followed by a creature that only stalked in the shadows… “Happy birthday Tom!” My friends screamed. It was the 2nd of July and my brother Tom had just turned 10. Strings ...

A gift Course package
by Zee
Ranked 5.09

There was Taylor, lying on her bed wondering what to get for her best friend in the whole wide world, Bella. It was Bella's Birthday today and she is turning twelve. The two has been best friends since they were babie...

The girl with the bag
by anonymous
Ranked 5.05

The girl with the bag was back. She was standing in the middle of the shopping centre. Even though people milled about her flowing like a river, she just stood there. Her eyes were turned towards me, beckoning me. I w...

The Best Gift Ever!!!
by jessie
Ranked 4.97

It was in the morning the day before Christmas. I had just finished eating some milo in milk. My mum and dad were sitting at the table eating their milo too. They had promised me to go to Dream World with my friends f...

The Christmas Gift Course package
by Devendra K Singh
Ranked 4.33

1 week to go until Christmas! I am so excited everyday my sister Anne and I start counting how many days left. But this year I am eager to know where my gift is hiding. Because this gift, is very special to me. And I'...

The gift Course package
by Shona Negi
Ranked 4.86

I looked at the glaring light of my phone's screen. I had gotten at least 656 emails ,765 calls and at least 988 voicemails since yesterday! Tomorrow is my birthday and it was the only day I would get a presents (unle...

Sample essay for QUESTION 09 - A gift by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 4.07

My hands became rigid as I fiddled with the bow of the present.It was grandma's present she wanted to give it to me on my birthday but sadly it was to late as she died before my birthday.We found my present in her att...

Decorating
by Howard Ollower
Ranked 4.61

It was the first day back at school. He was in year 5. He was allocated his teacher and went to his classroom, his teacher was Ms Horner. The classroom was filled with colors from Indigo to Scarlet. At first he was se...

A Gift
by Karina Chung
Ranked 4.0

p1: A girl and her mum go shopping for the girls birthday gift. p2: A girl wants a doll for her birthday gift. p3: The girl couldn't wait to see which gift she would get since the birthday gift list had a few of the...

The Gift
by j_head
Ranked 4.51

Tiffany waited. Minute turned into hours as she impatiently queued, behind a plump woman wearing a tie-dyed shirt. She was in a dimly lit, antique shop, tapping her foot and lining up to buy a miniature tea set. It wa...

The Gift of Neza Course package
by Layth Nazha
Ranked 4.42

It was only a normal day as I woke up to my intelligent 5 month old brother calling "Light, Light, Light", he was called Zane. My mother was making breakfast which was Fried Eggs on Toast with some Orange Juice. I too...

A Gift
by Ajay
Ranked 4.34

The Gift Course package
by student
Ranked 3.67

I held the solid red gift box in my hands on, firmly. This was it, my iPad! I had been waiting for this for three years and here it was laid in front of me from my dad. I glanced at my Dad and flashed him a word of th...

The gift
by anonymous
Ranked 4.18

There it was in front of me. A gift from no one. It was a bright red box with a white ribbon tied neatly on to it. I held it up, looking all around it, searching for some clue of who had delivered it to my front doors...


by The Unknown
Ranked 4.16

"Hi Lily!" I shouted as I entered the classroom. Lily waved back vigorously and ran towards me with an excited look on her face. "Where is your present?" Lily asked curiously. I pointed vivaciously to a red and white...

The Perfect Gift Is Made With Love And Effort! Course package
by Vindhya
Ranked 4.01

I scatted around the Mall nothing was good enough. I was trying to find my mum the perfect gift for Christmas, but nothing was right. I tried getting her some books but they were to expensive, then I tried getting he...

The necklace... A gift Writing Club
by Raina
Ranked 3.33

Sitting on the small benchtop, Lucy had a memory flash before her eyes. In the airport, she waved goodbye to her father going on yet another business trip. She wondered when she would see this loving tall man again, w...

