Sample Essays

Bubble Catastrophe Course package
by ✦•ღ Ultimate3mily ღ•✦
Ranked 8.16

I dart excitedly like a fast airplane, over to the playground. My mother walks over to the plain, green oval and gestures her hand for me to come to her. I run over to her, grinning with excitement. She looks at me, s...

Stalker Course package
by demontian1111
Ranked 7.8

Akira looked at the bubbles again, gleefully blowing them to her baby sister, Chika. “Achoo”, A sneeze sounded and Akira looked towards the source of the sneeze, only to see a man bent double who was wearing jeans and...

Barnabie Course package
by Emily Bond
Ranked 7.76

I was skipping along the grass with my daughter Hirono. She was an only child and the sweetest, most beautiful child I have ever seen. She had long chocolate brown hair that went down to her waist. She had a little re...

Too Windy Course package
by Jess D
Ranked 7.26

It was a hot summer day, and June's class was coming back from swimming. June friend, Sam saw a nice green park in the distance. He ran to their teacher, and begged her to let the them go to the park. After 5 long min...

Playing in the Park
by Comet
Ranked 7.12

I jumped up and down as bubbles went flying everywhere. Playing in the park was always very entertaining. It was a cloudy day and a cool gentle breeze blew in the fresh morning air. I raced around, popping all the ...

The Day in The Park Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.54

It was a warm day, with the kind warm sun beaming its rays. I skipped towards the centre of the park, bubble blower in hand, I delicately blew through it, the bubbles slowly rose, like a balloon. It was as if the knew...

Playing in the park Course package
by mar
Ranked 6.47

It was a bright sunny day at Merlin meddows when we went to the town park. The soft cool breeze hit my face. My mum and I walked to the park, hand in hand. As we went we heard the cheerful laughs of children. and w...

The stranger in the park
by Sean
Ranked 6.33

"Yes!" I shouted. Today my mum was finally going to get me a bubble gun. I raced downstairs and ran to the shops like a cheetah with my mum. We got the bubble gun and I sprinted to the park. "Bye mum!" I shouted. T...

Playing at the park Course package
by Yenni
Ranked 6.26

It was the perfect morning to play at the park, the sun was shining, the sky was blue, and it was just beautiful. I came prepared with my bubble gun, sunscreen and you can not forget the hat. I could not wait to roll ...

The Special Gift
by anonymous
Ranked 6.0

My sister playfully jumped around me looking at my pleasing smile, placed apon my face. Laughing with my sister made me feel like an angel. I wish this could happen more often. ‘Joseph is never happy,’ I thought,’ why...

The Bubble Maker Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.98

“Aahhhh"I calmly exhale,”Its a wonderful day to be at the park.” The golden sunlight reflects off my greasy, tanned skin, a yellow flower threatens to fall out of the space behind my ear as the warm summer breeze ru...

The perfect day by Marissa Writing Club Course package
by Marissa
Ranked 5.33

Plan: Paragraph 1: Girl wakes up to a beautiful day. Paragraph 2:Wants to go to the park Paragraph 3: Goes to the park with her mum but is sad that her dad can’t come. Paragraph 4: Her dad appears holding a bubbl...

Playing in the park Course package
by Deeksha
Ranked 5.0

The soft rustle of the trees felt like music to my ears. I had been craving to go to the park and now that my cousins were here, they could take me! I speedily packed my new bubbles which my cousins had given to me ...

The Bubble Course package
by ES01
Ranked 5.0

It was a beautiful day. The sun was shining brightly as midday approached. Tall trees provided lots of shade to play and to keep away from the sun. The park was filled with children riding their bikes and scooters alo...

Missing Course package
by Yash
Ranked 4.67

The scorching afternoon sun pummeled against my face and little beads of sweat rolled down my face. Clutching my bubble dispenser in my hands, I smiled down at my younger sister. We were in the park playing with my bu...

Playing in the Park
by Lucky
Ranked 5.1

My best friend, Milla, and I were playing in the crowded park. "Hi Eliza!" she greeted "Happy birthday!". After we welcomed each other, we headed off to play hide-and-seek. We had a wonderful time finding each other ...

A Stranger At The Park Course package
by Vindhya
Ranked 5.01

Today Lia was going to the park with her family and friends, Lia was super excited, she had been waiting for this moment for a whole week. Little did Lia know things are not going to go to plan. When Lia arrived...

Playing in the park!
by xsaber
Ranked 4.33

The cacophony of children's laughter erupted around the playground. Kids were hanging from branches in the trees, playing tag in the lush, green grass, sliding down slippery dips and climbing up the mini rock climbing...

