Sample Essays

A Joke Gone Wrong
by Alex Ma
Ranked 8.34

Heart thumping, James nervously paced in the narrow corridor leading to the front door as he awaited the sound of the familiar ding of the doorbell. It was the first day of the Term 1 holidays, and the entire neighbor...

A Mysterious Box
by anonymous
Ranked 8.1

It was a pleasant and jolly Christmas Eve and everyone was singing and laughing, except for Jess. She had been worrying for the past week because her mum had promised her that she would get a new phone for Christmas b...

Unexpected Christmas Surprise (Take 2) Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 7.67

After a restless night, I jumped out of bed at the crack of dawn and hopped downstairs to check if Santa had dropped by. Presents of all shapes and sizes were stacked high under the Christmas tree with bulging stockin...

The Mystery Box Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Ranked 7.33

On a warm, cloudy day, sun streamed through tiny gaps in the clouds, slightly pushing the clouds away and signifying that there would be no rain. Houses bordered the lonely street in the early morning, the only vehicl...


by Gain
Ranked 7.48

"Ding Dong!" The sound of the doorbell rang. I quickly trotted down the stairs. I opened the door and asked "Hello" but there was nobody there. I looked down and to my surprise was a small parcel. I brought it in and ...

Surprise! Course package
by Tony
Ranked 7.4

Ding dong! I opened the creaky front door, but nobody was there. Glancing down at my feet, I eyed a box lurking in the darkness with no postage stamp, but rather a note that said ‘Danger-do not open’. Even though it w...

Writing Club Course package
by Sandybas
Ranked 7.0

Plan: 1. box arrives, girl doll 2. describe doll and joy felt 3. attracted to doll 4. came back to senses, threw doll away, came back when got home The ring of the doorbell echoed loudly in my ears. Groaning...

The Mysterious box
by anonymous
Ranked 7.15

As I opened the front door, I noticed a brown parcel in the shape of a box sitting on my door mat. It was a typical parcel but for some reason looking at it was giving me the creeps. All I could hear was the chirping ...

The box
by SBB
Ranked 7.04

The boy was an average person, with an average life, in an average city. One day he was sitting on the couch amusing himself by watching the weather. Suddenly a ringing sound could be heard from the door. The boy went...

The Mysterious Box Writing Club
by Cringe
Ranked 6.67

“Ding-dong”! I was so shocked to hear that sound that I almost fell off my chair. I was not expecting any visitors! I dragged myself to the door and put my eye onto the peep hole. No one was there, except for a box. C...

Sample essay for QUESTION 33 - One day, a mysterious box arrives... by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.67

the doorbell's usual humdrum sound vibrated through the house. "I'm coming!" groaned Kate pausing her favourite program and hauling herself from the comfortable couch. She snaked past the mess on the floor until she f...

Misunderstanding
by anonymous
Ranked 6.99

Ding Dong! I open the door. Sitting right in front of me is a box, but this box is no ordinary box, it's covered in cobwebs and the colour of it is black. It doesn't have bar codes or sticky tape covering it, instead ...

Lost Memories
by anonymous
Ranked 6.98

The Surprise Party
by GG
Ranked 6.93

It was a beautiful Saturday morning, the sun was smiling at me, I knew that everything was going to go awesome, nothing could destroy today. I approached downstairs, knowing that there was going to be a huge surprise ...

Christmas Troubles
by Alex.W
Ranked 6.84

Marc slowly tiptoed down the staircase, trying his best to minimise every creak he made. The Christmas tree barely illuminated the lounge room with its decrepit flashing lights. Obtaining the present in his hands, he ...

What's in the box?
by anonymous
Ranked 6.8

It was Christmas Day. Ellie sprang out of bed when the alarm clock vibrated across the room. She had set it on purpose so that she could cherish the special day. Racing out of the room, Ellie practically jumped down t...

Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Ranked 6.74

Heart thumping, Anastacia walked up and down the narrow hallway in her house. Anastacia is a shy, quiet girl. She is well liked but certainly not the most popular girl in school. As she paced her hallway, sweat starte...