The gift Course package
by Alice
Ranked 3.98

My legs are so tried from too much walking in the shopping centre! When suddenly something caught my eyes, it was the bran new luxury Dimond ring and it was in a heart shape. It is the perfect gift for my mum, I hurri...

Last Minute Gift Course package
by student
Ranked 3.27

It was Christmas at last! Finally the day had come to open the presents! Our family celebrated Christmas the usual way, a feast on Christmas eve and on Christmas day, presents and today was Christmas day. I raced down...

A Gift
by Midi
Ranked 3.88

It was my birthday today and we went to buy a gift for me. I didn't know why i had come with her. I think it must be something big. When we arrive at the shopping mall we see a lady that is very spoiled. I indeed wish...

A gift Writing Club Course package
by kalanic
Ranked 3.0

I was awake at six o’clock waiting for the best day to come once everybody in the family woke up. It was my birthday, it had finally came, and I have been counting down since last month. I could not wait any longer I ...

The best gift ever Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 3.0

On Saturday morning Mia got up in a flash. She instantly noticed a pile of gifts. When Mia accidentally stumbled over a present her eye caught the glimpse of a shiny red bag. When she opened the bag she saw the bes...

A Gift Course package
by Devendra K Singh
Ranked 2.93

In one week and 4 days time is the day I have been desperately waiting for. Yes, it is that days where every child is blessed with freedom and happiness. It is my birthday! A thing I love about it is that someone spec...

The best gift you could get.
by Sid
Ranked 3.49

Look what I found it’s a box,which is really heavy.Max and Maya opened the box and found a suitcase.They unlocked the suitcase and saw the best gift they have ever got.”yes”said Max and Maya at the same time it’s ONE ...

The gift Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 2.67

After a long day of cleaning and working, I finally got sit down, watch TV, and relax, after all, it was my birthday. About 3 minutes after I sat down, the door bell rang. I opened the door and it was Joey, asking if ...

The Gift Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 2.67

Tomorrow was my friend’s birthday party and I had ordered a Karma drone which came with a GoPro Hero5. The next day, I waited a long time for the Karma to arrive but it didn’t. When I arrived at Zach’s house, I fig...

A Priceless Gift Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.5

It was a Monday afternoon and I was just getting ready for my dance class when I saw a gift on my table, curious of who put it there I gently leant forward to open it. It was covered in red silk with a cotton bow, in ...

A Priceless Gift (Take 2) Course package
by Rubaica
Ranked 2.33

It was a hot sunny evening and was I walking along the beach as the sun set across the horizon, I twinkled my feet in the water, it was warm, but my feet felt a chill as I splashed them in the water. Suddenly I felt a...

The best gift ever Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.33

On Sunday morning, Lia tiredly got up out of bed. She went down to the brown breakfast table. Lia felt so drowsy after a midnight party. That midnight party was so special to her because it was the start of 2017! "Mum...

The gift (errors fixed) Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Unranked

The sun shone brightly in an almost cloudless sky. Amy glanced left and right from the corner of her eyes looking at shops packed with people. She had to get a birthday gift for her best friend and her mum gave her tw...

The Gift Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Unranked

The sun shown brightly in an almost cloudless sky. Amy glanced left and right from the corner of her eye looking at shops packed with people. She had to get a birthday gift for her best friend and her mum gave her two...

A gift Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

Plot: A character gets a gift from their grandmother. P1: Character receives gift P2: Character opens gift P3: Character sees gift P4: Character plays with gift There was a knock on the door. I stood up in exci...

Happy Birthday! Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

Today was Joycelyn's birthday, and I still hadn't got a gift for her. I put both my index fingers on the opposite sides of my head and thought. Joycelyn had told me she wanted something for so long, and I still couldn...

The Gift Course package
by Myrah
Unranked

I walked through the shopping mall as usual hoping that the iPad was cheaper. My own iPad was broken so I had to borrow the office's iPad. I noticed a group of people staring at me. I turned but they followed me. I wa...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

Tomorrow would be mother's day and I was walking across the streets thinking of what gift I should buy my mum. I was humming as I saw crows in the sky providing the perfect soundtrack to the idyllic scene. Suddenly I ...

The Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

As Mike peered across the busy streets, he saw everyone in a hurry. He saw someone with what looked like 10 kilograms of presents all stuffed inside the trolley. He picked something from his bag. "Aha!". He grabbed a ...

A Joke Gone Wrong Course package
by Starry Eyes
Unranked

Amara excitedly skipped along the mossy cobblestone path, clutching a glittering crimson bag, decorated with a shiny, satin bow as her soft brown hair flailed in the breeze. Her jade green eyes were round with excitem...

Christmas Eve Course package
by Emily Bond
Unranked

It was Christmas Eve and I was shopping for a present for my fiance Matthew. I knew I had to get him something special to him, like a memory. I didn't want to get him something boring like a watch that everyone else g...

The Perfect Gift Course package
by VG
Unranked

"Hey!" I called to a man who had just shoved past me. "That wasn't very nice of you!" I knew it was a bad idea to go shopping on Christmas Eve. There must be hundreds of people here. I guess it was my fault for not go...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The sun glared down at NYC in the cloudless sky, scorching the cement on the crowded sidewalks. Tessa weaved in and out of the crowd tirelessly, briefly looking at every store’s display before hurrying on. She needed ...

The perfect gift Course package
by VG
Unranked

Christmas was fast approaching and I still needed to get everyone presents for the big family reunion. I had been putting it off all November because none of the stores did refunds near Christmas and I was afraid I'd ...

Amy's gift Course package
by Hcalculator
Unranked

Amy stared at the gift bag in delight, as she warmly appreciated Ella for her birthday present. She hugged it tight glimpsing at the beauty of it's red and white crafty designs, embroidered on the smooth material of r...

A Dangerous Gizmo
by Harshad
Unranked

The atmosphere was joyful as Christmas Eve came to an occurrence. All the families set out to buy gifts and share their love. So at 2 pm, Ryan's family set out for gifts too. As they were walking around the mall looki...

The Perfect Gift
by Alex.W
Unranked

Crowds of people bustled in and out of shops weaving through pathways desperate to get to their wanted shop. The city choked with sodden traffic and people. As the sun dipped, streaks of blue, orange and red, mixed gi...

The Perfect Gift
by Alex.W
Unranked

Crowds of people bustled in and out of shops weaving through pathways desperate to get to their wanted shop. The city choked with sodden traffic and people. As the sun dipped, streaks of blue, orange and red, mixed gi...

The Festive Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was the 16th of December and I had just thought of what I would buy my dad. For a few weeks I had been thinking about what to buy for him. I knew what my mum wanted: a new phone case. I didn't know what to buy for ...

The gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Beep! Beep! My watch loudly blares out its hourly alarm signalling that it's 10 o'clock. The party is at 11 and I still haven't found a present for my best friend Bob. In my mind, I list things that I could get him. A...

The Gift Course package
by Joanne
Unranked

I was walking around the mall thinking of what to buy for my friend. It was her birthday and it was a good idea to buy her a birthday gift. I walked around the while floor by floor until I found the perfect thing. Jes...

A gift! Course package
by Jessica
Unranked

Clare sprinted across town to find Rachel, her best friend who was about to leave any minute on the bus and go to the airport, to give her a special gift. Luckily, Rachel's bus was at two o'clock and Clare still had f...

Her one time dream present
by Nethra
Unranked

As the sun rose out of it's bed Zara awakened her eyes slowly. It was her birthday and she was really jubilant that she was jumping like a kangaroo that ate red chillies. Yet of course she had to go to school. The jub...

The gift Course package
by Bhavi
Unranked

Have you ever recieved a surprise birthday gift? I still can't believe that I recieved one today. I am sure you are really excited to hear more about it !! Today it is my birthday. I couldn't sleep at all last nigh...

