Sample Essays

The Hot Air Balloon Ride
by Vicky
Ranked 8.94

The hot air balloon lumbered into the sky, then fell into a lazy drift. The breathtaking scenes, seen from the sky, seduced her and filled her with awe. She felt her eyes widen and her jaws drop as they appeared out o...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 8.3

The cool afternoon breeze brushed against my hair as my hot air balloon soared higher. I glanced at my compass to see if I was going the right way, and then slipped it into my pocket. I had experienced the cool breeze...

The Hot Air Balloon Course package
by Tony
Ranked 8.29

Gloriously, the hot air balloon glided through the sky, making her dream of riding on a hot air balloon come true. Breathtaking views dazzled her and filled her with admiration. The fifteen-year-old girl felt herself ...

The Balloon Ride Writing Club
by A Ghosh
Ranked 8.0

1: The Hot Air Balloon (happy) 2: The Ascent (excited) 3: The Storm (anxious) 4: Rescued by helicopters (relieved) Yesterday, me and my dad went to a place where we could soar above the clouds in a hot air ba...

Hot Air Balloon Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 7.43

I looked out of the car window. Our family had been crammed in a hulk of steel for a few hours just for a hot air balloon ride. The heat from the car made my eyelids droop. After a few more hours, we caught sight of a...

Burning Course package
by demontian1111
Ranked 7.36

The hot air balloon rose into the sky, then gracefully rose into a hover. The thousands of scenes washed his heart out as he understood nature seen from the sky, they seduced him to go down and play but he knew the re...

The Hot Air Balloon Ride
by Riptide98
Ranked 7.2

My room was filled in the warm sunshine of the rising sun. I groaned and half-awake, dragged myself out of bed. Rubbing my eyes, I reached for the doorknob. Sniffing the air, I could feel my appetite force me to run t...

A Hot air balloon ride
by anonymous
Ranked 7.16

I was over a hundred metres above my home town, Falksville, in a colourful hot air balloon. Every since I was six, I had always wanted to go on a hot air balloon ride. Now, half a dozen years later, I was finally in o...

The Balloon Ride Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 7.1

It was my first hot air balloon ride on this summer morning. My heart was pounding out extremely fast. For what took like a decade, I wobbled my frightened legs on the unstable balloon. I didn't know if it was safe or...

The Unexpected Fall Course package
by Ali
Ranked 6.41

I tugged onto the rope even harder. “Pull!” I screamed. The hot air balloon had started to slowly drift down towards the bare plains. On the hot air balloon, it was chaos. There were hands flying in the air and desper...

Experiencing High Difficulty Course package
by Cooper
Ranked 6.26

The weather was calm and I was ready to embark on this unforgettable journey. The hot air balloon manager lit the burner which heated the tip of my warm head. Soon enough we were off the ground! The wind rushed agains...

The Hot-Air Balloon Race
by Mizuki
Ranked 5.98

Fire flickered in the rising hot-air balloon as the sun dipped into the water, daylight began to fall night was coming and the wind was howling. I carefully walked to the edge of the hot-air balloon to look at the vie...

My balloon adventure
by Sam
Ranked 5.26

I was flying through clouds and over the hills. The cornfields were golden in the sunlight and the valley looked beautiful. I was going to cross the mountain ranges and the village in my hot air balloon as part of a r...


by anonymous
Ranked 5.0

I was at a country fair with beautiful decorations all over the place, there was a ride that I always wanted to go on because it took you up into the sky. My parents allowed me so I went to the line. A few minutes lat...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.33

Katie was a skinny girl, with crystal blue eyes and blond hair that blew behind her even in the slightest wind. Her favourite colour was aqua, and she had almost everything in that shade of colour. Most people would s...

The Balloon Ride
by Sujaay
Ranked 4.7

When the sun came out, the sun rays glimmered through the bright white clouds. My dad and i went on a balloon ride which is my birthday gift from my friends, we saw a wonderful view of gigantic city and we took lots o...