Boxes Course package
by VG
Ranked 6.7

Ding! Dong! "Was that the doorbell?" I thought sadly to myself. I would have to leave my book right at the exciting part. I decided to leave it be as it couldn't be too important. Ding! Dong! The doorbell rang more in...

The Mystery Box Course package
by Donttouchmypad
Ranked 6.69

"I'll get it," I yelled, a broad grin on my face for the race to the door. I opened the door. A young, burly man stood in our doorway. He handed me a box. Mum rushed over to me, her face pulled into a huge smile. I...

Nothiville Parcel
by Horace Tan
Ranked 6.49

The box
by Ajay
Ranked 6.47

Hope Writing Club Course package
by Marissa
Ranked 6.0

Plan: P1: Girl lives in a orphanage where everyone is hungry, poor and wishes they have an education. [girl's name: Sabrina] P2: Small mysterious box arrives for the Sabrina the next day. [Friend; Alice ; wakes her...

The box Writing Club
by Caitlin
Ranked 6.0

15-year-old Roger turned his head as the doorbell rang, outside was a courier carrying a small tattered box. He squinted at the label and asked, “Does Mr. Roger Paock live here?” Roger gasped, that was his name, he st...

Writing Club Course package
by Michelle
Ranked 5.9

A tall, black figure skulks low down on the pavement, moving in between the shadows, trying to conceal himself in the dim light from any preying eyes. He is holding a box with both arms, glancing behind in case someon...

What's in the box Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 6.29

I woke up in a glorious sunny morning getting excited to see my dad coming back from a very long overseas doing work. I ran down standing straight in front of the door waiting for him to come. Getting very impatient I...

The Box with Holes
by Naomi
Ranked 6.25

"Scratch" the hairbrush tugged harshly on Lily's hair as she carelessly pulled her long hair and tied it in a messy bun. She then pulled a laptop to see a bright screen as she worked on her information report about se...

The box atthe back of the museum
by Priyann Thanujan
Ranked 6.22

Alex loved visiting the wax museum.It he went there every day, after a long tiring day at school.His imagination would fly every time he saw one of the intricate sculptures, amazing captured in wax.Even the smallest f...

One Day, A Mysterious Box Arrived
by j_head
Ranked 6.18

The scorching, blazing sunlight shone through the open antique window in my bedroom. My droopy eyelids fluttered open and I sat up and yawned. I got dressed and decided to go downstairs to start my day. Just as I was...

Mystery Box
by Oboo
Ranked 6.12

Ding dong, "who's there" I ask I open the door wondering who it could be. It's just the post man with another delivery but I can't remember buying anything. I try to think what it could possibly be but i still can't r...

Darkest Thoughts. ( Edited) Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 5.67

As I wake up to the sound of knocking on my door, I look at my golden watch, which is glowing in the sunlight of the rising sun, I see that it is only 5:00 am. I get up and put on my silky, red robe as I make my w...

One Day A Box Arrives Writing Club
by Shreya Rao
Ranked 5.67

Ding! Dong! I ran up to the door and on the door step I found a mysterious box. I was intrigued by the symbol on the top of the box. So many questions were coming up in my head. Why was the box there? Who had put it t...

A mysterious Box. 01-02/03/2017 Writing Club
by Kat
Ranked 5.67

In one normal 2-story house on one very crowded lane lived three small kids who were very obedient to their parents. Their names were Bob, Jeff and Caleb who were triplets and thought of the exact same things at the e...

The mysterious object
by anonymous
Ranked 6.09

The doorbell rung "ding dong", heavy footsteps thudded on the footpath. Harry reach for the door and there was a big box outside, Harry picked it up brought the box inside his house. Harry stood confused,what had he o...

Clown
by Choon Yong
Ranked 6.09

I purse my mouth and blow. The thin coating of dust that had gathered on the package flew off into the air causing me to sneeze vigorously and brush my thick and shaggy black hair out of the way. My hand drifts to the...