The park and the witch
by Sporty
Ranked 4.7

The villainous face looks sternly into my eyes as if she was trying to hypnotise me. Her mouth was blowing bubbles into my face I knew I just couldn’t survive from the witch who was trying to stop me from protect my a...

a weird park Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.53

running through the lush green tree blowing bubbles with my older sister having fun. while my old, parents called us for lunch. My sister and I ate faster than a hungry bear so we could start playing. I ran to my bubb...

Park Day
by littleKM
Ranked 4.48

"I want to go to the park!"Demanded the little girl to her mom. She had only been picked up from school when she started demanding out of no where.Both of them went back to their house to get changed and got some th...

Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.67

This is based on the written prompt playing in the park: The sun glared down at Ruby and her dog Ellie as they shared an half melted ice- cream. The metal play equipment threatened to melt in the scorching sun. The c...

Playing In The Park With My BFF Course package
by Brendan Chew
Ranked 4.01

A few years ago, there was a kind hearted young girl named Maddie. Maddie was no ordinary kid, she had different interest to her friends. She liked the subjects Maths and English and is addicted to reading picture sto...

Playing in the park Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 3.33

PLAN PLOT: Playing at the park until it rains P1: went to the park P2: played at the park P3: rained at the park P4: went back home I opened the car door and bubbles hit me on the chest. I ran to the park a...

Playing in the Park Course package
by Zayaan
Ranked 3.17

One beautiful day, a little gorgeous girl named Maria was playing in the park with her new bubbles that her mother bought a couple of days ago. She always had a dream to be stuck in a gigantic bubble and float up high...

Playing in the Park Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 3.0

Note: This essay is based on the word prompt It was one scorching day and my friends and I were sitting on the grass under the relaxing shade of the tree eating ice-cream. As soon as we were finished eating I sugge...

The Park
by Mal
Unranked

"Yes, we're here" Tim screamed loudly. The grass was green and thick and the breeze was cold and gentle. It was the perfect weather to play at the park. "C'mon" Timmy screamed as he dragged his friend, Tom to the slid...

Pop, pop, pop!
by Unicorn
Unranked

The fresh Spring breeze blew over the sturdy oaks. The fresh, green grass sprinkled from the morning dew seemed to be bowing down as the wind circled above it. The park had completely changed from the harsh winter mon...

The Unexpected Incident
by Harshad
Unranked

Alvin walked happily on the wet grass as he chattered continuously with his two other mates. He saw an enormous puddle in the distance and made sure he wouldn't step in it. However, his distraction in talking to his m...

Park
by Emma Ray
Unranked

The park is a place where memorise are made and endless play time with no rules awaits. Bring a mat and a salad to eat, the picnic is just the beginning of this amazing adventure. Climb up the slide and slide down...

Hours Of Fun Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

"We are going to the park!" my mum exclaimed with a cheesy smile. I groaned. The local park had been under renovation for a few months now because of old equipment. The park was always an eerie place; with rusty swing...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

start child goes to park with parent brings multiple toys middle climax starts to play with toys brings out bubble gun and a bubble hits herself in the face stings mother rushes to tap to get bubble "Aahhhh" ...

Writing Club Course package
by DRSEUSS1
Unranked

Clear liquid bubbles glistened in the sun as they rose and fell in the air. Erica sat with her baby sister, Katrina on the luscious green grass. The sun warmed their backs as they blew bubbles and watched them float i...


by Pixie
Unranked

Like ballerinas, the bubbles turned, twisted and twirled. Around and around they spun. I giggled as they tickled my cheeks, inviting me to join them in their celebration. A smile spread across my face. The bubbles wer...

Playing in the park
by anonymous
Unranked

My mum and I was in the park playing, the weather was perfect, and the sun was looking at you as if the sun was alive. The clouds were like team mascots, everything was perfect, and it was like nothing could stop me, ...

Playing in the park
by anonymous
Unranked

I was in the park playing with my mum, it was the happiest moment of my life. I saw a leaf falling, dancing gracefully in the air. There were many people in the park because of the nice sunshine. I thought the weather...


by Rakesh
Unranked

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The Theif and the park
by Sporty
Unranked

The villainous face looked sternly into my eyes. Out of all the people in the world it just had to be the person which I stole sweets from. My legs started to shake and I tried to back away from her, the persons walk ...

Bubbles! Course package
by Christian Bauer
Unranked

Every day me and my Mum go to the park at 12.00 pm. We always pack our lunch and walk over to the park which is only a 200 metre walk from our house. I love going to the park because I always have so much fun with Mum...

The park Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Unranked

The park. The funnest place in the world. The slide, the spider web, the see saw. It was the best place to go. I only go with my mum though, the only places I've been is home and the park. No school. It was really bor...

Watch out in the park!
by Potatochip
Unranked

Playing with bubbles Hurt eyes Step on twigs and hurt foot Millie and Mia always had a fun time playing in the park! Mia was sure it would be fantastic today, even better than the other days! Today, Mia and Milli...