A hot air balloon
by Minh
Ranked 4.0

A hot-air-balloon-ride Write a narrative around the following image prompt: P1: A family is going on a hot-air-balloon-ride far into the sky. Everyone is inside the car driving to the station. (Excitement) P2: T...

A hot air balloon ride Writing Club
by JRRTolkien3
Ranked 4.0

P1: Dying wish {wanting} P2: Dream comes true {excited} P3: The problem {frightened} P4: The solution {happy} Zara’s biggest dream was to ride a hot air balloon. She had always beseeched her pare...

A Hot Air Balloon
by Renee
Ranked 4.24

Today was the day. It was the day when I finally got the chance to go to the carnival. During the car ride, I was so excited I nearly fell out of my seat! When we got to the parking lot, the smell of delicious cotton ...

Writing Club
by Cosmos
Ranked 3.17

Plot: Me and My Family are going on a hot air balloon ride when an invasion from the Germans happens Set in world war II Paragraph 1: We travel to the country-side close to the German border to get on a hot air ballo...

Hot Air Ballon Ride Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 2.83

It was my dream to go on a hot air balloon, but we were too poor to book one. Everyone in our family had bought a ticket for the billion dollar lottery just so we could get some money. We lived in a caravan near a lak...

The hot air balloon Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 2.83

The four excited children Sally, Shion, MIzuki and Reika walk past the festival and they all wanted to go. They saw the sign of the hot air balloon ride. Each of them asked where the hot air balloon ride is and t...

The hot air balloon Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 2.83

The four excited children Sally, Shion, MIzuki and Reika walk past the festival and they all wanted to go. They saw the sign of the hot air balloon ride. Each of them asked where the hot air balloon ride is and t...

A hot air disaster!
by Tony2008
Ranked 2.87

Woosh! woosh! The hot air balloon soared in the scorching sun! "Woohoo!" Jake said. " How fun is this?" "I don't know... it seems really scary." William said uncertainly. "Toughen up man it's your 14th birthday and yo...

The hot air balloon ride Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

The rainbow balloon was slowly magically inflating into an ovoid shape. crowds built up as I was going to be the first person to go to America on a balloon. The man checking the air balloon ticked some safety checks o...

Course package
by Bryan
Unranked

I see the hot air balloon starting to ascend and look at my friends. The dream that I had always had as a child was to travel on a hot air balloon. Breathtaking views allowed me to vision the whole world in a differen...

Hot Air Balloon Course package
by Starry Eyes
Unranked

The hot air balloon pierced the clouds like a knife cutting through soft tomatoes as Aisha gazed at the sparkling sky. The sun was drooping to the bottom of the world as the hot air balloon bobbed in the air. Aisha ya...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The hot air balloon lumbered into the sky, then fell into a lazy drift. The breathtaking scenes, seen from the sky, seduced her and filled her with awe. She felt her eyes widen and her jaws drop as they appeared out o...

The hot air balloon ride Course package
by Alice
Unranked

I rubbed my hands together as I stepped onto the hot air balloon followed closely by my family. I had just won the lottery on a hot air balloon ride and right now it's a dream come true. As we took our seats on the ai...

The Hot Air Balloon
by Vicky
Unranked

The hot air balloon lumbered into the sky, then fell into a lazy drift. The breathtaking scenes, seen from the sky, seduced her and filled her with awe. She felt her eyes widen and her jaws drop as they appeared out o...

The Balloon Ride Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

It was my first hot air balloon ride. My heart was pounding out extremely fast. For what took like a decade, I wobbled my frightened legs on the unstable balloon. I didn't know if it was safe or dangerous. The guide f...

The Balloon Ride Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

My body was pounding, because it was my first hot air balloon ride. My heart was ponding out extremely fast. For what took like a decade, I wobbled my frightened legs on the unstable balloon. I didn't know if t was sa...

The balloon Course package
by Ads
Unranked

I've always been fascinated by hot air balloons. The way they fly swiftly along the clear blue sky. I've always had the desire to go one, and now I've got the chance. I've won a raffle and have a choice of $100,000, a...





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