The mysterious box Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 5.33

It was a bright, sunny morning as I got out of my bed and headed down to breakfast. I could smell bacon and eggs as I was walking down the stairs. I had ate in a fast pace as I was thinking what to do. I then saw a...

The box Course package
by Alice
Ranked 5.75

Ding Dong! It is the doorbell but when I opened the door it was a rectangular box that was black with question marks all over it, I wonder what’s inside should I open it? Mum did tell me curiosity kills the cat may...

The Box with no Sender Writing Club Course package
by Akeek for K
Ranked 5.63

Monty sat in his brand new armchair. It was the only one in the world, and of course, he enjoyed it. He was also watching a movie, on his 9x9 meter 1,000,000,000,000 pixel curved TV. His hundred dollar edible gold coa...

Thumper Course package
by demontian1111
Ranked 5.53

Ben and his mother were going to the shops when she told Ben that today, he will be able to get the bunny that he always wanted. Ben's change of attitude towards shopping was from a grouching unhappiness to a surprisi...

The Unusual Box
by Joe
Ranked 5.48

It was a peaceful Halloween morning until the doorbell’s usual humdrum sound deafeningly echoed through the house. "I'm coming!" groaned Elvis, as he was hauling himself reluctantly from his bed. He walked past the ...

The Box Writing Club
by JRRTolkien2
Ranked 4.93

A neat looking package was revealed under the layers of cardboard and bubble wrap. It was the first package addressed to me–my dad ordered everything that was for me. My heart pounded rapidly, but then slowed suddenly...

The Parcel Course package
by anonymous01
Ranked 5.38

I was snug like a bug in my pleasant home as there was a heavy cloud cover that was lashing down buckets of rainwater. The grass out there was saturated with dew as the grass has transformed into damp and detrimental ...

WHEN A MYSTERIOUS BOX ARRIVES...
by Karina Chung
Ranked 4.83

plot: A box at school that says "Do Not Open" on it p1: Jenny discovers the mysterious box in the principal's office p2: Jenny decides whether or not to open the box p3: Jenny opens the box p4: Jenny finds out ...

Time travel Writing Club
by Briana Hautau
Ranked 4.73

Gabriella groaned as she looked on the calendar box for tomorrow that says “school starts back!”, Gabriella hated school ever since first grade when she stepped foot in the class, “every teacher I’s ever meet are all ...

What’s in there?
by Cooper
Ranked 5.19

There was a five years old child. His name was Tom. Tom was turning six tomorrow. Tom was very skinny and puny compared to his other classmates. That day, Tom found a present box which was wrapped and had a card sayin...

One day, a mysterious box arrives......
by Renee
Ranked 5.14

1. Bday coming up 2. MB arrives+worry 3, worry+open box 4. grandma comes - surprise Karen crossed one more day off her bright red calender. Two more days till my birthday! She thought, as her twin brother, Ken, ...

The Box Course package
by grace walker
Ranked 5.12

One typical summer afternoon, Tom was sitting on the couch doodling away on his notebook. It was his favourite hobby. He drew of monsters, patterns, tessellations, more monsters and tons of swirls on the corners of hi...

Hamsters and plans Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 5.07

"Rrrrrriiinnnnggggg" the doorbell rang. I walked outside to meet the person that was ringing at four in the morning. But there was no-one. There was only a box, a mysterious box. I took it inside and set it on the tab...

The land of 100 amazing journeys
by anonymous
Ranked 5.07

My day started off like usual, I woke up, got dressed and went out for my early morning stroll, when I saw, lying on the doorstep was a parcel. I picked it up and went inside. Carefully, I cut the tape and inside the ...

The Mysterious Box
by Mizuki
Ranked 5.06

One morning as I was sleeping the door bell rang through the mist as I crept my way to the door. "Hello there child I am Jack the postman and I have something for you. However I don't know what it is! It is probably a...

The Magnificent Surprise Course package
by tran
Ranked 5.0

Vibrant coloured balloons dominated the area of the house, a towering cake was as tall as a gargantuan skyscraper and childish kids ran around crazily. It was a surprise birthday party for Jacob and the theme of the b...

