Sample Essays

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - The new student by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 7.67

(IMPROVED VERSION) She seemed harmless at first waltzing into the class like she belonged there. Flashing everyone pearly smiles and angelic giggles. It was virtually impossible to not admire her in one way or another...

Meeting Valentine Course package
by Huldah
Ranked 7.88

It was a warm summer day, and I was late for class. I was unpacking my bag so fast dropping multiple things and having to turn back to pick them up, when I finally made it to my class I was surprised to find a new kid...

Bella Frozensky - My best friend! Course package
by Praveen
Ranked 7.43

This is the story of Bella Frozensky. When she had first arrived to Starwood Primary School, she was teased by many people because of her German accent. Bella was a shy girl and felt humiliated when anyone would call ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - The new student by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.67

The slight girl sat in a hunched position at the corner of the room her placid face overshadowed by her wild mane of mousy hair. She winced when the teacher called her up to introduce herself for she was timid and des...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Ranked 6.71

Staring up at the monster that had been assigned as my buddy for the year sent shivers down my spine. He held out his green hand to greet me with a handshake. Closing my eyes in disgust, I shook it. Opening them, I st...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - The new student by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Ranked 6.0

She seemed harmless at first, waltzing into the classroom like she belonged there. Her blond ringlets bobbing up and down as she skipped to her seat with an innocent smile. The class passed quickly with her around. S...

Meeting Valentine Course package
by Huldah
Ranked 6.33

It was a warm spring morning, and I was in my room dressing for another boring day at my school. Out of nowhere my mum barged into my room waving my lunchbox wildly in her hand for a few seconds until she tossed it on...

A true, new friend
by ANA
Ranked 5.33

Her midnight blue streaks painted in her jet black hair was contrasting her refulgent green eyes which were fixated on me. There was an entire class to look at, but her gaze was set on me. Grace quickly looked down an...

Blueberry perfume. Course package
by anonymous
Ranked 4.67

Confidently flicking her brown hair back, it was amazing how she waltzed into the classroom, leaving traces of blueberry perfume which I knew was poison as that is was we have been studying about in Science. "Welcome,...

Writing Club Course package
by Lachlan
Ranked 4.33

My class gathered around in a circle on the floor away from the long rows of tables. "Class! We have a new student here today," my boring teacher exclaimed as he pointed at a girl next to me. She had bedraggled brown ...

The New Student Course package
by Shreyas Manoj
Ranked 3.83

There he came, the boy with black hair, hazel eyes and a red shirt and with a book in one hand and the pencil in the other. “ Oh Hello there William welcome to 5S, my name is Ms Simmons,” said my teacher. “ Hello Ms S...

The new guy Course package
by Khang Vo
Ranked 3.0

Ding-ding-ding! The start bell went. I hastily grabbed my books from my locker for my next class. School was normal today. Nothing changed. I went into to clas and sat next to Moosa, a short and dark skinned boy with ...

The New Student Course package
by Oshin
Unranked

"Jacob! Wake up! Class is no place to sleep!" I open my drowsily to the sound of my teacher waving in front of my face in frustration. I quickly try to sit up and compose myself, she heads back to the front. Phew, goo...

The new student
by KoalaLime
Unranked

plan: -there is a boy at anna's school -she has a weird feeling about him -dresses old fashioned, pale, greasy dark hair and fanglike teeth -doesn't eat garlic -attracted to blood -stays in shade -explains ever...

Writing Club Course package
by Joshua Lakes
Unranked

at school new guy walks in sits next to me im scared, makes friends…

The student who lacked presence
by baba abba
Unranked

It was a regular day at school. That was until a boy came into the classroom with our teacher. The boy had light blue hair, big eyes that were as blue as his hair was, he was shorter than i am,but there was something ...

Small opening
by Suzeee
Unranked

It was a strangely weird environment. Something I wasn’t quite used to.However I suppose change is good, well atleast that’s what my mum alluded me to believe the night before the “big day”. Scared and afraid, I dragg...

New friend
by Dashiell
Unranked

I know how it feels I have been in that situation before standing in the front of the class while the teacher introduces you as the new kid, for the first week, he will be known and will be called the new kid. The new...