Best gift ever!
by perthmum
Unranked

Today was the day of my grandma coming back home to Sydney. I was so excited to see her because i've haven't seen her since i was 3 years old."Kelly get in the car! we're going to be late for her pick up" shouted my m...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My hand scanned the side table of my bedroom for the temple and then dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them on my drool-dripp...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My hand scanned the side table of my bedroom for the temple and then dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them on my drool-dripp...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. With my eyes extremely short-sighted and blurry my hand frantically scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragge...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My eyes were unbearably bleary and my hand frantically scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the desi...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My eyes were unbearably bleary and my hand frantically scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the desi...

The Mysterious Gift! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and a yawn stretched across my face. My eyes were unbearably bleary and my hand frantically scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the desi...

The Mysterious Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and I had woken. My eyes were bleary and my hand scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them ...

The Mysterious Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and I had woken. My eyes were bleary and my hand scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them ...

The Mysterious Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and I had woken. My eyes were bleary and my hand scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them ...

The Mysterious Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was a bleak winter's morning and I had woken. My eyes were bleary and my hand scanned the side table of my bedroom searching for the plastic hook. They dragged up the designer spectacles and cautiously placed them ...

Sporty Gift Course package
by Hannah
Unranked

Soccer balls, baseball bats and sports gear galore...but what would June really like? Someone who spends there free time at the sports oval, playing all different kinds of plays. What would that kind of person like? S...

A gift Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

The doorbell rung relentlessly waking up Adam. Sluggishly Adam shuffled downstairs and opened the door. There was nothing outside except for an crimson red, intricate bag.He slammed the door closed and brought the ba...

Lost?
by demontian1111
Unranked

It was a sunlit day at a street in Sydney, where we were staying for our holiday, but on closer inspections, the street sign said Corroborator street. My family and I were woken by the soft heat penetrating our blanke...

The Perfect Gift Course package
by Hannah
Unranked

'How many party bags have we got? Twenty? Not enough! We need two for each person!' Julie rushed around, adjusting the decorations, checking if they have enough and made sure the house was clean and tidy. 'Everyone mu...

The Gift for Izzy's Mother
by Tony
Unranked

Izzy and her brother leapt out of bed. It was Mother's Day and she and her brother ran towards their mother's bedroom. Her brother, Ben, banged the door open while screaming "Happy Mother's Day!" The children jumped o...

Last Minute Gift Course package
by student
Unranked

It was Christmas at last! Finally the day had come to open the presents! Our family celebrated Christmas the usual way a feast on Christmas eve and on Christmas day, presents. I raced down to the Christmas tree to fin...


by Josh Chatterjee
Unranked

It was a cold and chilly night and today was a day I would never forget. Every year on Christmas eve everyone in my family would go to sleep with cheerful and merry thoughts about what Christmas present they were goi...


by Josh Chatterjee
Unranked

It was a cold and chilly night and today was a day I would never forget. Every year on Christmas eve everyone in my family would go to sleep with cheerful and merry thoughts about what Christmas present they were goi...

The gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

After a long day of cleaning and working, I finally got sit down, watch TV, and relax, after all, it was my birthday. About 3 minutes after I sat down, the door bell rang. I opened the door and it was Joey, asking if ...

BEST GIFT EVER
by MilkyTheCow
Unranked

I tore open the red wrapping paper and grabbed with greedy hands at the gift inside, only to be disappointed by the fact that it was just a bracelet with a glowing crystal on the end. I looked at grandpa failing to hi...

My gift Course package
by VilIAM
Unranked

Usually is somebody is writing about 'My gift' they would write about a gift they received. but today I am going to write about my gift to my mum! Mother's Day was in a few days and I wanted to give my mum an extra...

Whats in my Gift? Course package
by Dario
Unranked

I see my freind walking up to me on my birthday holding a small red bok with a card on it.I start to get excited as he comes to the front door.I can smell the cake cooking inside but I know thevbest thing is last.Open...