One day a mysterious box arrives...... Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 4.33

I was looking around my grandfather’s old attic for what seemed like the millionth time. It was the same with the same elegant and gold mirror, the same creaky floor the same old sticky cobwebs in the corner and the s...

The World of Boxes Course package
by helen
Ranked 4.33

"Thump!" came a noise from outside my door. "Huh?" I thought. I went outside and discovered a cardboard box had been dropped there. On it, there were several signs and labels, including "HANDLE WITH CARE", "KEEP CLOSE...

The Mysterious Box Writing Club
by AR BROS
Ranked 4.33

It was finally the school holidays and I was so excited because we could finally stay at home for a few weeks. I was at home and I was waiting for my older brother to come home from school. I was walking to the pantry...

The Mysterious Box Course package
by AndyG
Ranked 4.17

On a warm, cloudy day, I was playing on my tablet when the doorbell rang. I rushed downstairs and opened the door, there lay a box. I showed it to my mum and dad and they said that I could open it on my birthday. 1...

no wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.7

One sad day I was sitting down on my study table thinking about Camreon Smith the mighty captain. I told my mum about how I really want to watch the storm play and of corse she knew about it. She said I have ordered a...

Mysterious Box
by anonymous
Ranked 4.66

One day, when I was watching TV at home, I heard the sound “Ding Dong” from the door. It was the postman who delivered me a box. There was nothing special except for a yellow light. It was really light so I put it aw...

The Mystery Box Writing Club Course package
by Akeek
Ranked 4.0

One day a mysterious box arrived at Jeff's door. it was a brown box with no decoration on it. It was bare. Jeff's mum opened the door and saw the brown box lying innocently on the front porch. Jeff was at school at th...

One day, a mysterious box arrives....... Writing Club Course package
by Eden
Ranked 4.0

After a night of tossing and turning around my bed, I jumped off my bed and ran down the stairs. As I reached the bottom of the stairs, I could hardly contain my excitment. Our entire living room was covered with co...

Laptop Gathering Dust Writing Club
by Son Le
Ranked 4.0

I was in the shower, admiring the warm water until I heard someone knocking my door. I turned I off the shower, dry myself, get dressed and then open the door. Strangely, there was no one outside waiting for me except...

The box Writing Club
by Caitlin
Ranked 4.56

15-year-old Roger turned his head as the doorbell rang, outside was a courier carrying a small tattered box. He squinted at the label and asked, “Does Mr. Roger Paock live here?” Henry gasped, that was his name, he st...

The Box
by anonymous2008
Ranked 4.53

I walked up the stairs into the attic, dust swirling around me like a hurricane a had hit. It was a dark stormy night the sky was a coal black the moon was hidden behind the misty clouds. The room was bare, except f...

Course package
by Carolyn
Ranked 4.53

As the first ray of light hit Cherry, she yawned and stretched like a cat. She slowly opened her eyes and thought of what today was. A smile spread from ear to ear as today was her birthday and she was having a birthd...

The Box Course package
by Nithika
Ranked 4.35

“Ring, ring!” the doorbell screamed at me.I jumped of the dirty, old couch that sat in the house for many years.”Yes!” I excitedly exclaimed, in front of me stood nobody, but an huge box.The box weighed about 6kg, a s...

Mystery Package Writing Club
by Ben Soysa
Ranked 3.67

Plot: mysterious box arrives P1: waits for box P2: boxes arrives P3: someone else’s box arrives P4: opens the boxes My palms were sweating, my mind calculating. When would it come? It had been over two weeks...

Course package
by Devendra K Singh
Ranked 3.67

Emily and Anne are two lovely sisters of the Fort Family. Both of them love solving mysteries and pretend to be spies. But they didn't see the terror coming. A box, but not just any box, it is labeled as " Caution:Con...

Unexpected Christmas Surprise Course package
by Rhino N
Ranked 3.5

It all started early this morning, when I woke up at 5:00pm and rushed downstairs to see my presents, piled up high under the Christmas tree, bulging stockings were filled right up to the brim with small gifts. I scr...

