Sample Essays

The Isolated Island Course package
by helen
Ranked 8.67

We gazed at the faraway island over the edge of our wooden houseboat. It was the only speck of green — or indeed, of any other colour other than blue — on the vast plain that was the ocean. We were an ocean-dwelling f...

Sample essay for QUESTION 30 - Isolated but not helpless by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 8.0

Annie lay unmoving on the pale sand, letting the tepid waves slowly lap at her toes. Heaviness infused her entire body as though her veins were pumping steel instead of blood. All the adrenaline she had merely an hour...

Stranded! Course package
by Amul
Ranked 7.57

The oceans swelled up and the water hit the edges to the boat causing a big crack. Axel was helpless as he tried to control the boat out of the storm. The ship started sinking, Axel jumped out and held onto a floating...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling2
Ranked 7.0

I watched from my home as the waves crawled gently to the shore. I had lived on this isolated island since I was a baby crab. I had seen many weird big shapes pass, these were probably the ‘ships’ my mother had told...

Isolated but not helpless Course package
by Myrah
Ranked 7.23

"Help!" I cried. After all my years of sailing, I had never gotten lost. My boat was gifted to me when I was 15 and ever since then, I was sailing into the ocean. I lived in a family of four. Me, my parents and my bab...

the dog Writing Club
by VK
Ranked 6.5

I opened my eyes. There was the sound of the shore washing up against my ears. I didn't know where my master had gone and it looked as if we had both separated when a storm struck. I looked around for him, but I could...

Course package
by Yogith Gudise
Ranked 6.24

Tom sat on the sand tipping it up and down on his hands. He saw the dark blue water splashing up and down continuously , Tom felt the relaxing wind fight his face, and the grey miniature sand rubbing against his body...

Stranded Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.14

I looked around the deserted island. All that was there was a vast expanse of sand. The wrecked wooden ship lay beside me. Even though I was the only one on the island, I could cope. So first, I wouldn't risk going in...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club
by Son Le
Ranked 5.67

I was rowing the boat to leave the island behind me. It was time for home. I could still recall yesterday when I my ship wrecked onto this island. Unfortunately, I was careless and didn’t thought about when I should e...

Washed Away Writing Club Course package
by Marissa
Ranked 5.67

Plan: P1: Went fishing and boat went out to sea P2: Boat and I washed and wake up on a island as boat breaks P3: Wakes up on island on finds boat {gets an idea on how to fix it] P4: Fixes boat and starts sailing h...

Isolated but not Helpless Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.97

Dust was gathering upon the chair; the bookshelf behind it cold and abandoned. Soft words that flowed inside its walls subsided, now no-one to recite them day by day. Looking miserably at the window sill, I caught s...

Isolated but not helpless Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 5.5

Something was pulling my rope; my heart was pounding, could this be my first catch? I yanked my rod up and with it came, nothing. Nothing could dampen my spirits; even though I missed the catch I still had the bright ...

Isolated But Not Helpless Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.36

The calm, sparkling waves washed against the barren beach. Todd, a recently washed up sailor was attempting to make a fire. he had gotten twigs leaves and washed up bits of debree and bundled them together to make a m...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club
by EBWhite3
Ranked 4.83

I woke up to find a pale sky above me. I immediately sat up. Something was not right. I was on a deserted island with a few palm trees and old rotting boats lying calmly all over the place. Surely, I should not be h...

The mysterious island Course package
by Josh Chatterjee
Ranked 4.67

I pushed onto the ground and tried to lift myself up however my body was positioned into an oddly shaped ball. I found myself surrounded by little people who were about half my size watching me. They were shuffling cl...

Writing Club
by Cosmos
Ranked 4.67

Life was so calm on the water's edge; I and my family lived on the sand. We lived on an isolated island far from the dreaded humans. From generations us turtles have feared the humans, they have caught us in nets and ...

Deserted island of hope Writing Club
by Son Le
Ranked 4.5

I was rowing the boat to leave the deserted island for home. The moon guided my way. I soon found out that nighttime was the worst time to escape. The tides were so strong that they rocked the boat, swinged me like a ...

Isolated but not Helpless Course package
by Via 😊
Ranked 5.03

The waves crashed into the shore like a raging bull. The palm trees swayed in the wind like ballet dancers at a theater. Multi-coloured fish swam through the coral is if it was an obstacle course. A spotted umbrella ...

