Sample Essays

A Gardener's Love Writing Club
by
Ranked 9.17

Gardener plants plants Gardener watches them grow Cat pees on them Gardener mourns loss Cycle of life Plants new ones As the gardener tickled the roots of the last dahlia and planted it in the carefully dug ho...

An unfortunate dance Writing Club Course package
by Shiraz
Ranked 9.17

Paige stood on the sidelines as the opening sequence of her dance recital began. She fumbled with her tutu, picking at a loose seam as she attempted to reduce the mountain load of stress that accompanied her to her ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 24 - An unfortunate event by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 9.0

Mavis dug her nails into palm, leaving half-moon shapes lining every inch of her skin. The throbbing of her palms kept her mind from bringing up memories about her mother. For weeks now she's been struggling to keep...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Ranked 9.0

Version 1 As I caught my breath coming up from the murky grey sea, in the distance, something unusual caught my eye. A ferocious beast. A towering wave many metres high and threatening to destroy everything in its...

The crash Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 8.6

Gracie sat in the rear seat of her parent’s car while listening to some music on her headphones. Her parents sat on the front of the car chatting about things she wouldn’t care about. They were driving to another dist...

Sample essay for QUESTION 24 - An unfortunate event by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 8.0

Mavis lay face down in the carpet tears streaming down her neglected face. If she listened closely she could almost her her mother's hearty laugh. A laugh that seemed to make everything feel normal again like it was b...

Cave 'n' the Rain Course package
by Huldah
Ranked 8.08

It was a nice sunny morning and I was in my room watching Netflix. Suddenly my environmentaly friendly parents barged into my room telling me to put on my trainers, because we were going to take a stroll around the su...

Writing Club Course package
by Lachlan
Ranked 7.67

Wind blew hard against me, blowing my hair wildly into a wild bedraggled mess. I sat hunched over on a bench, waiting for my mum to pick me up. It was pouring with rain and I was soaked. Ready to shout at my mother, I...

An Unfortunate Day for Bob Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.78

Bob had chosen to sneak his new kite to school that morning so that he could show it off and play with it after classes, and he found his idea fabulous. After eating breakfast and changing into his school uniform, he ...

Snowstorm Writing Club Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.33

The wind whipped against my face with its icy fingers. Going out for a walk wasn't such a great idea in this terrible weather. There was hardly anyone on the roads and no birds were out flying today. It was strange fo...

Writing Club
by Moss Cowcher
Ranked 7.33

Jonathan stepped up to the big looming door. Behind it he would find a dentist, and a chair. He had been dreading and expecting this ever since he'd been told he might need braces, unfortunately it had turned out ...

An Unfortunate Event Writing Club
by David Toluwade
Ranked 7.0

Bill breathed in and out his breath becoming visible because of the chilly atmosphere. He let go of the rusty rail and continued to glide on the ice rink cutting through thin layers of ice that attempted to block hi...

Writing Club Course package
by Lachlan
Ranked 7.0

A feeling of unluckiness or misfortune was not new to me. In fact my name defined on the urban dictionary means the most unlucky thing ever. My name is Bobby unlucky eh? Once I tried to enter a small gamble with my fr...

The Day to Fly Writing Club
by Rajas Satija
Ranked 7.0

Excitement was rising as we finished our packing. Moving to Australia was going to be a totally different experience. The chilly breeze whipped my face as we were going on our last walk out on the Canadian snow. I fel...

An Unfortunate Event- Tsunami Course package
by MEMFOX7
Ranked 6.67

Sofia stood on her balcony watching, feeling both excitement and fear in her stomach. Then she saw it. A big 'wall' of blue erupted from the vast horizon, rapidly reaching for the coast below. She then saw the unfortu...

A series of Unfortunate Events Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 6.5

“Finally back home. What a disaster that holiday was. An unfortunate event after another. Occurring at the worst times possible. No wonder I’m so tired. Hopefully my luck has become gold again, after being rotten for ...

The disastrous tsunami Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.44

In the distance, something unusual caught my eye. Something terrifying.Threatening to destroy everything in its path a wave towering almost 20m high, was slowly coming in view near the horizon. The wave was like a bul...

Hailstorm of the history
by MEMFOX6
Ranked 4.67

planning: what it is about: a place named Rockhampton had a hailstorm, it was really rare to have one. intro: describing the cold weather middle: breaking news of the hailstorm end: the hailstorm then transformed ...