A gift Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Unranked

A horde of people sang "Happy Birthday" in joy, all for John. It was his 10th birthday. As the party ended, an endless melody of goodbyes and thank yous brought a big smile to John's face. A rushing river of people fl...

A Gift Course package
by fufz
Unranked

Ring ring! It was my birthday as the alarm went off. At twelve o'clock in the night. I was up to see what my parents wrapping gift after gift. Making call after call, but all I felt was disappointment . I saw baby rat...

A gift Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Unranked

On a warm spring day, a gigantic tree lay on the dirt, unaware of the happily chirping birds sitting in the tree's branches. A fence outlined the border of the gray house, and a small pond with small fish in them was ...

The best gift ever! Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

Finally it was the day everyone had been waiting for. It was not my birthday. It was Christmas. I was so excited that I woke up at four in the morning. I raced out of my room and started running downstairs but my dad ...

Course package
by Rubaica
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It was a Monday afternoon and I was just getting ready for my dance class when I saw a gift on my table, curious of who put it there I gently leant forward to open it. It was covered in red silk with a cotton bow, in ...

Perfect Christmas Present Course package
by Kavya Anil
Unranked

It was nearly christmas, I saved my money so i could buy something for my friend, Ally. "$5, $10, Aaaah not enough !" So I checked my mums purse. She had $5 so i took it quietly. I was walking down the street I was ...

The perfect gift Writing Club
by Kat
Unranked

It was Christmas Day when my family was opening presents when suddenly, my miniature guinea pig's baby woke up and started to whine because it's mother died last night of old age. I went to comfort her and I took it o...

I bought the present Course package
by rthomas
Unranked

It was Christmas the next day and ran to the shops to buy my sister a present. I had completely forgotten about her. I honestly don't know how but it happened. I just hoped that there would still be something. Then I ...

the secret gift Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

I was sitting on the comfy couch watching TV when the doorbell rang. I got up knowing that my little brother wouldn't move to open it so I would have to open it myself. I started walking to the the front door when...

A Gift Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was at the dusk of November. "Mum, get the camera!" As I saw a whole stack of paintings for $25, I knew I needed to save up my $13 to buy it. I started my saving up at the 12th of December. I earned $2 for bins ...

A most ridiculous gift Writing Club
by Lucky
Unranked

My birthday was over. I was so happy that I got so many presents from my friends. We struggled to keep them somewhere and so if I opened the presents, it would solve the problem with space. So I started to open the ...

A Miracle Gift Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

I can’t wait till I give this wonderful, limited edition gift for my parents. Today was the day of my parent’s anniversary and I wanted to make this day the most special moment of their lives. I have to get back to my...

What are friends for?
by Lisa
Unranked

It was a wednesday in Summer and everybody was hot and sweaty, so nobody was going to care about the invitations! I was hot and I was sweaty, so I didnt even want to hand out the invitations! Finally, after what seeme...

It Doesn't Matter Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Unranked

I peered down the aisle, trying to spot a Strawberry Cheesecake to give to Mum as an extraordinary present for Mother's Day to put in a Strawberry bag. I couldn't find Mum's favourite cake. Misery washed over me li...

The Gift Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

Lying down in my soft, warm bed with red sheets I realised that it was my birthday! I jumped out of bed and shot through the corridors when I arrived downstairs I gasped. Everyone was already there and had a gift for ...

The Gift Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

I jumped out of bed and shot through the corridors when I arrived downstairs I gasped. Everyone was already there and had a gift for me! I was bubbling with excitement I felt that if I didn't open it I would explode. ...

A gift
by sam
Unranked

Getting grandma a birthday present was difficult, she went through so many difficult times and i had no idea what to buy her. When i was little she would always play with me, feed me and when i was in tantrums she wou...

Christmas Day Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

I was there in bed wondering "What's the point of getting up?" but then I realized "It's Christmas day!". I bolted out of bed and arrived at the Christmas tree "One present?" I thought "Why do I only have one present?...

