Last (Fourth Draft)
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Zayed
Zayed
P1: Get invitation to international swim race [tone: excited]
P2: Not practicing [tone: overconfident]
P3: Competing with opponents [competitive]
P4: Finding out I came last [tone: embarrassed]
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