Reality check
by Sam
Ranked 4.1

Tom glanced around looking for his hidden brother, "where are you Jim?" The face of his young brother popped out, "here Tom! Jim was now 9, only 3 years younger than me! Today his flannel shorts waved slightly in the...

a mysterious box 📦 Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.09

On a normal, usual day I was studying when my mum said a box is going to come soon. I was excited for it to arrive.It was like it was for me which I didn't know about yet.I thought about it where ever we went. Aft...

Goodbye Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.02

One day a mysterious box arrives. Thick ,heavy and dark brown. Secured with tight and tough tape around the middle and edge. Not one hole to be seen. I see something peep out from the bottom catching my attention. "Wh...

Treasure Hunting Course package
by helen
Ranked 3.33

My house was a hoard of treasure stories and models of pirate ships. It was wallpapered by posters for pirate movies and TV shows. My love for treasure stories was in my blood. I always dreamed of being a treasure hun...

The Mysterious Package
by anonymous
Ranked 3.92

BEEP BOOP BEEP BOOP! Jamie, my best friend, was minding his own business, his back on the couch and his eyes on his phone. I, too, had a phone, but it was a really hot day and I decided to just enjoy a Popsicle. Ever...

Mysterious Box
by Arup
Ranked 3.9

Ding! Dong! I scurried to the door waiting to see what it was. I opened the door to a big, burly man with a box in his hands. " Delivery to 58 Brunch road", he muttered monotonously. How peculiar! I thought to mysel...

One day, a mysterious box arrived...
by xsaber
Ranked 3.17

One day a mysterious box arrived in my garden while I was practicing my violin.It was attached to a deflated blood red balloon that was caught in a low branch.The parcel was dangling off a loose thread. In a jiffy, I ...

What's in the box? Writing Club
by Raje
Ranked 3.17

Everyone gets to celebrate their birthday, except me this year. I have no hope the thunder storm will recede until late night. It’s all because of this stupid rain, Dad had to cancel the party which I was counting da...

The Box
by anonymous2020-2
Ranked 3.83

"Ding!" The doorbell rang, I went to check it out. I opened the door, but that's when I saw it, the box, it was just sitting there on the doormat. It was just a normal cardboard box. It had three symbols on it, on mea...

The Mysterious Box Writing Club
by anonymous
Ranked 3.0

One fine morning, when the sun was shiny and bright, Rose woke up to the sound of her doorbell ringing. Upon learning that her parents were still in bed, she hurriedly rushed down the wooden oak stairs to the door. On...

The Box Writing Club
by VK
Ranked 3.0

I rushed to the door as the doorbell rang and felt my heart pounding in excitement as I opened the door. "Hello, is this the parcel for Master Austin Hefner?" I asked. "Yes it is! is that person you?" the deliveryman ...

Use the image below as prompt for a creative writing piece. Course package
by Aimeely
Ranked 3.47

One day, a mysterious box arrives at the front door. When the door bell rang, we opened the door to find no one there. The box was lying on the step sealed tightly with layers and layers of yellow tape. Dad carried it...

$$$Painite$$$ Course package
by demontian1111
Ranked 3.3

"Comet!" my mother called from downstairs,"It's 7:35 & time for you to go to school!" "Just in a sec!" I called back. My whole body was reluctant to move & then, I remembered that today was the last day of term & ...

Adventure with the BOX Course package
by saanvi
Ranked 2.5

As I stepped into the greenhouse, it was noon. Today was Saturday so I didn't have to work. I came over to the greenhouse so I could buy a Lily plant. Lemony( the green house owner) asked "Are you here for the parcel?...

The Mysterious Box Course package
by Harrison
Ranked 2.33

Jeff was a poor boy living in a poor family and lived in a caravan. One morning, when his mum told him to get the mail he found a small red box addressed to him.He wondered who sent it to him and what was inside? He t...