Writing Club Course package
by Siddharth
Ranked 4.33

The storm raged and Jack’s boat thrashed back and forth in the ocean. His trip around the world was about to end. Jack clutched on the soaked edge of the boat and tried to resist the gnarly weather. Suddenly, a tidal ...

Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Ranked 4.27

I was looking at the beauty of nature as my feet sunk into the sand feeling its grainy texture. The breeze of the wind forced my eyes to shut and made my hair fly freely in the blue sky. The only sound I could hear wa...

Useful things Writing Club
by Elaria
Ranked 4.17

It was another afternoon, when I had finished my homework and got to play Minecraft. I uploaded a new world and my world was a deserted island. So I guess, the monsters at night were going to attack me, while I have...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Ranked 4.17

The ship was sinking. The big cruise ship had managed to get its hull ripped open by a sharp rock. The holidayers all flung themselves off the ship like flightless birds trying to fly. They all swam towards tropical i...

Writing Club Course package
by LEWISCARROLL3
Ranked 3.33

It all started when I woke up stranded on a island that looked a long way away from home. But hang on, I wasn't the only person on the island my two brothers and parents were there. There was also the oldest and a ver...

Isolated but not Helpless (Please Read this version!) Writing Club
by JKRowling1
Ranked 3.33

The sailors were embarking on a trip to Belgium to taste their divine chocolate. The only thing that was annoying them was the pale cloudy sky that dropped tiny droplets of water. The ship was tossing which was making...

Course package
by XavierK
Ranked 3.17

I suddenly woke up at the edge of an island shocked to see myself alone where not a sound could be heard. I tried to remember what had happened but the only thing my aching brain could remember was a huge and loud exp...

Isolated but not Helpless Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 3.0

We were floating calmly on the sea in our houseboat. I was in our balcony fishing for food while my parents were at work at the supermarket called “Supermarket at Sea.” It’s where you get all you need for a normal lif...

Stranded on an Island Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.33

It was a nice and sunny day on a big,yellow and deserted island. Nim and Jo were stuck on the island.They felt unhappy and really upset. They were just seven years old! Thinking how to get of the island Jo suggested "...

Isolated but not helpless Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

The small raft drifted across the sea, toward a small island. I looked down at my feet, staring at the island. I needed to get there because I was low on supplies and also food and water. The raft oscillated back and ...

Isolated but not helpless Course package
by Yenni
Unranked

The pandemic had struck again and we had to go into lockdown. I felt isolated and helpless, I could not go to school and also could not see my friends. I felt bored, which was unusual because at school I was less bore...

Course package
by Amul
Unranked

The oceans swelled up and the water hit the edges to the boat causing a big crack. Axel was helpless as he tried to control the boat out of the storm. The ship started sinking, Axel jumped out and held onto a floating...

The hard and scary lockdown Course package
by Jess D
Unranked

When June turned on the TV, she braced herself for what was going to soon come. On the TV, the premier walked up to the Lectern and announced that their had been twenty five thousand deaths to the encivirus. the enciv...


by Bryan
Unranked

My family decided to sail out on the high seas for a vacation so we slapped on our backpacks and were ready to leave. I saw crows on the roads perfecting the idyllic scene I hummed on the car. My brother and I were ju...

Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

We gazed at the faraway island over the edge of our wooden houseboat. It was the only speck of green — or indeed, of any other colour other than blue — on the vast plain that was the ocean. We were an ocean-dwelling f...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club
by Son Le
Unranked

I was rowing the boat to leave the island behind my back. It was time for home. I could still recall the time I spent on the island before planning this escape. Unfortunately, I was careless and didn’t thought about w...

Stranded Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

The sun was at dawn. I sat at the corner of the beach. Today was no difference. Stranded in the middle of nowhere, with basically nothing but a wrecked boathouse. I lied down on the s...

Isolated but not helpless Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling3
Unranked

“Honk! Honk!” The big cruise ship sailed across the blue ocean. With curiosity I swam towards the human infested ship. It overflowed so much with men, women and children that it made the population of China seem less....

At the concert Course package
by Eric
Unranked

Please note this essay was done for the prompt on the training videos, which shows a picture of concert goers in the mosh pit at a concert. I hope you will mark it based on that prompt. "Tickets please sir" growled...





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