The discovery at the beach.
by JRRTolkien3

P1: finds a glass bottle with a map.
P2: decides to show it to grandpa
P3: finds out what the map says
P4: finds the treasure

One moment the hot sand bit my ankles as I stood on the shore, the next, the cool wat…


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