The sandcastle
by
Mizuki
Mizuki
Plot: Making sand castles but it rains
P1: Went to the beach with mum
P2: made the biggest castle
P3: Rains and sandcastle wrecked
P4: Go home
WRITING
On the way to the beach I saw eagles swooping above us. I saw…
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