The new student
by Jazzy
Unranked

She nervously walked into the classroom, trying her hardest not to look anyone directly in the eye as she stood at the front. Everyone gawped at her as if they had never seen a girl in their lives or like she had a pi...

A true, new friend
by ANA
Unranked

Her midnight blue streaks painted in her jet black hair was contrasting her refulgent green eyes which were fixated on me. There was an entire class to look at, but her gaze was set on me. Grace quickly looked down an...

A true, new friend
by ANA
Unranked

Her midnight blue streaks painted in her jet black hair was contrasting her refulgent green eyes which were fixated on me. There was an entire class to look at, but her gaze was set on me. Grace quickly looked down an...

The new student
by Kash
Unranked

Todays is the first day of Year 8 but it feels the same as it was in Year 7, infact we have a new student in our new class. I don't get it out of a variety of school she had to choose this school. And out of all the...

Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

A hush rippled through the class as Mary entered. Her beauty was intimidating like a glinting knife. Hair thick enough to strangle someone and eyes big enough to drown in. She slipped in amongst the popular girls seam...

Allie
by Jean Williams
Unranked

She looked like a harmless student. The first day of school, before I can even register what was going on, she had already snuggled herself within the midst of the popular people. Pink hair, pink cashmere scarf, pink ...

The New Student (That's Me!)
by teejnar
Unranked

'Hello 8-1! This is your new classmate, Ava. Please not that in fact, she is really shy so please, don't make her feel uncomfortable in any way. Now I have some business to take care of so... Please excuse me!' The l...

The New Student *of course*
by Xiaopin
Unranked

As I looked around the hall, I noticed that people were making way for someone, someone I had not seen or met before. I could tell almost instantly that he was the new student. He had dark skin, hardly any hair and ke...


by Jean Williams
Unranked

It's strange, how anyone would want to move to a school like mine. Everyone of us tried to escape out of that depressing prison as soon as possible, and yet, someone transferred to Weeping Willows. I saw her standing ...

The New Guy Course package
by Chanula
Unranked

I was sitting in English watching as Mr Turing was reading his notes waiting for the bell to ring. It was so silent, you can easily hear the fan creaking, giving me a headache. Finally, after what seemed to be an eter...

The New Student Writing Club Course package
by JKRowling4
Unranked

And there she came, the new student. She took a step inside the class, her body shivering and her teeth cluttering. She saw little groups of friends, some talking or some taking selfies. She couldn't find any place to...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - The new student by LEWISCARROLL1 Writing Club Course package
by Sayori
Unranked

Mira entered the class room with a flurry "I'm sorry I'm late miss"she smiled "well hello "said Mira totally cool with talking in front of the whole class the teacher looked taken back for all her years of teaching s...


by anonymous
Unranked

He looked like the most malevolent kid I have ever seen. Boogers smeared across his face and frizzly brown hair that had a lot of dandruff, as if he had a bottle of white powder poured onto his head. Everywhere he goe...

The new student
by anonymous
Unranked

Plan When people heard about her When she sat next to the popular girls When I found out I had the same timetable as her When I told her my name Essay Walking down the hallway all you could hear people talk abou...

The New Student
by sam
Unranked

The new student entered in the class and the class was breath taken, the whole class but me. She was so pretty, she had beautiful teeth, lovely long,shiny, brown hair, beautiful smile, sharp nose, rose cheeks, attract...

Games On
by firdavis
Unranked

The other day I was staring at the fields of green outside while our teacher was getting her materials ready. The other students were talking about what they did on their weekends like usual, some said they just staye...

Being The New Girl Course package
by Niya
Unranked

Plan - new student - scared of others - makes friends Natalie looked down at her shoes, hiding the bright red patches on her face and neck from the rest of the class. She had been dreading this moment all morning. ...

Sample essay for QUESTION 10 - The new student by Sandybas Writing Club Course package
by Sandybas
Unranked

Stepping outside the car, I craned my neck up to look at the huge gates. A wave of eerie calm washed over me. Waving a last goodbye to my mum, I made my way inside the gates, feet clacking on the ground. Moving from t...





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