QUESTION 01 - I had finally got it
Write a creative piece to the following prompt: I had finally got it.
Plot: Going onto the grand finals for soccer
P1: James is happy because there's only one minute until it starts
P2: Opponents start cheating
P3: Opponent steps on the goalkeeper's hand
P4: James' team wins
There was no one in the world that was more happier than James. He had brought his team from the bottom of the ladder to the top. His team, South Eagles F.C, was not a very good team until he had joined. James made his team win all the matches they played. He wanted to do it again.
The match started and the opponents, South Star F.C. They got the ball and run up through the middle. Sam took the ball off one of the opponents but as soon as he started running another player came from be hind and slid. Sam tripped and lost the ball. Every one on South Eagles F.C kew that the opponents were cheating but they also knew that if they cheated, it wouldn't help them either.
The opponent ran with the ball through the side as fast as a speeding bullet. Another opponent ran up to the goalkeeper and stomped on his hand with the studs . Jack screamed louder than an angry elephant. Jack coped with pain and kept on going. Now they were really angry. James finally had the ball and took it up the field as fast as the speed of light.He flicked it over his head and belted as hard as a crocodile's bite into the goal.
They had finally done it, they had finally won the grand finals. At the end of the game the South Eagles F.C got a large trophy and James got the man of the match. Every player in South Star F.C got banned because of their cheating. At the end of the day every one was really happy, especially James.
submitted 7 months ago
Total score: 5.62 / 10Based on this score, we consider this essay to be not competitive for the exam.
Sentences with sufficient word usage - avoiding blunt sentences - 2.0 / 10