An unavoidable situation Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 4.67

Edited version: Whispers. More whispers. Where were they coming from? Who was it? It was 3 am, not a time when anyone should be around. I tried to listen to those faint voices but all I could hear was a gentle murm...

The Heart Cage Course package
by Huldah
Ranked 4.47

As the adrenaline rushed to her head, Melinda could suddenly see what the curtains had been trying to show her. Her heart beating so fast she could feel it brushing up against the shell of her chest. ''Henry, Henry!''...

Sample Essay for QUESTION 24- An Unfortunate Event by GAYATRI Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.67

"Bye Sofie!" "Bye Aunt Audra!" I was practically dead. Well, everyone will be when you have to travel 2 hours at six in the morning. Well, looking on the bright side, I finally broke a record of twenty-four hours stay...

An Unfortunate Event Writing Club
by Abdus
Ranked 3.67

Looking out the window, I could see the the thousands of street lights illuminating the world below. Everything appeared to be tiny dots covering the land underneath, creating an interesting pattern. "Excuse me sir, p...

An unfortunate event Writing Club
by Sarah Berezowski
Ranked 3.67

Some people say that silence is golden but I really wish that someone would say something. Ever since we got the news that my Grandma is dying, it has just been so tense. Now we are now driving to the hospital to say ...

An Unfortunate Event Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Bob was exceptionally excited about school that morning. He had chosen to sneak his new kite to school that day so that he could show it off and play with it after classes. After eating breakfast and changing into his...

An Unfortunate Even Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

Remus woke me up with a screeching noise. He had taken the fork left on my black and white chequered table and scraped it onto the face of a plate. “ WAKE UP YOU DIMWIT!” Remus barked with a beaming smile on his face....

A disastrous tsunami Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

In the distance, something unusual caught my eye. Something terrifying.Threatening to destroy everything in its path a wave towering almost 20m high, was slowly coming in view near the horizon. The wave was like a bul...

Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

- About a man who falls off a tall building The man gasped in amazement as he looked up at the Eiffel Tower. The picturesque sight filled him with sheer delight . He had come all the way from Australia to climb up...

Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

- About a man who falls off a tall building The man gasped in amazement as he looked up at the Eiffel Tower. The picturesque sight filled him with sheer. He had come all the way from Australia to climb up the Eiff...

An Unfortunate Event Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

Plan - A boy named Tom and his family are the victims of a car crash. "Slow Down!" shouted Tom. Tom's dad was behind the wheel, driving Tom to school. He was driving at 95 kph at an 80 zone. Tom's dad completely ...

Unfortunate Event Course package
by PAN0023
Unranked

Home alone, Tom laid sprawled in bed, daydreaming. A sudden bang on the door broke his reverie. He groaned, and lazily meandered to get the front door. Expecting his parents, he swung the door open. However outside t...

Almost an Unfortunate Event
by sharon ryu
Unranked

An unfortunate event? Or destiny? Or fate? I think to myself as all the flashbacks return in a sudden instance. My students listen in carefully as I share my story aloud for the first time. "10 years ago I almost ...

Course package
by MEMFOX7
Unranked

Sofia stood on her balcony watching, feeling both excitement and fear in her stomach. Then she saw it. A big 'wall' of blue erupted from the vast horizon, rapidly reaching for the coast below. She then saw the unfortu...

An Unfortunate Event Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

It was a second, maybe half a second, but it changed everything. The ground growled in hunger for humans. It was not a little tremor or a big tremor; it was a gargantuan rumble. Ear-splitting shrieks and flailing arm...


by anonymous
Unranked

The door opened with a bang and a woman rushed in falling onto her knees and crying. I looked around trying to find out what was happening. The woman raised her head from her hands and looked at me. That woman was my ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 24 - An unfortunate event by littlemissdontno
by littlemissdontno
Unranked

His potruding stomach jiggled up and down as the middle aged man jogged up the street. Imogen sat at her window conjuring lively situations to fill her time. She did this to get her mind off her own life. An angry...

The Big Speech Course package
by Niya
Unranked

Plan - important speech in front off rest of the school - power goes off Sarah stood in the darkness of the room backstage, sweat trickling down the back of her neck and her dry tongue sticking to her mouth. In her...

Unfortunately Course package
by Nathan Miao
Unranked

Finally, the holidays has come, a great sigh of relief came out of me when my parents announced to me that we were going on a holiday to Las Vages to do many activities like take a soothing hot air balloon ride over t...





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