Mission Behind the mystery box
by Sujaay
Ranked 3.09

One early morning the artistic sun painted the sky blue and orange.some body rang the door bell, Max ran down stairs to answer the door, the he saw a GIGANTIC BOX! When he picked it up, the box felt lite. Max brought ...

The Mysterious Box
by hali
Ranked 3.09

It is finally here, I have been waiting for this parcel for almost 8 weeks. Now, time to see what the prize is. I brought the knife to open the box however, the thing is that the parcel would not open. I returned...

The mysterious box arrives Writing Club Course package
by Mizuki
Ranked 1.33

One morning on a sunny day the door bell rang. That's when the mysterious box arrives. So I jumped out of bed and quickly ran down the stairs. As I opened the box I saw many animals! "Something is going weird in my...

Zeus's Box
by anonymous
Ranked 2.16

Tim flew to his right lashing wildly in the air like a blind cat until his blade met flesh. That was his stratagem to stay alive in the ferocious arena. When the blade did meet flesh he would have to withstand slicing...

Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Unranked

Heart thumping, Anastacia walked up and down the narrow hallway in her house. Anastacia was a shy, quiet girl. She was well liked but certainly not the most popular girl in school. As she paced her hallway, sweat star...

Course package
by Gracie Muharam
Unranked

Heart thumping, Anastacia walked up and down her narrow hallway. Sweat started to beed on her forehead. Anastacia is a shy, quiet girl, very fragile. She had invited her friends to come over for a little get together ...

the Mysterious Box Course package
by Myrah
Unranked

I slowly walked into Grandpa's shed taking in all the sights. Many bicycles were leaning against the walls and helmets were hung on metal hangers. It was my eighteenth birthday and it was the age I was finally allowe...

The Mysterious Box Course package
by MidnightSky94
Unranked

I rushed back home from school. It was already the end of the day, and mum had promised to let me eat ice-cream when I got back home. I had a cold a couple of weeks ago, and that's partly why my mum doesn't let me eat...

The Rattling Box
by Myrah
Unranked

A girl called Agatha had longed for a puppy all her life. But her parent's couldn't afford one. They had just moved from Africa to Australia and they were still looking for a job. Agatha lived in a crummy apartment du...


by Bryan
Unranked

I skipped around the house humming joyfully; my parents had ordered me a phone. I waited for the sound of the doorbell for and the sound never rang through the door. Even when I studied I kept an eye on the door in c...

The Mysterious Box... Course package
by VG
Unranked

"Jo!" someone yelled, "See you next term!" "Bye Amy!" Jo called back to her friend, before rushing into an awaiting car, her long dark hair swishing behind her. She sunk into the comfy seats of her mother's car and al...

The Box... Course package
by VG
Unranked

My name is Diana and I live in an ordinary house, on an ordinary street, in an ordinary town. Nothing ever happens around here, in fact, the most exciting thing that has happened in my life was the time my parents acc...

The Delivery
by Harshad
Unranked

"DRRRRIIIING!" the doorbell rang loudly. Phil reluctantly climbed out of his comfortable mattress and trudged sleepily towards the front door. The tile flooring he was walking on squeaked ear-piercingly but Phil did n...

The Mysterious Box Course package
by Joanne
Unranked

I was playing on my gaming console and waiting for my Mum to answer my text. She usually arrives at four o’ clock but its already six thirty!I thought to myself.Since I was hungry, I went to the stove and made some in...

One Day a mysterious box arrives at my front door........
by Claudia
Unranked

"Wake up!" mum yelled. I stretched out of bed and then stood up and walked downstairs to eat breakfast then "'SLICE!" blood was dripping down all over the floor..........................................................…

The Mysterious Box Writing Club
by Caitlin
Unranked

John Steam, everyone knew him as Snail Boy. This nickname brought on him by the Town folk, after saving a Snail from being stepped on by Camron Gem, the rich playboy in the country. After that day, John was the town’s...

The box
by nikky
Unranked

“Ring, ring!” the doorbell screamed at me.I jumped of the dirty, old couch that sat in the house for many years.”Yes!” I excitedly exclaimed, in front of me stood nobody, but an huge box.The box weighed about 6kg, a s...