The Lost Parent
by anonymous
Unranked

I was at the park watching a child playing with her mother. When the child went to the toilet the mother went to do something but when the child came out , her mother was still away! The child started to cry so I wen...

The Lost Parent
by anonymous
Unranked

I was at the park watching a child play with her mother. When the child went to the toilet the mother went to grab something from the car but when the child came out her mother was still away. The child started to cr...

Falling Hard Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I was going to the park with my Dan my best friend, Dan was an average-weight kid with blond hair and tanned skin. When we got there, there were plenty of fun activities to do, such as playing on the playground, ridin...

Having good time at park
by Apple
Unranked

I was in the park playing suddenly eye catching image caught me for a second. Little girl blowing bubbles and her mom cheering her up. little girl was so excited as soon as she heard the voice of her mother girl gone...

The water battle Writing Club
by AR BROS
Unranked

I came to the park one day and waited for my friends to come and play with me. We were going to have a water battle with our water guns. I saw my friends so I decided to go and hide and surprise them.My water gun was ...

Playing In The Park With my Mum Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The car stopped. I opened the door, full blast. I ran, to the... PARK!! I love the park (not going to marry it) and as i approach the swings, I jump over and into one. Mum watches me swing around. Then after a few m...

Playing In The Park With my Mum Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The car stopped. I opened the door, full blast. I ran, to the... PARK!! I love the park (not going to marry it) and as i approach the swings, I jump over and into one. Mum watches me swing around. Then after a few m...

Playing in the park Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Unranked

Every afternoon after school, my family goes to the most amazing park I have ever seen. We do this Afternoon to dinner every weekday. I love playing at the park because I love exploring all the wildlife the park has h...

Sample essay for QUESTION 06 - Playing in the park by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

"woof...park..walkies"I said wagging my tail but my human ignored me I tried harder "WOOF...PARK...WALKIES...please"she went over to the corridor "come on it's not the time to put stuff on your feet"well that's humans...

Playing in the park Course package
by Ayden Johnson
Unranked

The patterns of light on the window don't make me feel any better about going to the park today. I don't want to go to the park but my mum is insisting that I go to the park because she feels I need to meet "real peop...

playing in the park Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today i am going to the biggest park in the city. It is called the Great Park because it is massive. Its as big as 3 cornfields combined. I am going to bring my brand new Nike soccer ball so i can play with dad. F...

playing in the park Course package
by vyom
Unranked

Today i am going to the biggest park in the city. It is called the Great Park because it is massive. Its as big as 3 cornfields combined. I am going to bring my brand new Nike soccer ball so i can play with dad. F...

Sample essay for QUESTION 06 - Playing in the park by Jane Course package
by Jane
Unranked

Charlotte and her mother were playing in the park. Charlotte's mother Christina was blowing the bubbles, and Charlotte would pop the bubbles by clapping her hands. Christina was a fun and caring mother. She had black ...

Playing in the park Course package
by Nawar Mubarek
Unranked

Blowing bubbles in the park Course package
by vyom
Unranked

I always see every day a daughter and mum playing in the park. Their names are Jane and Janet. Their favourite thing to do is to blow. Bubbles from a bubble blowing machine and pop them a lot. I think it's wonderful ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 06 - Playing in the park by xueyan Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

"please, mum!" i asked. "can we please go to the park?" "it's the first sunny day for the whole month and i missed the fresh air!" But mum's reply was "but it's only the second day of janurary!" "but we can go right n...

A Day in the Park! Course package
by xueyan
Unranked

"Please, mum!" I asked. "Can we please go to the park?" "It's the first 'sunny' day for the whole month and I missed the fresh air!" But mum's reply was "But it's only the second of Janurary!" "But we can go right now...

Floating Course package
by Nala
Unranked

My little sister was jumping joyfully like a leprechaun as she tried to catch the bubbles. She had a smile that could make you happy. She was toddling around, frantically trying to burst the bubbles. Occasionally she ...

Playing in the Park Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

It was a lovely summers day in the holidays when I was feeling intensely bored. All of my friends had gone overseas and I was stuck at home doing my chores and just staring into space. Dad was in Brazil for work. Mum ...

Playing in the Park Course package
by Proshot
Unranked

It was a lovely summers day in the holidays when I was feeling intensely bored. All of my friends had gone overseas and I was stuck at home doing my chores and just staring into space. Dad was in Brazil for work. Mum ...

Playing in the park Course package
by Michelle Sim
Unranked

Plot: What I see when I play in the park B:Ask mum to play in the park M: While I play what I see E: Someone interrupt me thinking The shimmering sun that spread joyous smiles across faces lied there calmly. I...





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