The Gift Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

The gift Course package
by vyom
Unranked

One day a small boy was running around excited because today was his 11th Birthday. He was excited because his parents said he's in for a massive surprise. He ran from school and his parents gave him a bag, it was sma...

The gift Course package
by vyom
Unranked

A gift Course package
by Jay
Unranked

One day the old house doorbell rang. I carefully opened the creaky door and found the postman holding a neatly wrapped present in his hands. I brought the package inside and let it sit on the table, after I was done ...

The gift Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

Suddenly I heard an unsuspected knock,In a moment I ran down the stairs skipping steps, almost about to fly out of the window.Once I came to the door I could feel my heart beating for me to get the bike in my hands,ma...

The gift Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

Another frigid snowy christmas eve,where the best thing to do is open the surprise presents.I have been dreaming to receive a quad bike it has huge powered wheels,a comfy car seat and best of all everything is purple ...

The Conspiracy of the stolen bags
by Mohammad Moeez
Unranked

'Bags,' thought Max. 'A great way to earn money. And popular on every occasion.' Max owned a bag shop. A shop full of bright and colourful corridors that were covered in bags for every ocassion. From dark holloween ba...

The Gift
by Mahi Taher
Unranked

So, it was another Christmas Eve, where I'm trying to get to sleep. I'm just in bed tossing and turning from all the excitement of the wonderful presents that I'll get to open tomorrow. I wonder what they might be? Th...

A Gift Writing Club Course package
by JRRTolkien1
Unranked

It was a snowy day when it was Zoey's birthday. "Wahoo! I can't wait to open my gift. I bet it's the most awesome gift in the world." She kept on thinking over and over aagain. "Here you go." Her mother handed it to h...

Birthday Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

it is nearly my friend maddy's birthday and i got a special suprise for her. it was friend bracelets for us and its package was a nice-looking handbag. i hope maddy will like it! today is maddy's birthday and i ha...

Broken Gift
by Anwesha
Unranked

My head churned. I felt guilty. I felt clumsy. What have I done? Do I have enough time? Am I going to get into big trouble? My head spinned with questions. It was Chloe's birthday today and her birthday party was goin...

the little red bag Course package
by Ryan Waller
Unranked

For Zizi's 11th birthday, Gabbie gave her a little red bag. it was sparkly,with little white and pink strawberries, and a small ribbon bow attached to the top, left corner. two days later, Gabbie moved away. Zizi use...

The science competition Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

I walked to school as usual; no worries, just casually meandering. I was walking with the person how loved me and gave birth to me. That day, I had my musical instrumental lesson and rehearsal so I thought it was goin...

all i wanted Course package
by Aditya
Unranked

Today just Walking in the park not really doing its my birthday and my family told to get some fresh air its like they dont want me here .I don't care then I went to the park and I saw my friend he had a box in his ha...

The bag Course package
by Nala
Unranked

I looked at my gift I had received. It was a bright red bag with a velvet ribbon attached. you can feel the glitter that was attached onto the ruby red bag. the string which I held onto was a velvet, soft colour that ...

A gift Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

B: The setting and a gift been thrown M: Open the gift and bright lights are out but only I can see it E: From the South Pole and a message as well I was strolling on the squeaky clean streets with the sun beamin...

A gift Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

B: The setting and a gift been thrown M: Open the gift and bright lights are out but only I can see it E: From the South Pole and a message as well I was strolling on the squeaky clean streets with the sun beamin...

A Gift Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

"Owch!" I yelped as I burned myself on the edge of the oven. My parents were out at the cinemas and I was forced to watch my brat of a sister, Brianna, while she terrorised the house (it was her who turned on the oven...

A Gift Course package
by Hiral Patel
Unranked

I am waiting and waiting to get the the gift I want. It has been three years and luckily my birthday is coming on the 31st December. Today is 30th December, 11:50. It's nearly my birthday. It's 11:59 and I fall asleep...





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