The Box
by nikky
Unranked

“Ring, ring!” the doorbell screamed at me.I jumped of the dirty, old couch that sat in the house for many years.”Yes!” I excitedly exclaimed, in front of me stood nobody, but an huge box.The box weighed about 6 kg...

Course package
by Bhavi
Unranked

" Yay, today is my birthday" I jumped of my bed and did a big back flip then I landed on my feat like a ninja. It was awesome. Then I walked down stairs whistling my favorite tune hoping that my mum would come up to m...

The Mysterious Box! Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

I knew she wasn't going to be gone for long, my mother's shopping trips were always a snappy five minutes. So if I was going to open that mysterious box that lay in front of me; the one my mother specifically told me ...

One Day, a Mysterious Box Appears
by anonymous
Unranked

A box. Lying there. Looking at me. It was crying out to me. I didn't order a box! I pick it up, the box it light. I throw it up to hear anything. Nothing. I decide to call my friend, Sally. "What?" She asks in a sleep...

Mysterious Box
by Arup
Unranked

Ding! Dong! I scurried to the door waiting to see what it was. I opened the door to a burly big man witha box in his hands " Delivery to 58 brunch road", he muttered monotonously. How peculiar I thought to myself wi...

What?! Course package
by demontian1111
Unranked

I opened the box, but found nothing inside, ...

Test essay 123
by Exam Success
Unranked

"Comet!" my mother called from downstairs,"It's 7:35 & time for you to go to school!" "Just in a sec!" I called back. My whole body was reluctant to move & then, I remembered that today was the last day of term &...

The Parcel GAYATRI Course package
by anonymous
Unranked

bored knock on door box study carefully open-new game been waiting I call the post office again. But I got the same answer, "We're sorry Miss Jones, but there has not been a single package to you in the last 3 w...

The mysterious b
by Ponnu1234
Unranked

It was a dark and stormy evening, Violet was looking out side the window... “ oh, what a boring day” she thought. Suddenly, somebody was knocking on the door vigorously. Violet jumped to her feet with terror and quick...

One day, a mysterious box arrived...
by xsaber
Unranked

One day a mysterious box arrived in my garden while I was practicing my violin.It was attached to a deflated blood red balloon that was caught in a low branch.The parcel was dangling off a loose thread. In a jiffy, I ...

The Mystery Box... Writing Club
by anonymous
Unranked

Popcorn......check, blanket.....check, T.V on......check. I was all set to watch the next episode of my favourite series 'Stuck in the middle'. I made sure that I had everything set to go and that I didn't have to get...

Darkest Thoughts. Writing Club
by anonymous
Unranked

As I wake up to the sound of knocking on my door, I look at my golden watch, which is glowing in the sunlight of the rising sun, I see that it is only 5:00 am. I get up and put on my silky, red robe as I make my w...

The Mystery Box Writing Club Course package
by Ian
Unranked

On a warm, cloudy day, sun streamed through tiny gaps in the clouds, slightly pushing the clouds away and signifying that there would be no rain. Houses bordered the lonely street in the early morning, the only vehicl...

Course package
by XavierK
Unranked

Ding, dong, ding, dong someone was constantly ringing the doorbell while I was feeding my annoying four year old brother. Ding dong the ringing happened again for the next few minutes until I swung the door open and f...

the mystery of the secret box Course package
by Shumaila
Unranked

"DING DONG."The doorbell's usual sound vibrated through the house."I am coming" groaned Jane. She paused her favorite video game and tugged herself off the comfy couch. She plodded to the door and opened but no one se...

Mystery or Not? Course package
by fufz
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One day a box arrives at my front door, and I'm wondering what that box is. Inside the box I find another box, which inside that is another box, and another and another and another! All I find inside boxes are more bo...

Treasure Hunting Course package
by helen
Unranked

My house was a hoard of treasure stories and models of pirate ships. It was wallpapered by posters for pirate movies and TV shows. My love for treasure stories was in my blood. I always dreamed of being a treasure hun...





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